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~.. Aarti bimar hai ........ - 8th January 2009, 06:51 AM

dharti sari ukhdi ukhdi
ambar poora bezaar hai
subah jukham sham ko khansi
raat ko bukhaar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..

choti choti sanso mai
karti baten badi badi
neend se katti kar baithi
khab se ankhe bhari bhari
palak palak rista ansu
boond boond bhigta rukhsar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..

main thodi buri tum jayda bhale ho
bas ek hi janm ke liye mile ho
usko apna sindoor banau
tum jis mitti mai pale ho
baki ke janm tumhara usse karaar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..

mera kaha kab manti hai
pora karti hai jo thanti hai
use aur thand lag jayegi
pani mai jate hi janti hai
khud se payara rasoi ka kaorbar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..

kalayee ka chooda gumsum gumsum
bindi ki dhanak bhi madhyam madhyam
chand ko bhi iska bukhar laga
noor bhi kal se uska kam kam
kya hoga mareej woh theek
janumanu jiska *teemardar hai
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8th January 2009, 10:12 AM

Janumanu jee:

namaste!!

aapkii yeh naZm dil ko chhu gayii.. aapne jo apni patni ke liye dil meiN base huye ehsaasoN ko lafzoN meiN peSh kiyaa haii wo sach meN qaabil-e-taareef haii .. naZm meiN aapke dil meiN uNke liye jo pyaar haii wo lafzoN ke zar'iiYe saaf saaf diKhA'ii de raha haii..! mujhe bahot hi KhuShii hotee hai jab maiN seedhe dil se nikle huye lafzoN ko paRhtaa huuN.. aaj aapne yeh mauqaa diyaa mujhe maiN aapkaa ShuKraGuzaar huuN..! YuuNhi liKhate raheN aur mehfil ko rauShan karte raheN aage bhee apni naGhz koShiShoN ke zar'iiye... daad!!

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8th January 2009, 10:34 AM

Bahut accha likha hai aapne janumanu jee.....dil ko chu gayi aapki ye nazm....har lafz me apni patni ke liye pyaar chalak raha hai,hamari dua hai ke aap dono ka pyar hamesha ayse hi qayam rahe...khuda aap dono ke pyar ko, buri nazar se bachai...

hamesha khush rahiye..

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janumanu ji aapka nuzm bahot achha laga hume ....Humesha khus rahiye ...

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8th January 2009, 05:05 PM

Mast likha hai yaar. Awesome.

Khuda se yahi dua hai meri, bas itna uska upkar ho jaye
Tumhare pyare se gulshan me, fir se kayam bahar ho jaaye
Meri har khushi tumhari, har gam tumhare mere ho.n
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Janumanu jee:

namaste!!

aapkii yeh naZm dil ko chhu gayii.. aapne jo apni patni ke liye dil meiN base huye ehsaasoN ko lafzoN meiN peSh kiyaa haii wo sach meN qaabil-e-taareef haii .. naZm meiN aapke dil meiN uNke liye jo pyaar haii wo lafzoN ke zar'iiYe saaf saaf diKhA'ii de raha haii..! mujhe bahot hi KhuShii hotee hai jab maiN seedhe dil se nikle huye lafzoN ko paRhtaa huuN.. aaj aapne yeh mauqaa diyaa mujhe maiN aapkaa ShuKraGuzaar huuN..! YuuNhi liKhate raheN aur mehfil ko rauShan karte raheN aage bhee apni naGhz koShiShoN ke zar'iiye... daad!!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa khayaal rakheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Mast likha hai yaar. Awesome.

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janu manu jiii............aapki yeh nazm maine kai baar padi aur har baar pad kar lout gaye mere paas lafz nahi haiN aapki poetry aur ahsaaso.n ke tareef karne ke liye....! bahgwaan aap dono ki jodi banaye rakhe


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Well mujhe ab bhi samjh ni aaya....

waise b reputation se apna kya talluk

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wow..nahi ye nahi kah sakti kisi ki bimari par..
lekin nazm ke liahz se bakai me acchi hai..

mera kaha kab manti hai
pora karti hai jo thanti hai
use aur thand lag jayegi
pani mai jate hi janti hai
khud se payara rasoi ka kaorbar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..

sach hai..kuch bhi ho..rasoi to jana hi jana hai..

take care..

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Agar kabhi..Gujarta dekho..kya Tum Mujhe..bulaoge..
Shayad Nahi..
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Kiuki..Tum Mere..koi Nahi..
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mera kaha kab manti hai
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use aur thand lag jayegi
pani mai jate hi janti hai
khud se payara rasoi ka kaorbar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..

sach hai..kuch bhi ho..rasoi to jana hi jana hai..

take care..

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bahut khoob janumanu jiiii....behtarin ehsaas hai....muje reply karne me bahut der ho gayi,i hope ab tak to aap ki AARTI thik bhi ho gfayi hogi...hai na???.......

Haan ji ab theek hain aapki dua se


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Janumanu Ji,

Achcha likha hai,

May God give her health soon

With best wishes

Rashid

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dharti sari ukhdi ukhdi
ambar poora bezaar hai
subah jukham sham ko khansi
raat ko bukhaar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..

choti choti sanso mai
karti baten badi badi
neend se katti kar baithi
khab se ankhe bhari bhari
palak palak rista ansu
boond boond bhigta rukhsar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..

main thodi buri tum jayda bhale ho
bas ek hi janm ke liye mile ho
usko apna sindoor banau
tum jis mitti mai pale ho
baki ke janm tumhara usse karaar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..

mera kaha kab manti hai
pora karti hai jo thanti hai
use aur thand lag jayegi
pani mai jate hi janti hai
khud se payara rasoi ka kaorbar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..

kalayee ka chooda gumsum gumsum
bindi ki dhanak bhi madhyam madhyam
chand ko bhi iska bukhar laga
noor bhi kal se uska kam kam
kya hoga mareej woh theek
janumanu jiska *teemardar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..


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really good creation from u....jaanu maanu..aarti ji jaldi thik ho jayegi..god bless u and aarti ji.... best wishes....
   
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Hi Jaanumaanu,

Aapke poem mei pyar aur dard dono bahot saaf mehsoos hota hai, its really very touching, it shows very clearly tht ur wife is ur inspiration............Praying to GOD for ur wife to get wel soon.........KEEP IT UP
   
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Janumanu Ji,

Achcha likha hai,

May God give her health soon

With best wishes

Rashid

shukriyaa rashid

padhne ke liye

also thanx for wish
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really good creation from u....jaanu maanu..aarti ji jaldi thik ho jayegi..god bless u and aarti ji.... best wishes....
Thanx dear for reading ....

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Fir se aarti bimaar hai ......................
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28th June 2010, 11:55 AM

Don't worry jaanumaanu ji.....

pehle ki tarah 'fir se' aarti ji theek ho jaayengi....

Bass aap apni 'teemardaari' me kasar na chhoriyega

God bless you 'both' ( or may be three or fours till now )




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Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
   
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Vikas Ji......mujhe maalum hai ...... aaj kal aarti Ji beemaar hai......aur unka iilaaz chal raha hai........aap yeh nazm sunaakar unhe aur taqleef na de......jo kal se unohne dawaa shuru ki hai....usse woh jald theek ho jayegi.....beemaari aati toh bahut jaldi hai.....theek hone me thoda waqt leti hai........aise dil chhota naa kare.....aarti ji dekhna kal parsoN tak ekdam swasth ho jayengi....aisa mera vishwaas hai......aur prabhu se duaa bhi hai.....haari beemari toh aati rehti hai......jaise aati hai ...vaise chali bhi jaati.....

Aarti ji....aapse vishesh taur par keh raha hu......aap bilkul na ghabaraayeN ....kuch nahi hua hai... thodi kamzori hai.....aap time se dawaa leti rahe.....kal parson tak ekdam theek ho jayengi...

haa ......vikas ji....aapki rachna ........bataati hai.....aap aarti se kitna gehraa prem karte hai.....yeh mohabbat humesha aise hi barqaraar rahen....

dil se likhi iss rachna ko dil se daad...... !

Mera aap dono se nivedan hai.....koi fikR naa kare.... !

aap unka theek se khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
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Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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