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18th July 2010, 12:01 PM
TERE JAANE KE BAAD  mujhe tera dande se peetna na-pasand tha, school jane ke naam par machal kar mitti pe fail jata tha, mujhe tera baajoo se pakad ke ghaseetna na-pasand tha, teri jhidki se dar ke nikal jata tha katra ke, tere aage munh kholna bhi bandd tha, ab halat badal gae hain,na tu hai na mujhe koi peetne wala, tujhe chaah ke bhi nahin dhoond sakta sirf yaad karta hoon, maa mai aaj bhi teri jhidki ke khyal se darta hoon. |
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18th July 2010, 12:21 PM
Aapki is peshkash ko Ghayel ka salam Parveen jee...........I am just speechless.
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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18th July 2010, 12:23 PM
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Maa Toh ....Bas Maa hoti hai...... Maa Tujhe Salaam ! Very Nice creation......... Praveen Komal Ji ! dil se daad !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th July 2010, 12:46 PM
thanks ghayel ji aur naresh ji, apne is nacheez ki rachna pe dhyan dia , dil se shukria apka
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18th July 2010, 08:49 PM
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19th July 2010, 08:30 AM
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19th July 2010, 08:53 AM
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achchae ehsaasaat hain Aesa aksar hota hai jab maan saath main hoti hai to shayed hum ussae khareeb nahin hopatae ,Aur jab maan nahin hoti hai to uski kami si lagti hai razia |
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thanks -
19th July 2010, 10:18 AM
thanks razia for your nice comments . god bless you.
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19th July 2010, 10:45 AM
parveen ji bhot hi touching kavita hai....
bhot achi lagi hume.. daad kabool kijiye.. god bless uh...........   If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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19th July 2010, 11:00 AM
thanks gazal ji ..............
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21st July 2010, 11:11 AM
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
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21st July 2010, 11:33 AM
parveen ji aapne kafi sanjida topic pe likha hai maa to maa hai uspe kuch nhi likkha jaye acha to hota hi hai
khair ab aapse or bhi behtar peshkesh ki umeed hogi fir hme apni khubsurat peshkesh se jald ru-b-ru karayee pawan(shayari) |
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21st July 2010, 11:36 AM
pawan ji ,apka bahut bahut shukria. yaade'n kai baar kuchh jyada hi bechain kar jaati hain
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25th July 2011, 09:38 AM
maa ki ,yaad
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24th August 2011, 10:08 AM
ma kee.......................yada
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27th August 2011, 05:25 PM
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radhe radhe Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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24th November 2011, 02:47 PM
thanks . brother apka shukria
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1st February 2012, 05:27 PM
thanks to all................ my dears
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