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Everyone's a Ghalib in his own way ( English ghazal ) - 10th April 2013, 05:09 PM

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we see ghalib as poet , but he was a master
limited is our view , we often miss the factor
as whatever he wrote , reflected reality
so calling him just poet is austerity

Ghazal


Gives me impediments but to say
Everyone's a ghalib in his own way

Because life is tough as poetry
we should rhyme with it each night and day

Intentions and "harfs" keep ruling us
slightest variance causes dismay

Where youth is like the "husn-e-gazal"
that shapes our life or leaves us astray

Relations akin words have two sides
they may be pleasing or shaded grey

"Rohit " every good gazal has to end
and death is the "last act" of life's play !
   
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12th April 2013, 07:28 PM

I really enjoyed reading each line of this... it's a new lesson for us.. english poem with urdu words.. and seriously u proved that u are versatile, unique, and a true poet.. who can write anything or everything ... in any form ..




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13th April 2013, 06:05 AM

Dear Rohit,

Beautiful mixture of urdu and english and craftly worded...enjoyed the rhythm too.

"Rohit " every good gazal has to end
and death is the "last act" of life's play !

very 2 nice .....

Sholay mein Asrani says : Hum angrezon ke zamane ke Jailor hain.

Mujhe lagata hai ki aap angrezon ke zamane ke shayar hain , jinhone chacha Ghalib ki urdu
class bhi attend kar rakhi hai..

good work . Keep it up.

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khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
   
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13th April 2013, 08:58 PM

humdum sahab aapka bahut bahut shukriya , padhne aur saraahne k liye ........ zainy ji aapka bhi bahut bahut shukraguzaar hu.
   
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