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20th April 2007, 01:26 PM
sabhi dosto ko raj ka salaam......aaj main apni ek nai gazal ke saath hazir hoon.....umeed hai appke dil pe dastak degi......
chehra jiska bhi khila hoga shaksh wo tujhse mila hoga.... tere qadmon mein gir gyaa jo jaane wo kab ka chala hoga.... meri sanso ke chalne ka sabab teri yaadon ka silsila hoga... jo duaa mange mere jeene ki usko mujhse koii gila hoga..... dekhke usko guma.N hota hai hizar mein kitna wo jala hoga.... cheer ke dekh kabhi dil mera teri surat ke siva kyaa hoga.... maikade or butkade mein 'veer' chand qadmon ka fasla hoga..... aapke jawaab ka muntzir...........raj........... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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20th April 2007, 01:35 PM
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rajveer ji namaskaar bahut umda khayal pesh kiye hai aapne, har sher laajwaab hai.....aapki gazalon ke hum shuru se hi mureed hai...aur ab to aadat c ban gaye hai...aapko padney ki. yu hi likhtey rahiye...kudha aapki kalam mein aur nikhaar laye. aapki dost  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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20th April 2007, 01:49 PM
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veeeer bohat acha laga bohat khubsurat likha hai khas tor per ye ashaar bohat achay lage chehra jiska bhi khila hoga shaksh wo tujhse mila hoga.... jo duaa mange mere jeene ki usko mujhse koii gila hoga..... cheer ke dekh kabhi dil mera teri surat ke siva kyaa hoga.... yunhi likhte rahain humeshaa khush rahain khayal rakhiyega apna rab rakha apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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20th April 2007, 02:24 PM
big B pranaam aur tasleemaaT:
kaise haiN aap ..eK baar fir se umdaa khaYaal aur andaaz-e-bayaaN ke saath bazm meiN haazir huYe aap..mat^laa be-Had pasaNd aaYaa mujhe..bahot hi achHii t^rHa se aSh'aar ko pesH kiiYe haiN aapne ..daad qabool kijiyeNgaa aur yuuNhii bazm ko sajaate raheN apnaa khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN duaoN ke saath ijaazaT aapka chHotu dhaval |
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20th April 2007, 06:01 PM
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shukria -
21st April 2007, 08:10 PM
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22nd April 2007, 07:21 AM
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ohoooooooo janab kya baat hai bada hi behtreen or taza tareen kalam pesh kiya hai aapne har ek sher se daad barbas hi nikal padtii hai ab ese main kisi ek sher ki tarif karna doosre ke sath bemanii hogii or ye main nahi kar sakta na poore ke poore kalam per dil se daad hazir hai janab shukriyaa dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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22nd April 2007, 05:15 PM
meri sanso ke chalne ka sabab
teri yaadon ka silsila hoga... jo duaa mange mere jeene ki usko mujhse koii gila hoga..... In sheyron ko padkar meri hontho par yak-b-yak hansi aa gayi.. Khoob likhte ho janaab.. Wah! Ghayalparwana chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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23rd April 2007, 01:09 AM
raj ji namste
apka har sher bahut umdaa hai ... bahut achi gazal hai apki har sher pe meri daad kubul kare sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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23rd April 2007, 09:45 AM
well said veerji,acha laga aapka kalaam padhkar.bahut acha likha hai aapne.yunhin likhte rahen,khush rahen.
tc,bye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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23rd April 2007, 08:16 PM
Raj ji..
Behad khoobsoorat Gazal pesh ki hai aapne.. har ek sher behad pasand aaya.. Meri daad kubool keejiye.. mehfil ko aise hi apni beshakeemti ghazlon se sajaate rahiye.. Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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24th April 2007, 04:21 PM
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24th April 2007, 04:22 PM
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24th April 2007, 04:46 PM
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seedha saaf saral saccha aur accha ... yahi hai in asharoN kee tareef . bohat khoob kahe hue asharoN maiN do nageene maine chune hai .. shayd ghazal ka meaning yahin kahin inhi maiN chupa hua hai .. uske diye dard maiN uski hi tareef karna ,,,. aur khobsoorti se apne na jeene ki aarzoo zahir karte hue kehna .. ki dua na mango mere liye... bohat acchi rah pe chune hue behtreen alfaazon pe mujh khaak bande ki tareef qubool karen ek lamha Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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25th April 2007, 05:06 PM
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dheer ji parne samjhne or sarahne ke liye bhut bhut shukria........raj........ ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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25th April 2007, 05:08 PM
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25th April 2007, 05:13 PM
veer ji pranaam,
aapki gazal..........masha'allah har daffa ki tarha khubsurat aur lajavaab..... daaad kabuul kijiyega grazie aapki gudiya pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th April 2007, 05:38 PM
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27th April 2007, 06:51 PM
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raj bhai kya kamaal ka likha hai appne juyi likhte rehna har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya  kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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1st May 2007, 05:47 PM
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1st May 2007, 05:48 PM
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sara ji ko aj ka adaab.......main janta hoon mujhe ehsaas hai ki aap kis qadar is nacheez ko doob ke parti ho.......housla afzai ke liye dil se shukria aada karta hoon.........yun hii saath deti rehna.......raj,...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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1st May 2007, 05:50 PM
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4th May 2007, 11:21 PM
raajveer ji ko mera namaskaar...bahoot hi oomda tareeke se anjaam diyahai aapne apni tehreer ko...bahoot khoob..chhoti beher ki ye tehreer...wa janaab....
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