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3rd October 2004, 03:38 PM
doston jaisa ki sabko maloom hai aaj sunday ... aur humesha ki tarah aaj bhi afsan ji ne sunday special diya hai.... jiski tareef main main jitna kahun kam hai... jiske liye woh jane jate hai... aur pichle hafte hi unhe sunday spec award bhi mila tha
 par aaj main bhi ek special de raha hun.... "sunday ishq special" umeed hai aap logon ko pasand aayega... aur aap honshla denge ki main aage bhi aur sunday ko ishq se sarabor karta rahun....Meri kalam kagaz ki shakla badal jati hai…. Apni adaon se tu mere dil ka rang badal deti hai… Wo teri galion se gujarna mera der raat Khidki pe aake tu rafter e dhadkhan badal deti hai… Bin boley chale jana mera wahan se …. Ankhon se bol tu tanhai ka alam badal deti hai… Wo sikude kagaz ka aana mere kadmo tale… Mere rahon tu ke nishan badal deti hai… Wo kagaz pe tera likha ikrar-e-“saccha_pyar” Meri khamoshi ko tu muskurahat mai badal deti hai… Meri kalam kagaz ki shakla badal jati hai…. Apni adaon se tu mere dil ka rang badal deti hai… Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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3rd October 2004, 04:11 PM
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hmm.....sunday special....kunal..tum comp. mein utre ho kya Afshan ji ke saath...hmm..bolo..bolo well Afshan ji ka sunday special toh hamesha behad umda hota hai...aur abb tumne apna ishq special start kiya..well..very nice..very nice... aur abb tumhare kalaam par kuch keh doon....bhyi..jitna kahoon kamm lagega....bahut bahut bahut acah likha hai..har ek sher..lajawab hai....just kamaal ka... chalo abb meri taraf se daad kabool karo..mmm..kitni doon..tum toh 60 par attke ho..chalo main 80 de deti hoon..kafi acha laga.... lo ban gaya na tumhara sunday...special  tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon (NM) |
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4th October 2004, 10:00 AM
Wah! Wah! Wah!
Kunaal saahab.. Hum to Sunday SPECIAL banaane ki sirf koshish kiya karte the.. aapne to ye kaam kar dikhaaya! Bohat khoob.. Mohabbat ki raah me ek chhoTa sa waakiya.. uski maasoomiyat.. uski dilkashi.. behtareen andaaz se pesh ki hai aapne... Yunhi likhte rahiye.. aur Sunday kya, har din special banaate rahiye! |
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KYA BAAT HAI KUNAALLLLLLL |
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KYA BAAT HAI KUNAALLLLLLL -
4th October 2004, 10:03 AM
OYE KUNAAL KYA HAAL HAI BHAIIIIIIIIIII
YAAR KUNAL TU TO SHAYAR HO RAHA HAIIIIIII KUNAL TUNE BAHUT ACCHAA LIKHA HAIIII YAAR KUNAL LAKIN DARD KE BAARE ME MAT LIKHA KAR AISI HI SHAYREE LIKHA KARR YAAR DARD SAARI DUNYA ME HAIIIIIII TU KHUSHI BAATA KARRRRR AISA HI LIKHA KARRRRR YAAR BHAUT ACCHAA LIKHAAAA OK BYEEEEE N TAKE CAREEEEE SANJEEV |
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4th October 2004, 01:17 PM
Hi Kunal,
Bhai bohot khoob. Kaafi acchha laga tumhara sunday special yaar. Lekin aisa karo tum issay shayri e ishq section mein post karo kyu kay mujhe lagta hai ke yeh waha ki zeenat ziyaada hai. Hmmmm to janaab e ali. lagta hai aakhir Afshan ji kay saath sahi mein competition laga rahey ho kyu???  Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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4th October 2004, 03:33 PM
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waise keh sakti ho afsan ji ki sangat main utra hun ....par jitna accha woh likhti hai main kabhi nahi likh sakta... wakai main umda hi hote hai unke kalam humesha .... khair accha laga tumhe mera kalam pasand aaya .... aur han aapne to seedha assi gram pe para pahuncha diya .... khushamdeed ! khushamdeed! shukriya tum aayi aur mere alfzao ko tareef di... wakai main tumne mere sunday special bana hi diya aapka apna Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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4th October 2004, 04:30 PM
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kya kahun ki aapke aane se hi meri koshish safal ho gayi ... kisi ke aane se jitna hosla milta usse kahin guna jyada aapke aane se hui ... shukriya aapka ki aapko mera kalam bohat pasand aaya ... sahi kaha mohbat ki rah ki shuruwart hi ye hai .... aur yahi masoomiyat hoti hai pehle pyar main... shukriya aapko mera andaz pasand aaya ... aapka sath raha to jaroor yun hi likhta rahunga .. aapka apna Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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4th October 2004, 08:40 PM
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to tum bhi aa hi gaye yahan .... bhai main ek dum theek hun ... accha laga tumhe mera likha pasand aaya .... koshish karounga aise hi likhta rahun ... janta hun tumhe mera rona pasand nahi... par bhai dard ke bare main to likhna main chor nahi sakta ... koshish karounga khushi jyada batun... thanx ek bar phir ki tum aaye aur tumhe acchi lagi meri shayri ... bhai sahi main mujhe badi khushi hoti hai tum aate ho to tumhara apna Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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4th October 2004, 09:47 PM
Kunal mere bhai....Chalo Sunday to tumne naYaaB din bana diya hai...subah savere tabiYat zara chulbuli si ho gayi yeh padhKar..tumari hasrat ko mere nacheez lafz aur do sher de rahe hai..umeed hai tumhe pasand aayenge
Meri kalam kagaz ki shakla badal jati hai…. Apni adaon se tu mere dil ka rang badal deti hai… Wo teri galion se gujarna mera der raat Khidki pe aake tu rafter e dhadkhan badal deti hai… Bin boley chale jana mera wahan se …. Ankhon se bol tu tanhai ka alam badal deti hai… Wo sikude kagaz ka aana mere kadmo tale… Mere rahon tu ke nishan badal deti hai… Wo kagaz pe tera likha ikrar-e-“saccha_pyar” Meri khamoshi ko tu muskurahat mai badal deti hai… Meri kalam kagaz ki shakla badal jati hai…. Apni adaon se tu mere dil ka rang badal deti hai… Hasrat-e-lab mein guzari chaandni raat ki kasam Chaand ko tu apne kaajal mein badal deti hai Aisi kwaashish ko kaun kahe ki 'saccha_pyar' nahi teen lafzon ko tu mohabbat mein badal deti hai apna khaYaal rakhna aur yunhi har din special banaate rehNaa -tumhara apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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5th October 2004, 01:28 AM
hey!!!!!!!!!!!kanu
aabhi uska naam batado do plzzzzzzzz??? ha ha sahi samze aap jaise gamgin shayer ki pyari si inspiration ka naam Wo teri galion se gujarna mera der raat Khidki pe aake tu rafter e dhadkhan badal deti hai… Bin boley chale jana mera wahan se …. Ankhon se bol tu tanhai ka alam badal deti hai… Wo sikude kagaz ka aana mere kadmo tale… Mere rahon tu ke nishan badal deti hai… Wo kagaz pe tera likha ikrar-e-“saccha_pyar” Meri khamoshi ko tu muskurahat mai badal deti hai… Meri kalam kagaz ki shakla badal jati hai…. Apni adaon se tu mere dil ka rang badal deti hai… bahut pyara likha hai yunhi likhte raho hamesha hamesha b happy always mayuri |
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5th October 2004, 03:00 AM
Kunal Bhai..
Sunday-Ishq-Special ko Shayri-E-Ishq mein likhna tha na.. dard mein kyun likha...??? Bahut hi acha likha hai vaise... Bahut hi khoobsoorat hai har ek sher.. par yeh kuch lines behad pasand aayin.. Wo sikude kagaz ka aana mere kadmo tale… Mere rahon tu ke nishan badal deti hai… Wo kagaz pe tera likha ikrar-e-“saccha_pyar” Meri khamoshi ko tu muskurahat mai badal deti hai… Aise hi mehfil sajaate rahiye.. agar aap bhi ache ache Sunday-Ishq-Speical mein likhte rahe to Afshan ji ke saath saath aapko bhi ek award zaroor de denge.. lolz.. Take care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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5th October 2004, 12:07 PM
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aapka kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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5th October 2004, 02:13 PM
bhai kunal...
sunday ho ya monday bas likhte rehna .... bohat accha likha hai aapne ye ... na jane kuch yaad aa gaya ... wakai main aap to allraounder ho bas raj hi raj |
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5th October 2004, 07:51 PM
Aji Kunal saahab aapko ...hamaara ye fasaana keise maalooM ho gaya...??....
Sach bahut hi achchha likha hai yahaaN bhi aapne... YooNhi likhte rahiyega. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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6th October 2004, 12:38 PM
Hasrat-e-lab mein guzari chaandni raat ki kasam
Chaand ko tu apne kaajal mein badal deti hai Aisi kwaashish ko kaun kahe ki 'saccha_pyar' nahi teen lafzon ko tu mohabbat mein badal deti hai bhaiya ... kya kahoo aap aate ho na to main samajh leta hun ... ki meri tooti footi shayri main jan aa gayi... aur aapki ye 4 line wakai main bohat pasand aayi mujhe... bhai aap aise hi sath dete rehna ... apka bhai bas isi ke sath kamal dikhata rahega... apna khayal rakhna ... apka chota bhai.. kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th October 2004, 01:58 PM
meri pyari mayuri...
tum to janti ho mujhe acche se ... inspretion kya ... tumhe to maloom hi hai ki ye ek commen sa vakhya hai... bohat logon ke sath hua hoga ... kyunki india main aisa hi hota hai... khair accha laga ki tumne reply kiya apne doston ka to mujhe intzar rehta hai .. unke bagair mere kalam adhure hai .... aati rehna sath dete rehna ... tumhara apna Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th October 2004, 04:03 PM
Kunal Bhai..
Sunday-Ishq-Special ko Shayri-E-Ishq mein likhna tha na.. dard mein kyun likha...??? Quote:
han main aage se ise wahi post karounga par woh kya hai ki main wahan kam hi jata hun to khayal nahi aaya wahan jane ka.. isi liye yahan post kar diya... aapka sath raha aur hath likhne main masroor isi tarah rahe to har sunday ko kuch na kuch ishq special main aapko jaroor milega .... awaard nahi bas apni haziri laga dena wahi kafi hai ... waise award bhi chaiye apna khayal rakhiyega aapka apna Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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7th October 2004, 11:52 AM
bhai kunal...
sunday ho ya monday bas likhte rehna .... bohat accha likha hai aapne ye ... na jane kuch yaad aa gaya ... wakai main aap to allraounder ho ------------ raj bas raj hi raj bhai raj... aapka sath yun hi raha to har din main sunday mana dun... bhai accha laga tumhe ye pasand aaya ... aur aapko woh "raj" jo humse chupa ke rakha hai yaad aa gaya  shukriya aap bhi all rounder ho har jagah hume pakad hi lete ho Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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7th October 2004, 09:20 PM
hai bhai...
main kuch jyada likh gaya kya ...  khair bataounga bhai kisi din ... aapse mil ke bohat baten karoungabas raj hi raj |
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8th October 2004, 03:46 PM
Aji Kunal saahab aapko ...hamaara ye fasaana keise maalooM ho gaya...??....
Sach bahut hi achchha likha hai yahaaN bhi aapne... YooNhi likhte rahiyega. Chaand ------------ Chaand - Ek taalaash chand sahab... lolzzzz ap hume nahi jante hum udti chidiya ke par gin lete hai hehehe.... shukriya aapne is kalam ko saraha ... aap sath dete rahe main likhta rahunga Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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8th October 2004, 04:10 PM
tum thik to ho na kunal..............achanak sad sad se mast mast likhne lage......hmmmmmmmmmmm........... just kidding.....bahut achha likha hain..reply karne main der ho gayi....par achha hain........... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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9th October 2004, 02:53 PM
hai bhai...
main kuch jyada likh gaya kya ... khair bataounga bhai kisi din ... aapse mil ke bohat baten karounga are bhai  mujhe lagta hai maine aapki chori pakad li hai... chaiye aaj nahi kisi aur din sahi accha laga aapne mujhe is kabil samjha .... apna khayall rakhna aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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9th October 2004, 02:55 PM
tum thik to ho na kunal..............achanak sad sad se mast mast likhne lage......hmmmmmmmmmmm...........
just kidding.....bahut achha likha hain..reply karne main der ho gayi....par achha hain........... mausam mujhe kya hona hai main bilkul theek hun mohtarma mausam .... welll main kabhi kabhi mood chane kar leta hun ... tum na ek dam bhulakkad ho ... mera woh kalam "tera chehra" bhool gayi kya khair shukriya mere is kalam pe aane ke liye aur ise pasand karne ke liye... bohat bohat shukriya aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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