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27th January 2009, 04:33 PM
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Har rishta saccha lagta hai, har aakh mein sacchai hai,
Phir bhi har kadam pe dhoka hai, nafrat hi humne payi hai.nm
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haath siine pe jo rakh do to qaraar aa jaaye
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27th January 2009, 07:01 PM
yunhi udas raha to dekhna mein ek din
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27th January 2009, 07:36 PM
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yunhi udas raha to dekhna mein ek din
tamam shehar tanhaiyaan bicha dunga............
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gaa.Nv miT jaayegaa shahar jal jaayegaa
zindagii tera cheharaa badal jaayegaa
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27th January 2009, 07:39 PM
aabaad ham aashuftaa saro.n se nahii.n maqtal
ye rasm abhii shahar me.n zindaa hai ke tum ho
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27th January 2009, 07:40 PM
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aabaad ham aashuftaa saro.n se nahii.n maqtal
ye rasm abhii shahar me.n zindaa hai ke tum ho
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ham dahar ke is viiraane me.n jo kuchh bhii nazaaraa karate hai.n
ashko.n kii zabaa.Nme.n kahate hai.n aaho.n se ishaaraa karate hai.n
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27th January 2009, 07:46 PM
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ham dahar ke is viiraane me.n jo kuchh bhii nazaaraa karate hai.n
ashko.n kii zabaa.Nme.n kahate hai.n aaho.n se ishaaraa karate hai.n
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hai tere tasavvur se yahaa.N nuur kii baarish
ye jaan-e-hazii.n hai ki shabistaan-e-hiraa hai
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
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27th January 2009, 07:47 PM
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hai tere tasavvur se yahaa.N nuur kii baarish
ye jaan-e-hazii.n hai ki shabistaan-e-hiraa hai
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ham raato.n ko uTh uTh ke jin ke liye rote hai.n
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27th January 2009, 07:46 PM
na khauf khuda ka, na uski khudaai ka,
mujhe darr hai to sanam bas teri judaai ka.....!!
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27th January 2009, 07:49 PM
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na khauf khuda ka, na uski khudaai ka,
mujhe darr hai to sanam bas teri judaai ka.....!!
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ghayal bhai, aap ko baitbaazi me/n hindi ka word lena hai, na ki roman ka....
jaise ki mera sher hai.....
ham dahar ke is viiraane me.n jo kuchh bhii nazaaraa karate hai.n
ashko.n kii zabaa.Nme.n kahate hai.n aaho.n se ishaaraa karate hai.n
yahaa.n aap ko 'hai' ya 'ha' se kahana hai 'n' se nahii.n. ok?
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27th January 2009, 07:50 PM
haal andaar ka bass khuda jane
kitna roshan hai diya bahar se
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27th January 2009, 07:52 PM
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haal andaar ka bass khuda jane
kitna roshan hai diya bahar se
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saaqii terii mahafil me.n ham jaam uchhaale.nge
jab kaabe me.n jaaye.nge zam_zam se nahaa le.nge
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27th January 2009, 07:56 PM
ghar main hay aj tak wohi khusbo basi hui
lagta hay ki jaise wo aa kar hi nahi gaya
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27th January 2009, 07:59 PM
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ghar main hay aj tak wohi khusbo basi hui
lagta hay ki jaise wo aa kar hi nahi gaya
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yaar bin talKh zi.ndaganii thii
dostii mudda_ii-e-jaanii thii
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27th January 2009, 08:04 PM
thoda-thoda hi sahi par mujhe pyar kar,
ho jaye thodi der to bhi intezaar kar....!!
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27th January 2009, 08:14 PM
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thoda-thoda hi sahi par mujhe pyar kar,
ho jaye thodi der to bhi intezaar kar....!!
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raaz kii baate.n likhii aur Khat khulaa rahane diyaa
jaane kyo.n rusavaa_iio.n kaa silasilaa rahane diyaa
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27th January 2009, 08:16 PM
aankh k dareechay mein tum nay jo sunaya tha,
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27th January 2009, 08:17 PM
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aankh k dareechay mein tum nay jo sunaya tha,
baat us us diye ki hai, baat us gilay ki hai...........
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ham par tumhaarii chaah kaa ilzaam hii to hai
dushnaam to nahii.n hai ye ikaraam hii to hai
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27th January 2009, 08:23 PM
husn hota hai to mohabbat ho hi jaati hai,
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28th January 2009, 07:16 PM
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husn hota hai to mohabbat ho hi jaati hai,
dil ke hone se aksar ulfat ho hi jaati hai..........
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Humse nahaq hai gila use bewajah shikayat bhi,
hum laut ke aa jate usne aawaaz to di hoti..........
hoti >>>>>>>>>>
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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
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28th January 2009, 07:34 PM
tere milne aur phir, tere bichhad jaane ke biich
faaslaa rusvaaii kaa hai kam, zaraa aahistaa chal.nm
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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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28th January 2009, 09:28 PM
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tere milne aur phir, tere bichhad jaane ke biich
faaslaa rusvaaii kaa hai kam, zaraa aahistaa chal.nm
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laga to rakha hai is dil ko aur kaamo me "lamha",
teri taraf hi ye jata hai, ab kya karu.....!!!!
karu >>>>>>>>>>>>
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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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29th January 2009, 01:13 AM
Rooth Jatay Ho Tum To Kuch Aur Haseen Lagtay Ho
Hum Ne Yeh Soch Ke Hi Tum Ko Khafa Rakha Hai....nm..
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PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
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29th January 2009, 11:04 AM
KITNI HASRAT HAI KI IK BAAR MAIN ROOTHOON PHIR SE
AUR IK BAAR WO PHIR MUJH KO MANAA-NE AAYE.
by : PRASHANT VASL
from LAUT-TE-HUYE (shayri collection)
available at GRANTH book store(Juhu,Goregaon west) and D'Mart,new link rd,malad(w)Mumbai...also at shoppersstop's CROSSWORD & BOOK CAFE all over India.
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29th January 2009, 12:20 PM
yeh kaisa daur hai manzar yeh kaisi bad-hali
dua salam ki fursat nahi zamane ko
bhool jaate hain zamane ka har zulm-o-sitam
un ko jab apne tassawur mein basa lete hian
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29th January 2009, 01:03 PM
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yeh kaisa daur hai manzar yeh kaisi bad-hali
dua salam ki fursat nahi zamane ko
bhool jaate hain zamane ka har zulm-o-sitam
un ko jab apne tassawur mein basa lete hian
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hai.n 'Shad'-o-'Safi' shaayar yaa 'Shauq'-o-'Wafa' "Hasrat"
phir 'Danish'-o-'Mahashar' hai.n 'Iqbal' bhii 'Vahashat' bhii
hasrat mohanii
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
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31st January 2009, 11:49 AM
PHOOL GUL-DAANON MEIN KAAGAZ KE HI AB KHILTE HAIN
LOAG MILTE NAHIN BAS HAATH YAHAN MILTE HAIN.
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yeh kaisa daur hai manzar yeh kaisi bad-hali
dua salam ki fursat nahi zamane ko
bhool jaate hain zamane ka har zulm-o-sitam
un ko jab apne tassawur mein basa lete hian
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31st January 2009, 08:14 PM
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PHOOL GUL-DAANON MEIN KAAGAZ KE HI AB KHILTE HAIN
LOAG MILTE NAHIN BAS HAATH YAHAN MILTE HAIN.
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sorry PRASHANT ji,bt aap baitbaazi ke rules follow nahi kar rahe hai.....aap ko last post ke last word se apne aashar shuru karne hai....
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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
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29th January 2009, 01:14 PM
bahut udaas hai koi shaqs tere chale jaane se,
laut sake to laut aa, tu kisi bahane se.....
Zainy
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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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29th January 2009, 01:29 PM
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bahut udaas hai koi shaqs tere chale jaane se,
laut sake to laut aa, tu kisi bahane se.....
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sochtaa huuN ke mahfuuz kar luuN ise apne siine meN lafz-o-bayaaN kii tarah
thoRii hii der meN yeh mulaaqaat bhii Khatm ho jaayegi daastaaN kii tarah
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
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29th January 2009, 02:13 PM
hai aur bhii duniyaa me sukhanavar bahut achchhe
kahate hai.n ki 'Ghalib' kaa hai andaaz-e-bayaa.n aur
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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29th January 2009, 05:22 PM
roodady mohabat kia kehye kuch yad rahi kuch bhool gaye
2 din ki musarat ki kehye kuch yad rahi kuch bhool gaye
nt mine
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29th January 2009, 09:40 PM
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roodady mohabat kia kehye kuch yad rahi kuch bhool gaye
2 din ki musarat ki kehye kuch yad rahi kuch bhool gaye
nt mine
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yeh baazi ishq ki baazi hai jo chaho lagaa do darr kaisa
jeet gaye to kya kehna haare bhi to baazi maat nahi..
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nahi >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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29th January 2009, 10:30 PM
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yeh baazi ishq ki baazi hai jo chaho lagaa do darr kaisa
jeet gaye to kya kehna haare bhi to baazi maat nahi..
nm
nahi >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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Nahi pine ki hawas ha mujhako phir bhi maykhana puchh raha,
khate ha saki ki surate me ek ajab sa nasa ha yaro.
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29th January 2009, 10:32 PM
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yeh baazi ishq ki baazi hai jo chaho lagaa do darr kaisa
jeet gaye to kya kehna haare bhi to baazi maat nahi..
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nahi >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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Nahi pine ki hawas ha mujhako phir bhi maykhana puchh raha,
khate ha saki ki surate me ek ajab sa nasa ha yaro.
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29th January 2009, 10:46 PM
Rog aise bhi gham-e-yaar se lag jate hain.
Dar se uthte hain to deewar se lag jate hain.
(faraz)
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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30th January 2009, 10:10 AM
har bazm me.n mauzuu-e-suKhan dil zad_gaa.N kaa
ab kaun hai shiirii.n hai ke lailaa hai ke tum ho
nt mine...............!!
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31st January 2009, 10:23 AM
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har bazm me.n mauzuu-e-suKhan dil zad_gaa.N kaa
ab kaun hai shiirii.n hai ke lailaa hai ke tum ho
nt mine...............!!
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hotii hai tere naam se vahashat kabhii kabhii
bar_ham hu_ii hai yuu.N bhii tabiiyat kabhii kabhii
[vahashat = anxiety; bar_ham = restless]
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31st January 2009, 10:31 AM
bharti nahin aaNkhoN ki pitaari, na khalai hi hoti hai,
kaise bataauN ki kya beet.ti hai hum par, jab vo roti hai..........
bade bhaiya itne tough words mat diya karo aap.....!!
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31st January 2009, 10:54 AM
haqiiqat khul gaii 'Hasrat' tere tark-e-mohabbat kii
tujhe to ab wo pahale se bhii badh kar yaad aate hai.n..nm
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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31st January 2009, 11:36 AM
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haqiiqat khul gaii 'Hasrat' tere tark-e-mohabbat kii
tujhe to ab wo pahale se bhii badh kar yaad aate hai.n..nm
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hai duaa yaad magar harf-e-duaa yaad nahii.n
mere naGmaat ko a.ndaaz-e-navaa yaad nahii.n
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