Haq Wafa Ka Jo Hum Jatane Lage

[Ikrama]

Haq wafa ka jo hum jatane lage,Ap kuch keh k muskurane lage,Jeena padega furqat me wo agar himmat azmane lage,Dar hai meri zubaan na khul jaye Ab wo baatein bahot banane lage,Jaan bachti nazar nahi aati Gair ulfath bahot jatane lage,Tumko karna padega uzr_e_jafa,Hum agar dard e dil sunane lage,Bahot mushkil hai siva_e_tasleem Hum bhi Aakhir ko jee churane lage,waqt_e_rukhsat tha sakht magar Hum bhi baithe the jab wo jaane lage

[naresh_mehra110]

Haq wafa ka jo hum jatane lage,
Ap kuch keh k muskurane lage,
Jeena padega furqat me
wo agar himmat azmane lage,
Dar hai meri zubaan na khul jaye
Ab wo baatein bahot banane lage,
Jaan bachti nazar nahi aati
Gair ulfath bahot jatane lage,
Tumko karna padega uzr_e_jafa,
Hum agar dard e dil sunane lage,
Bahot mushkil hai siva_e_tasleem
Hum bhi Aakhir ko jee churane lage,
waqt_e_rukhsat tha sakht magar
Hum bhi baithe the jab wo jaane lage

Sabse pehle .....aapka SDC me Swaagat hai.....aapki nazm ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat hai......kahi meetha meetha sa dard chhoD jaate hai....dil se daad hazir hai....qubuul farmaayen....

haa......jis tartiib se maine aapki nazm ki panktiya ki hai.....aise lines toDke .....aage se post kiya ki jiye.....isse padhne me suvidhaa hoti hai....aur aise hi likhne ki vidhi bhi hai.......

aapki nazm padhke pata chalta hai....aapme likhne ki shamtaa acchi hai.....aage aapse aur bhi behtaar nazm aur ghazal hume yaha padhne ko milengi....yunhi likhte rahen....aur bazm ki raunak badhaate rahen....khush rahen

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....

[ISHK EK IBADAT]

ikrama jee
radhe radhe

ahsaas sundar hai

[ABABBU]

[QUOTE=Ikrama;397752]Haq wafa ka jo hum jatane lage,Ap kuch keh k muskurane lage,Jeena padega furqat me wo agar himmat azmane lage,Dar hai meri zubaan na khul jaye Ab wo baatein bahot banane lage,Jaan bachti nazar nahi aati Gair ulfath bahot jatane lage,Tumko karna padega uzr_e_jafa,Hum agar dard e dil sunane lage,Bahot mushkil hai siva_e_tasleem Hum bhi Aakhir ko jee churane lage,waqt_e_rukhsat tha sakht magar Hum bhi baithe the jab wo jaane lage

welcome ti SDC janab..
aap bahut bahut bahut acha likhte hai.. so keep writing..

[zainy]

Originally Posted by Ikrama

Haq wafa ka jo hum jatane lage,Ap kuch keh k muskurane lage,Jeena padega furqat me wo agar himmat azmane lage,Dar hai meri zubaan na khul jaye Ab wo baatein bahot banane lage,Jaan bachti nazar nahi aati Gair ulfath bahot jatane lage,Tumko karna padega uzr_e_jafa,Hum agar dard e dil sunane lage,Bahot mushkil hai siva_e_tasleem Hum bhi Aakhir ko jee churane lage,waqt_e_rukhsat tha sakht magar Hum bhi baithe the jab wo jaane lage

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[Taish]

ikrama sahab ab kam se kam Ghulam Ali ji ki gayi hui sabse umda ghazaloN ko to paste mat karo bhai......!!