jab teri yaad aati hai....

[shoaib_malik21]

aadab doston ek baar fir aap sabhi ko mera aadab arz hai
kal raat unki yadon me khoya hua kagaz pe kuch likhta chala gaya to ye kalaam ban gaya ,peshe khidmat hai..




jab teri yaad aati hai to itne bechain ho jaate hain,
teri aankhon me to kabhi paimano me doob jate hain.
tere aane ki ummeed me haal esa hai sanam,
na sukoon se jeete hain na mar pate hain.
aaj bhi chahta hoon tumhe, main kaise yakeen dilaau
rota bhi hoon to ashq jam jate hain.
na chodi koi kasar usne dushmani nibhane me,
na jane mere hi kyon jazbaat pighal jate hain.
aaj itna to tazurba hua hai zindgi se,
dil to badle hi the chehre bhi badal jate hain.
dekh liya tera vaada nibhana 'farha'
ja teri sari kasme hum aaj bhool jate hain.
ek wo nahi to kyon udas hai ae dil,
chalti rahon me kitne hi humsafar mil jate hain......

[Taish]

wah shoaib sahab bas ek lajawab kalaam likha hai aapne.sach kahoon to hum to bas aapke kayal ho gaye janab.bas bahut ahcha likha hai aapne.bas yunhi likhte rahiye.
par is par bhi gaur farmaiyega,

mana maine ki chalti raahon me,
kayi humsafar mil jate hain.
par janab chah kar bhi"ghayal"
kisi aur se dil nahi laga pate hain.

aapka LUCKY

[shoaib_malik21]

ghayal sahab bande ka aadab.janab aap hame sharminda kar rahe hain ye keh kar ki aap hamare kayal ho gaye janab ek baat kahun agar bura na mane.humne sahi mayne me aapko hi apna ideal mana tha aapke kalaam padhkar dil ko badi tasalli milti thi . mian asal me hum aapke aage to kuch bhi nahi aur ye to aapka badappan hai jo aapko nacheez ki shayri achi lagti hain. aap ka bahut bahut shukriya.

[Taish]

shoaib sahab dekhiye har shayar apne aap me ek alag andaaz rakhta hai,aur har kisi ki napni alag khasiyat hoti hai.aapne mujhe itna samman diya yahi mere liye bahut hai janab.bas janab maine to khud bhi abhi seekhna shuru hi kiya hai.bas aap yahan ke shayaron ko padhte aur likhte rahiye.aur sach maaniye mujhe aapka ye kalaam bahut pasand aaya.umeed hai aap bas yunhi likhte rahenge.

aapka LUCKY

[roshani]

Originally posted by shoaib_malik21
aadab doston ek baar fir aap sabhi ko mera aadab arz hai
kal raat unki yadon me khoya hua kagaz pe kuch likhta chala gaya to ye kalaam ban gaya ,peshe khidmat hai..




jab teri yaad aati hai to itne bechain ho jaate hain,
teri aankhon me to kabhi paimano me doob jate hain.
tere aane ki ummeed me haal esa hai sanam,
na sukoon se jeete hain na mar pate hain.
aaj bhi chahta hoon tumhe, main kaise yakeen dilaau
rota bhi hoon to ashq jam jate hain.
na chodi koi kasar usne dushmani nibhane me,
na jane mere hi kyon jazbaat pighal jate hain.
aaj itna to tazurba hua hai zindgi se,
dil to badle hi the chehre bhi badal jate hain.
dekh liya tera vaada nibhana 'farha'
ja teri sari kasme hum aaj bhool jate hain.
ek wo nahi to kyon udas hai ae dil,
chalti rahon me kitne hi humsafar mil jate hain......

hi,
awesome n beautifully expressed. loved reading each line n seems to be complete in itself. flow of ur thoughts is beautifully penned down with words.take care n mkeep penning down ur thoughts ahead too n keep sharing with us.may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
roshani