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~*KhayaaloN ki tarah...*~ - 28th July 2013, 11:22 PM
Wo jo rahte hain mere dil me khayaaloN ki tarah,
Seena chhalni kiye detey hain SharaaboN ki tarah.

ye Husnwaale jinhe log khudaa kehte hain,
yehi Baaazaar me bikte haiN GulaaboN ki tarah.

teri yaadeN jo saraapaa meraa mahkaati theeN,
Wahi ab mujh pe utartee haiN AzaaboN ki tarah.

Jee me aata hai ke so jaauN kisi din thak ke,
kisi gulposh ke gaaloN pe RisaaloN ki tarah.

wo jis ghaDee mujhe barbaaad kar ke chal degaa,
to thaaam looNga main aanchal ko hawaaoN ki tarah.

hui ashqoN ki hai barsaat bahot tum pe Shaad,
Nikharte jaa rahe ho abki , bahaaroN ki tarah.


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29th July 2013, 10:46 AM
shaad bhai...........bahut khoob likha hai aapne....dil se daad hazir hai

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shaad bhai...........bahut khoob likha hai aapne....dil se daad hazir hai
Aapki daad aur duaaon ke liye tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon aapka Sunita dee...... yuNhi mehfil me aaya kijiye bazm aur bhi roshan ho jaati hai....

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30th July 2013, 03:41 PM
Bahot dino baad idhar se gujraa to aapko padha... Reply kiye bina raha nahi gaya ... waah ... kya khoob likha hai aapne ... padh kar bahot achha laga ...

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Bahot dino baad idhar se gujraa to aapko padha... Reply kiye bina raha nahi gaya ... waah ... kya khoob likha hai aapne ... padh kar bahot achha laga ...

Aise hi likhte rahiye janaab !!
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kya baat hai shoiab bhai.....aapki kalam to kamaal kar rahi hai aaj kal...bahut sundar likha hai aapne..dil se daad aur badhai aapko....reps. abhi nahin de pa raha hun..jaise hee honge vaise hee deta hun.


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Waaaaaaah sameer ji , aaj toh dil choo gaye yaar. . . Bahut khoob

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kya baat hai shoiab bhai.....aapki kalam to kamaal kar rahi hai aaj kal...bahut sundar likha hai aapne..dil se daad aur badhai aapko....reps. abhi nahin de pa raha hun..jaise hee honge vaise hee deta hun.
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Wo jo rahte hain mere dil me khayaaloN ki tarah,
Seena chhalni kiye detey hain SharaaboN ki tarah.

ye Husnwaale jinhe log khudaa kehte hain,
yehi Baaazaar me bikte haiN GulaaboN ki tarah.

teri yaadeN jo saraapaa meraa mahkaati theeN,
Wahi ab mujh pe utartee haiN AzaaboN ki tarah.

Jee me aata hai ke so jaauN kisi din thak ke,
kisi gulposh ke gaaloN pe RisaaloN ki tarah.

wo jis ghaDee mujhe barbaaad kar ke chal degaa,
to thaaam looNga main aanchal ko hawaaoN ki tarah.

hui ashqoN ki hai barsaat bahot tum pe Shaad,
Nikharte jaa rahe ho abki , bahaaroN ki tarah.


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Wo jo rahte hain mere dil me khayaaloN ki tarah,
Seena chhalni kiye detey hain SharaaboN ki tarah.

ye Husnwaale jinhe log khudaa kehte hain,
yehi Baaazaar me bikte haiN GulaaboN ki tarah.

teri yaadeN jo saraapaa meraa mahkaati theeN,
Wahi ab mujh pe utartee haiN AzaaboN ki tarah.

Jee me aata hai ke so jaauN kisi din thak ke,
kisi gulposh ke gaaloN pe RisaaloN ki tarah.

wo jis ghaDee mujhe barbaaad kar ke chal degaa,
to thaaam looNga main aanchal ko hawaaoN ki tarah.

hui ashqoN ki hai barsaat bahot tum pe Shaad,
Nikharte jaa rahe ho abki , bahaaroN ki tarah.


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bhut hi khoob shaad bhai phadh ke mza agaya .........yunhi app likhte rehye ek din appke sher bhi hum bade fakr se appne bachoon ko sunynge ......................

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ab main kya kahun bhaijaan...... aap is darja aalatareen hausla afzaai mil jaae to banjar ho chuki zamee me bhi muhabbat ka phool khil jaae... aap zarre ko aala muqaam ataa kar rahe hain, jabki nachez is qaabil nahi... shukriyaa behrhaal aapki muhabbataon ka...... aate rahen. padhte raheN... saath dete rahen.........

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shaandaar ghazal .. wah ..........................................

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shaandaar ghazal .. wah ..........................................

bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka manshaa ji.... deri se jawaab dene ke liye muaafi ka arzmand hoon... aaati rahiyegaa

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