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MaiN khushiyaN lekar aauNgi - 9th December 2014, 07:36 PM

Arbab-e-sukhn, 'kanya bhroon hatya' (female foeticide) naam ka ek marz humare muashre ko khaaye ja raha hai..ek nanhi si guRiya, jo abhi iss duniya meiN nahi aayii hai, uska dard bayaan karne ki koshish pesh kar raha hooN.
Ilfaaz ka intekhhab itna baRhiya nahi hoga, lekin jazbaat ko paRhne ki koshish kijiyega. Aur apni besh qeemti aara'a zaroor rakhiyega.


MaiN nanhi si guRiya hooN, khushiyoN ki maiN puRiya hoon
HansuNgi hansaauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi
main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi..

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Yeh kya karne lage haiN log, mujhe pakaRne lage hain log
kyuN mujhe yeh maar rahe haiN, dekho toh dhikkaar rahe haiN
MaiN bhii jeena chahti hooN, par cheekh kise sunauNgi
main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi

Taras mujh pe khaao maaN, papa ko samjhao maaN
Poore karuNgi saare sapne, garv kareNge mujh pe apne
Ek baar tum mauqa de do, ghar ka maan baRhaungi
maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi

Dard sabhi ka jaanuNgi, kehna sab ka maanuNgi
Ooncha aapka sar hoga, khushiyoN bhara ghar hoga
Bete jo bhi karte hain woh sab kuchh kar dikhauNgi
main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi

Koii toh sun lo meri pukaar, de do mujh ko thoRa sa pyar
Bhaiya ka khilona ho, ya phir chaandi sona ho
waada karti hooN sabhi se, haath na maiN lagauNgi
main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi

Kya laRki hona gunaah hai, jo itni baRi sazaa hai?
SaanseiN meri rok rahe ho, zara bhi nahi soch rahe ho
Dard mujhe jo ho raha hai, kisko maiN sunauNgi
main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi

Main.ne toh yeh socha thaa, jaise bhaiya chhota thaa
MaaN ki aaNkh ka taara thaa, daadi ko bhi pyara thaa
Waise he toh maiN bhi sab ki laadli ban jaauNgi
maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi

MaaN tum bhi toh laRki ho, phir kyuN nahi samajhTi ho
LaRki he jab na hogi, duniya phir yeh kahaN hogi
Apne komal haaThoN se maiN khaana tumheiN khilauNgi

Jab bukhaar hoga tum ko, sar-maatha dabauNgi
Kuchh din apne saath toh rakh lo, phir parayii kehlauNgi
BooRhi jab tum ho jaogi, haal poochhne aauNgi
Waada karti hooN, tumhara dil kabhi na dukhauNgi
KhushiyoN ki maiN puRiya hooN, khushiyaN le kar aauNgi,
maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi.

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saagar saahab aaj se meraa naam aap apne mureedon me shumaar kar lijiye.......

na jaane kya asar thaa kya jaadu tha is kavitaa me ke yaqeen maaniye meri aankhen bhar aayee hain aur maine apne sabhi ajeezdaaron ko aapki ye kavitaa aapke naam ke saath forward kar di hai , ke hamaari SDC me aise gauhar bhii paaye jaate hain....

aapki ye kavita mujhe itni pasand aayee hai ke main ise abi ke abhi gauhar e SDC me move kar rahaaa hoon.....

aur ummeed karta hoon aap apne aise hi acche acche kalaam ke saath hamaare saath mahfil ko roshan karenge....

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10th December 2014, 03:21 PM

Sagar ji...har stanza har line me dard hai apki kavita me...padte padte kab aankhein nam ho gayi pata hi nhi chala...bahut hi achcha likha hai aapne.....



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Bohot.........bohot.....bohot ache Sagar ji.
Bohot gehrai se aapne ek bejuban ki takleef bayan ki hai.........aaj aisa aalam hai log betiyo ko paida hone se pahle hi katl kar rahe hai......jin docters ko kabhi log bhagwan saman mante the....vo aaj chand sikko ke liye kasai ban baithe hai.......
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Sagar bhai apki mehnat aur jazbaaton ko salaam .. Bahut hi Nayab peshkash ..

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saagar saahab aaj se meraa naam aap apne mureedon me shumaar kar lijiye.......

na jaane kya asar thaa kya jaadu tha is kavitaa me ke yaqeen maaniye meri aankhen bhar aayee hain aur maine apne sabhi ajeezdaaron ko aapki ye kavitaa aapke naam ke saath forward kar di hai , ke hamaari SDC me aise gauhar bhii paaye jaate hain....

aapki ye kavita mujhe itni pasand aayee hai ke main ise abi ke abhi gauhar e SDC me move kar rahaaa hoon.....

aur ummeed karta hoon aap apne aise hi acche acche kalaam ke saath hamaare saath mahfil ko roshan karenge....

apna khayaal rakhenge aur bas meri tahe dil se daad pesh hain aapko......

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Sagar ji...har stanza har line me dard hai apki kavita me...padte padte kab aankhein nam ho gayi pata hi nhi chala...bahut hi achcha likha hai aapne.....

Madhu ji, aise he nigaah-e-karam banaye rakheiN.. Tah-e-dil se shukriya.

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Bohot.........bohot.....bohot ache Sagar ji.
Bohot gehrai se aapne ek bejuban ki takleef bayan ki hai.........aaj aisa aalam hai log betiyo ko paida hone se pahle hi katl kar rahe hai......jin docters ko kabhi log bhagwan saman mante the....vo aaj chand sikko ke liye kasai ban baithe hai.......
Aapki ye peshkash mai apne fb profile par apke naam ke saath share kar raha hoon..

Beshumar daad

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Bilkul durust farmaya aapne Bhushan saahab.
Aur hausla afzayi keliye bohot bohot shukriya. Apni nigah-e-inaayat banaye rakhein.

Aapka khair khwah

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Sagar bhai apki mehnat aur jazbaaton ko salaam .. Bahut hi Nayab peshkash ..

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11th December 2014, 11:35 AM

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Namaste

Aapki yeh peshkash dil ko chhu gayiin...dil se daad hi daad

Khush rahiye...apnaa khayaal rakhen

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Namaste

Aapki yeh peshkash dil ko chhu gayiin...dil se daad hi daad

Khush rahiye...apnaa khayaal rakhen

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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Arbab-e-sukhn, 'kanya bhroon hatya' (female foeticide) naam ka ek marz humare muashre ko khaaye ja raha hai..ek nanhi si guRiya, jo abhi iss duniya meiN nahi aayii hai, uska dard bayaan karne ki koshish pesh kar raha hooN.
Ilfaaz ka intekhhab itna baRhiya nahi hoga, lekin jazbaat ko paRhne ki koshish kijiyega. Aur apni besh qeemti aara'a zaroor rakhiyega.


MaiN nanhi si guRiya hooN, khushiyoN ki maiN puRiya hoon
HansuNgi hansaauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi
main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi..

Par... ... ... ...

Yeh kya karne lage haiN log, mujhe pakaRne lage hain log
kyuN mujhe yeh maar rahe haiN, dekho toh dhikkaar rahe haiN
MaiN bhii jeena chahti hooN, par cheekh kise sunauNgi
main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi

Taras mujh pe khaao maaN, papa ko samjhao maaN
Poore karuNgi saare sapne, garv kareNge mujh pe apne
Ek baar tum mauqa de do, ghar ka maan baRhaungi
maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi

Dard sabhi ka jaanuNgi, kehna sab ka maanuNgi
Ooncha aapka sar hoga, khushiyoN bhara ghar hoga
Bete jo bhi karte hain woh sab kuchh kar dikhauNgi
main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi

Koii toh sun lo meri pukaar, de do mujh ko thoRa sa pyar
Bhaiya ka khilona ho, ya phir chaandi sona ho
waada karti hooN sabhi se, haath na maiN lagauNgi
main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi

Kya laRki hona gunaah hai, jo itni baRi sazaa hai?
SaanseiN meri rok rahe ho, zara bhi nahi soch rahe ho
Dard mujhe jo ho raha hai, kisko maiN sunauNgi
main khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi

Main.ne toh yeh socha thaa, jaise bhaiya chhota thaa
MaaN ki aaNkh ka taara thaa, daadi ko bhi pyara thaa
Waise he toh maiN bhi sab ki laadli ban jaauNgi
maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi, maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi

MaaN tum bhi toh laRki ho, phir kyuN nahi samajhTi ho
LaRki he jab na hogi, duniya phir yeh kahaN hogi
Apne komal haaThoN se maiN khaana tumheiN khilauNgi

Jab bukhaar hoga tum ko, sar-maatha dabauNgi
Kuchh din apne saath toh rakh lo, phir parayii kehlauNgi
BooRhi jab tum ho jaogi, haal poochhne aauNgi
Waada karti hooN, tumhara dil kabhi na dukhauNgi
KhushiyoN ki maiN puRiya hooN, khushiyaN le kar aauNgi,
maiN khushiyaN le kar aauNgi.

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