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~*~Is JaHaN sE dUr MeInE eK oR jAhAn PaYa~*~ -
1st March 2012, 05:09 PM
ek kashish ne teri or mujhe youn khincha teri bahon mein meine khudko chipaya is jahan se dur meine ek or jahan paya jab tune mujhe apne seene se lagaaya fer khamoshiyon ne bhi kuch gungunaya or humari tanhaiyon ne humse muh chipaya ek arsey se tadapi rooh ki pyaas bujhi aur teri chuann ne mere roop ko damkaya ek kashish ne teri or mujhe youn khincha teri bahon mein meine khudko chipaya jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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1st March 2012, 05:41 PM
Dear Shweta :
Jsk..! ummid kartaa huuN sab Theek hongaa... bade dinoN baad bazm mein aapki koShiSh ko deKhaa achChhaa lagaa.. yeh Sher dil ko bahot hi pasand aayaa Quote:
bahot kuch baat keh jaataa hai yeh Sher.. dil se daad KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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1st March 2012, 06:28 PM
is jahan se dur meine ek or jahan paya
jab tune mujhe apne seene se lagaaya bahut khoob shweta jee. quoted sher mujhe bahut pasand aaya. aisaa lagaa ki aapne apne awtaar kee image ko hee harfo men dhaal diya ho. daad. |
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1st March 2012, 07:32 PM
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Mubaaraqbaad !!!  Aise Hii Aati Raha KareN ... AchChhaa Lagtaa Hai Aap Ko Padhnaa !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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1st March 2012, 08:33 PM
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behad komal aehsaas ... sundar peshkash dil se daad hazir hi ... likhti rahiye ... radhe radhe ............ Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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2nd March 2012, 03:23 AM
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thanks for sharing Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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6th March 2012, 02:26 PM
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JsK... DhavalDhara  haalfilhaal....waqt ke saath samjhaute karne aa gaye hain...jo hona hai wo toh hona hi hai...bas is pal ko jee bhar jee rahi hun.... tumhe meri koshish pasand aayi mujhe accha laga... aate rehna younhi taecaer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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6th March 2012, 02:27 PM
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Uffak ji waise toh yeh dil ke jazbaat ki bayaani thi...per aapne khoob pakda...display image sach mein in ehsaason ko bayaan karne mein madadgaar rahi.. aae rahiye taecaer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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6th March 2012, 02:29 PM
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Naresh ji namaste aapko apni post per dekhkar mujhe bohot khushi hoti hai or mein chahti hun yadi mein kuch ghalti karti hun toh aap unhe theek karein... aise hi aate rahiye taecaer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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6th March 2012, 02:30 PM
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Ishq ji.. sabse pehle shukriya Display Image ko bhejne ka... apki daad qabool....apko meri koshish pasand ayi accha laga aate rahiyega taecaer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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6th March 2012, 02:39 PM
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Praneeta ji, padhne ka or isko pasand karne ka shukriya aise hi aate rahein or padhte rahein taecaer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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6th March 2012, 03:49 PM
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26th March 2012, 02:42 PM
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shukriya aisem hi padhte rahiye taecaer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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31st March 2012, 12:15 AM
Kuhulika ji,
Bahot Khoobsurat Dil-e-Ehsaas Bayaan Kiya Hai Aapne... Bahot Saral aur Sunder Likha Hai aapne... Aise Hi Likhti Rahiye... |
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4th April 2012, 03:36 PM
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Thanks rahut kep reading taecaer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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12th December 2012, 09:27 PM
[QUOTE=kuhulika;437375][FONT="Comic Sans MS"][B][SIZE="3"]
ek kashish ne teri or mujhe youn khincha teri bahon mein meine khudko chipaya is jahan se dur meine ek or jahan paya jab tune mujhe apne seene se lagaaya fer khamoshiyon ne bhi kuch gungunaya or humari tanhaiyon ne humse muh chipaya ek arsey se tadapi rooh ki pyaas bujhi aur teri chuann ne mere roop ko damkaya ek kashish ne teri or mujhe youn khincha teri bahon mein meine khudko chipaya Bohat khoob shweta ji.... Kahaan ghayab hain aap aajkal?....aapki aur se nayi peshkash ka intezaar hai.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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