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baat woh aadhi raat ki, raat wo poore chaand ki - 21st February 2005, 12:30 PM

kuch to hawa bhi sard thi,kuch tha teera khyal bhi
dil ko khusi ke saath saath hota raha malaal bhi

baat woh adhi raat ki,raat wo poore chaand ki
chand bhi en chet ka, us pe tera jamaal(saundarya)bhi

sabse nazar bacha ke woh mujhko kuch aise dekta
ek dafa to ruk gayi gardish-e-maah-o-saal(mahine aur varsh ka chakra)bhi

dil to chamak sakega kya phir bhi tarash ke dekh le
sheesagiraan-e-shehar(nagar ko sheeshe ke saman banane wale)ke haath ka ye kamaal bhi

usko na paa sake they jab dil ka ajeeb haal tha
ab jo palat ke dekhiye baat thi kuch muhaal bhi

meri talab tha ek shaqs wo jo nahi mila to phir
haath dua se yu gira,bhool gaya swaal bhi

uski sukhantarajiyaan(kavitaye)mere liye bhi dhaal thi
uski hassi mein chip gaya aapne gammon ka haal bhi

uske hi bazuoo mein aur usko hi sochte rahe
jism ki khwahishon pe they ruh ke aur jaal bhi

shaam ki na samaj hawa pooch rahi hai ek pata
mauj-e-hawa-e-ku-e-yaar(mitr ki gali ki hawa ki tarang), kuch to meera khyaal bhi!

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Hi Jasleen Ji,

A very beautiful work by Parveen Ji, Thanx a million 4 sharin it with us here.


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22nd February 2005, 10:03 AM

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Hi Jasleen Ji,

A very beautiful work by Parveen Ji, Thanx a million 4 sharin it with us here.
well its my pleasure salim ji tht u loved reading it. i was going through her nazams n then i realised why not to share it with all of u. well thx for taking out time n replying me.take care n may god bless u with his fine glitters.
   
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