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Love Mile Kabhi Gar Nazar To Meri Nazar Padhlena - 14th January 2009, 12:33 AM

mile kabhi gar nazar to meri nazar padhlena
kabhi yunhi paas aake meri khabar padhlena


ehesaas hi hain mohabbat to mehsush karlo muje
mere jasbaat main chupa beshumar pyar padhlena


aapki muskaan to hain jaise koi khilta gulab
aapne gulistan me kabhi meri dagar padhlena


khush kismat main kaha itna jo tumhe pau
meri duao me naam aapna magar padhlena


bhari mehfil me bhi dekho main tanha hoon
meri gazal me hale-e-dil mera jigar padhlena


nahi muskil main itna sanam samajlo mujhe
bas ek khuli si kitab hain yeh Nihar padhlena





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14th January 2009, 01:06 AM
Nihar Ji
bahot achha ghazal likha hai aapne....ehesaas to kya kahooN...lajawaab

mile kabhi gar nazar to meri nazar padhlena
kabhi yunhi paas aake meri khabar padhlena

kitni khubsoorati se aapne dil ki baat bayaan kar diye
ehesaas hi hain mohabbat to mehsush karlo muje
mere jasbaat main chupa beshumar pyar padhlena

is sher ka to andaaz hi nirala hai


nahi muskil main itna sanam samajlo mujhe
bas ek khuli si kitab hain yeh Nihar padhlena

sabse achha to aapka yeh maqta ...aapne naam ko Qaafia main use karke aapne ghazal pe char chand laga diya

daad dilse rep+++

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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

Goodbye SDC

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14th January 2009, 07:53 AM
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mile kabhi gar nazar to meri nazar padhlena
kabhi yunhi paas aake meri khabar padhlena


ehesaas hi hain mohabbat to mehsush karlo muje
mere jasbaat main chupa beshumar pyar padhlena


aapki muskaan to hain jaise koi khilta gulab
aapne gulistan me kabhi meri dagar padhlena


khush kismat main kaha itna jo tumhe pau
meri duao me naam aapna magar padhlena


bhari mehfil me bhi dekho main tanha hoon
meri gazal me hale-e-dil mera jigar padhlena


nahi muskil main itna sanam samajlo mujhe
bas ek khuli si kitab hain yeh Nihar padhlena
nice one

bas doosra aur akhri sher .. kafiye ke hisaab se kamzor hai

sound ka khyaal rakhe aap .........
lafzo ka uchaaran kaisa hai
kafiya is baat pe nirbhar karta hai
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bahot achha ghazal likha hai aapne....ehesaas to kya kahooN...lajawaab

mile kabhi gar nazar to meri nazar padhlena
kabhi yunhi paas aake meri khabar padhlenakitni khubsoorati se aapne dil ki baat bayaan kar diye
ehesaas hi hain mohabbat to mehsush karlo muje
mere jasbaat main chupa beshumar pyar padhlena

is sher ka to andaaz hi nirala hai


nahi muskil main itna sanam samajlo mujhe
bas ek khuli si kitab hain yeh Nihar padhlena

sabse achha to aapka yeh maqta ...aapne naam ko Qaafia main use karke aapne ghazal pe char chand laga diya

daad dilse rep+++

Diya


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nice one

bas doosra aur akhri sher .. kafiye ke hisaab se kamzor hai

sound ka khyaal rakhe aap .........
lafzo ka uchaaran kaisa hai
kafiya is baat pe nirbhar karta hai


ji shukriya next time aur bhi aachi koshish karunga

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14th January 2009, 04:28 PM
nihar...

bahot khoob..

khush kismat main kaha itna jo tumhe pau
meri duao me naam aapna magar padhlena


Good bless you...

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20th January 2009, 01:48 AM
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mile kabhi gar nazar to meri nazar padhlena
kabhi yunhi paas aake meri khabar padhlena


ehesaas hi hain mohabbat to mehsush karlo muje
mere jasbaat main chupa beshumar pyar padhlena


aapki muskaan to hain jaise koi khilta gulab
aapne gulistan me kabhi meri dagar padhlena


khush kismat main kaha itna jo tumhe pau
meri duao me naam aapna magar padhlena


bhari mehfil me bhi dekho main tanha hoon
meri gazal me hale-e-dil mera jigar padhlena


nahi muskil main itna sanam samajlo mujhe
bas ek khuli si kitab hain yeh Nihar padhlena
Aapko ghayal ka aadaab,

Ahche ehsash haiN janaab, par doosra sher aur maqta dono nihaayat kamjor lage mujhe. Doosre aur teesre sher me aapne "hai" ko haiN likha hai, iska dhyaan rakheN dono me farq hai. aur "padhlena" nahin hoga, balki "padh lena" hoga, kyuNki dono do aag lafz haiN, umeed hai aage aapko aur v behtar padhne ko mlegaa, aur agar koi baat buri lage to maafi ka talabgaar rahuNgaa...!!

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