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4th June 2015, 03:37 PM
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Khoob sher share kiya madhu ji....
Apne dil ke kuch ehsaas aaj is tarah hai
Main bhi wahin hoon voh bhi wahiN haiN
paaon tale mitti badal si gayi haiN
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Waaah! Waaah! kya khoob ehsaas hain mast ji.....bahut shaandar.
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Yun Labon Ko Phir Se Chu Lo, Ke ban Jaaye Raag Malhaar
Mehakne Lage Har Patta-2, Ban Jaaye Patjhad Bahaar
-Masti
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Waaah di....kya khoob roomani sher share kiya hai aapne sarika ka likha hua..bahut khoob.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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5th June 2015, 11:33 AM
"suna hai tumhari aik nazar se qtal hote hai log,
aik nazar hame bhi dekh lo, ki zindgi acchi nahi lagti"
-nm
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5th June 2015, 12:56 PM
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"suna hai tumhari aik nazar se qtal hote hai log,
aik nazar hame bhi dekh lo, ki zindgi acchi nahi lagti"
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waah waha waaahhhh kyaakhoob qatl kiyaa hai is sher ne mazaaaa aa gayaa...... waahh subhaan allah.......
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5th June 2015, 01:03 PM
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"suna hai tumhari aik nazar se qtal hote hai log,
aik nazar hame bhi dekh lo, ki zindgi acchi nahi lagti"
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Waaaaaaah..dii wakai qatl ho gaye ham bhi sher padh kar.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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5th June 2015, 01:12 PM
aapka behad sukriya Shaad bhai or Sunita ji..
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mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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5th June 2015, 01:13 PM
waaaahhh bahut khub ek se bhad kar ek sher kahe aap sabhi ne.. padh ke dil kush ho gaya bahut..
aaj ka sher..
आईने के सामने खड़े होकर खुद से माफ़ी मांग ली मैंने,
सबसे ज़्यादा खुद का ही दिल दुखाया है औरों को खुश करने में..
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6th June 2015, 10:10 AM
Aslam wo keh rha hai apne dard mujhko de
Dar bhi raha hu.n aur diye jar aha hun mein
-noor_noor(Aslam ji)
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Waaaaaahhh! Tabaah jii aur sunita dii bahut khoob sher share kiye aap dono ne....
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Baat karni mujhe mushkil kabhi aisi to na thi..
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Tum aaye ho tumhe bhi aazma ke dekh leta hoon.
tumhare sath bhi kuch door jake dekh leta hoon.
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9th June 2015, 09:26 AM
muddat huii ke dil meraa dha.Dkaa bhii nahi hai,
shaayad ise bhii teriii zaruurat nahii rahee......!!
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9th June 2015, 09:51 AM
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muddat huii ke dil meraa dha.Dkaa bhii nahi hai,
shaayad ise bhii teriii zaruurat nahii rahee......!!
Shaad...
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Wah Wah Shaad bhai
Behad khoob sher hua hai janaab. kamaal bas kamaal
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muddat huii ke dil meraa dha.Dkaa bhii nahi hai,
shaayad ise bhii teriii zaruurat nahii rahee......!!
Shaad...
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Kya baat shaad ji....kya khoob sher kaha hai..waaahhhh...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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9th June 2015, 11:11 AM
"tumne to rula kar hi rakh diya eh zindgi,
ja kar pooch meri Maa se kitne laadley thy ham"
-nm
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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9th June 2015, 08:49 PM
waah SuNita ji, Shaad bhai, or Madhu ji bahut ache sher pesh kiye apne..
har ek sher apne aap m kimti hai
aaj ka sher..
Talash sirf sukunn ki hoti hai,
naam rishtey ka chahe kuch bhi ho..
तलाश सिर्फ सुकून की होती हैं,
नाम रिश्ते का चाहें कुछ भी हो..
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9th June 2015, 10:12 PM
Dil waloN ki mehfil me hai kisko sukooN hasil,
K dil aur sukooN ki humne kabhi bante nahi dekhi
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10th June 2015, 07:52 AM
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Dil waloN ki mehfil me hai kisko sukooN hasil,
K dil aur sukooN ki humne kabhi bante nahi dekhi
Bhushan joshi
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Wah Bhushan bhai kya umdaa sher likh diya hai aapne,ispar to mashaallah poori nazm/ghazal honi chahiye
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10th June 2015, 07:56 AM
Doston,
Aaj ka sher.....
इन हौंसले को संभालो यह बिगड़ जाएंगे
यह इश्क़ है इससे हम बाज़ कहा आएंगे
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10th June 2015, 08:20 AM
Waaaaaaaahhhhh....kya khoob sher kahe bhushan ji aur mast ji.....bahut khoob!!
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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10th June 2015, 09:40 AM
bahut bahut shukrguzaar hoon aap sabkaa jo aapne mere sher ko pasand kiyaa.......
aur aage badhte hi jaise nazar gayee Bhushan ji aur mast bhai ke sher pe to yaqaayaq hi waahhhh nikal gaya...... bahut khoob sher hue hain.. likhte arhiyee
Shaad....
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ek mausam zindagee kaa aapke sang kyaa huaa,
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Shaad....
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10th June 2015, 09:54 AM
Mast bhai, Sameer bhai aur Madhu ji....aap sab ki housala afazai ka tahe sil se shukriya....
Mast ji bohot hi joshila sher likha aapne....aur Sameer bhai mausam jaroor badlega
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10th June 2015, 05:03 PM
Gum-e-ulfat mein zindagi bitaye tw kaise ,
Teri chahat mein zindagi bitaye tw kaise,
Tum khti ho k bhool jao mujhe,
Tum hi btao teri yaad ko seene se mitaye tw kaise....
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Ham bhi qayel haiN wafa-e-ustawari ke magar
Koi pooche kon kis ko um'r bhar acha laga
Ahmed 'faraz'
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Aaj kaa sher.....
gar tumko taras aa rahaa hai haal par mere,
shamsheer pe de marenge sar apnaa khud hi ham....
Shaad.....
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[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';479491]Aaj kaa sher.....
[B][I]gar tumko taras aa rahaa hai haal par mere,
shamsheer pe de marenge sar apnaa khud hi ham....
Waaaaaahhhh!
Shaad ji....sher me jo josh aur andaaz hain ki bas...bolta huye alfaz ho jaise bahut asardaar......bahut sari daad is behtareen sher par....
Likhte rahein...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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12th June 2015, 05:04 PM
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Aaj kaa sher.....
gar tumko taras aa rahaa hai haal par mere,
shamsheer pe de marr apnaa khud hi ham....
Shaad.....
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Waaaah...bohot khoob Shaad bhai....
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Madhu ji aur Bhushan saahab...... tahe dil se mashkoor hoon aapkaa jo aapko ye kalaam pasand aayaa......
Shaad.....
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15th June 2015, 09:26 AM
Younhi mosam ki ada dekh ke yaad aya hai
Kis kadar jald badal jaate hein insaan janaan..
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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15th June 2015, 09:29 AM
karuu.N na yaad magar kis tarah bhulaa_uu.N use
Gazal bahaanaa karuu.N aur gun_gunaa_uu.N use
Ahmed Faraz
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karuu.N na yaad magar kis tarah bhulaa_uu.N use
Gazal bahaanaa karuu.N aur gun_gunaa_uu.N use
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Faraz sahab ka ye sher mere dil ke bhi bahut kareeb hai....bahut shukriya fir se share karne ke liye.......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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15th June 2015, 10:37 AM
ishQ ki misaal meiN bus itna hi kaheN ge!
be-misaal saza hai yeh be-gunahoN ke liye...
(not mine)
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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be-misaal saza hai yeh be-gunahoN ke liye...
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Waaaaaah.....kya khoob sharing...
shukriya hassan ji...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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16th June 2015, 04:48 PM
"mohabat ke baad mohabat mumkin hai "Faraz"
magar toot kar chahna sirf aik baar hota hai"
-Ahmad Faraz
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16th June 2015, 09:18 PM
paani ki rawani dekh kar mujhe wo yaad aa jata hai,
chehra hi mukar diya mera pani ki lahron ki tarah....
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aap sab users mujhe bata sakte hain ke aap sab online kab milte hain....
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16th June 2015, 10:22 PM
समझदार मैं एक हूँ बाक़ी सब नादान,
इसी भरम में आजकल घूम रहा इंसान..
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Zahin ji...aap bataiye agar aapko kuch kahna hai..feedback forum me daal sakte hain ya kisi se khaas kuch kahna ho to use pm bhi kar sakte hain.....
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"khusboo ki tarah aaya wo tez hawaoN meiN,
maanga tha jise hamne din-raat duaoN meiN"
-Bashir Badr
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