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7th August 2005, 05:38 PM

Doston..

Ek arse se mehfil tham gayi thi...

Shukr guzaar hoon Aman bhai ka jinhone meri na majudgi mein is mehfil ki shama ko salamat rakha..aur garima ka jinhone ek arse baad meri nazar yaha wapas laa khadi kar di

Baat un dino ki hai jab aab-o-hawa kuch aur thi
zindigiyaan aur thi aur shariyaan aur thi

Jee haan...mehfil puraani hi sahi par waqt ka taqazaa kisi cheez ko rukne ki ijaazat nahi deta is tarah mehfil ki khoobsurti ko barqaraar rakhte hue aage badhte hai

aitebaar se aage badhte hai par is baar hum naye lafz ki Intakhaabi ka haq yaha ke sabse Baa-qaaedah Sukhanwar ko dete hai

<b> AMAN BHAI <b> guzaarish hai ki is mehfil ko aab ek sunheraa lafz de..

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8th August 2005, 12:18 PM

Mere veer Anu..........

shukriya bhai........lekin itni izzat.....mann bhar aaya ye pyar dekh kar.......

Mehfil ko aage badate hain....naye lafz se ....jo hai ULFAT

Jald hi is lafz ko le kar likhoonga........aur aap sabse bhi gujarish hai ki is mehfil ko naye lafz se aage badayin....


aapka apna.........



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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......

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10th August 2005, 03:39 PM

eitbaar par hi to jeete marate hai log
tootte hai is kadar ki aahe bharate hai log

tika hai yeh jahaan eitbaar par yaaron
warna to toote waade roz karte hai log


Wah ...Meri Sweet Pagal Sis....

sher bahut hi badiya likha hai......dahar ki haqeeqat......

aage bhi saath deti rehna..........

tumhara bhai.........



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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......

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10th August 2005, 03:40 PM

Mere Aziz doston....aur pyare Veer Anu.............

Shukriya....ye sab tumhara pyar hai.....varna main is kaabil kahan....

apne Veer ki mehfil ko ULFAT lafz se aage badaane ki koshish ki hai.....

lijiye pesh-e-nazar hai..........


Bezaar aakhon se lahoo tapka kyun hai……
Bejaan sa ye dil aaj dhadhka kyun hai…..

Zafa ke sholon mein tapak uth.Ti hai…..
Mere ghar hi ye aatish-kadaa kyun hai……

Kya Judaai aur khudaai kya hoti hai……
Mujhe hi ye haasil-e-mazaa kyun hai…..

Khoon karte hain bechain armaaon ka….
Qatl-e-Ulfat ka nazaara, saja kyun hai….

Teri duniya mein aur log bhi the khuda…..
^AMAN^ ko hi ye rog laga kyun hai…..



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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......

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18th August 2005, 06:47 PM

Kya Judaai aur khudaai kya hoti hai……
Mujhe hi ye haasil-e-mazaa kyun hai…..

Khoon karte hain bechain armaaon ka….
Qatl-e-Ulfat ka nazaara, saja kyun hai….


Pur asar aman veer ji...mehfil ki bulandi ke aap us maqaam tak hai jaha par yeh nacheez nazar andosh ho chuka hai..isi tarah aap aapne dil ki baat buland karte rahiYeGaa

jald hi aapki is ulfat ka jawaab lekar haazir hungaa...

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20th October 2005, 09:53 AM

Aman bhai..aur baaki mere azeezo..Mehfil ko aage badhaate hue ulfat par yeh kuch sher aapki nazar..


Dilnasheen kya kahen kaha ulfat nazar aayi
Tu aaya nahiN bas ek din teri khabhar aaYi

HuMNe socha ek umr dillagi mein kya paaya hai
phir bhi kismat thi tera dil mujhpar aaya hai

Woh jo guzar gaya usme bhi tera chehra tha
Band nazron mein meri jaan tu nazar aaYi

Tu aaya nahiN bas ek din teri khabhar aaYi
Chod di humne jab duniya to tu nazar aaYi

Agli nazm ki intezaar mein

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21st October 2005, 09:13 PM

ulfat pe likha hai Anu...arz hai...

yeh kehkahe, ye shaad lehja mera haal nahin
*raanaaiion mein aariz ki dil ka wabaal nahin

beauty

tujhko yeh dil hatheli pe rakh de aaye thhe
tere agosh ke *taqaddus mein ik umr jii aaye thhe

purity

rahi thee kab teri ulfat mein ikhtiyaari meri
tujhpe hi ruuh numaayaan na ho saki meri

raahaton ke rangeen aaiwaan sajaata hai
barbaad dil khud ko kuch yoon behlaata hai

mera zabt mere gunahon ki saza hai jaanaa
har saans pe tere liye dast-e-dua hai jaanaa

ab mere paas *azeeyaton ke siwa kuch bhi nahin
seene mein dabi aahon ke siwa kuch bhi nahin

pain

teri yaadon ke chand lamhon ke siwa kuch bhi nahin
lab-e-shirrin ki bisri baaton ke siwa kuch bhi nahin


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

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bahot khoob silsilaa merii nazar me aayaa hai Anu bhai.........

merii koshsih rahegii aur baaki members se guzaarish rahegii ke ise fir se active kiyaa jaae...... aap sab apni ghazals is par posr kijiye aur 'ębaarat-e-aSHqiya' ko fir se ek baar wo mukaam dijiye jiskii wo haqdaar hai.....

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bahot khoob silsilaa merii nazar me aayaa hai Anu bhai.........

merii koshsih rahegii aur baaki members se guzaarish rahegii ke ise fir se active kiyaa jaae...... aap sab apni ghazals is par posr kijiye aur 'ębaarat-e-aSHqiya' ko fir se ek baar wo mukaam dijiye jiskii wo haqdaar hai.....

Shaad......
Shaad bhai - aapki to ek dafn nazraane ko phir hawaa de di. Yeh baat un dino ki hai jab dil befiqr hawa mein jhoom raha tha, kuch das baras huye hai mujhe yaad hai kya khoobsurat alam tha SDC ka aur kya khoob mehfil saji thi.

Aapka bataur-e-khaas shukriyaa adaa karna chahunga ki aapne wapas is dehleez par lakar khada kiya hai mujhe.

Chaliye ek nayi shuruaat karte hai is mehfil mein, ek naye lafz se shuruaat karte hai.

Jo log yahan pehli baar shirkat kar rahe hai, iltejaa hai ki pehli post kar likhe rules ko ek baar padh le.

Aasaan se lafz se shuruaat kar raha hoon aur jaise jaise bazm mein raunak badhegi lafz ka wazn bhi badhtaa jaayega

Naya lafz hai 'jaan'



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Anu bhai chaliye jab aaghaaz ho hi chukaa hai to main pesh karnaa chahungaaa wo kalaam jisko maine JAAN nahii JAANA ko devote kiyaa thaa..... hope you all will like that....



yoo.n to koii na thaa meraa tere pahle jaanaa,
phir huaa yoo.n ke mere pyaar ko tuune maanaa.

jaantaa hoo.n nahii mumkin hai tere bin jeenaa,
ye bhii maaloom hai aasaa.n nahii tujh ko paanaa.

maine ab tak jalaa rakkhaa hai charaag-e-ulfat,
bhoole bhaTke sahii ek baar tum zaroor aanaa.

khat unhe de ke aye qaasid suno itnaa karnaa,
khaak us shahr kii do muTThiyaa.n liye aanaa.

khwaahishe.n aur bhii hai.n shaad tere dil me magar,
kyun faqat kar rahaa hai dil teraa Jaanaa jaanaa.



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Anu bhai chaliye jab aaghaaz ho hi chukaa hai to main pesh karnaa chahungaaa wo kalaam jisko maine JAAN nahii JAANA ko devote kiyaa thaa..... hope you all will like that....



yoo.n to koii na thaa meraa tere pahle jaanaa,
phir huaa yoo.n ke mere pyaar ko tuune maanaa.

jaantaa hoo.n nahii mumkin hai tere bin jeenaa,
ye bhii maaloom hai aasaa.n nahii tujh ko paanaa.

maine ab tak jalaa rakkhaa hai charaag-e-ulfat,
bhoole bhaTke sahii ek baar tum zaroor aanaa.

khat unhe de ke aye qaasid suno itnaa karnaa,
khaak us shahr kii do muTThiyaa.n liye aanaa.

khwaahishe.n aur bhii hai.n shaad tere dil me magar,
kyun faqat kar rahaa hai dil teraa Jaanaa jaanaa.



Shaad.....
Wah Shaad bhai jaana hi sahi par is baat ki khushi hai ki aapne aaghaaz to kiya. Behad umdaa ghazal huyi hai bhai bahut mithaas hai isme yun to puri ghazal pur asar nazar aayi par is ek sher par do chaar baar wah nikli dil se.


khat unhe de ke aye qaasid suno itnaa karnaa,
khaak us shahr kii do muTThiyaa.n liye aanaa.


Umeed hai aur log bhi is bazm ko aage muqarrar karenge.



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Wah Shaad bhai jaana hi sahi par is baat ki khushi hai ki aapne aaghaaz to kiya. Behad umdaa ghazal huyi hai bhai bahut mithaas hai isme yun to puri ghazal pur asar nazar aayi par is ek sher par do chaar baar wah nikli dil se.


khat unhe de ke aye qaasid suno itnaa karnaa,
khaak us shahr kii do muTThiyaa.n liye aanaa.


Umeed hai aur log bhi is bazm ko aage muqarrar karenge.

aapki inaayat hai janaab jo aapne hame is qaabil samjhaa ke ghazal aapko pasand aa sakii....

main guzaaris karungaa baaki ke members se ke is silsile ko aaage badhaane me apna keemtii waqt den.......


agar poora kalaam na likh saken to chand sher hi likh den... magar ye silsilaa chalne den......

shukriyaa

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Jaan lafz ko lekar likhne ko koshish ki hai, aap sab ki nazar

jaan nikal gayi jo meri jaan chale gaye
qaid dil ke mere armaan chale gaye

qusoor tha mera kabhi zikr to kiya hota
khamoshi se bandh kar samaan chale gaye

subah subah jaha hota tha hasna rona
kar ke soona mera makaan chale gaye

'mast' rehte hai gumnaam in deewaron mein
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Jaan lafz ko lekar likhne ko koshish ki hai, aap sab ki nazar

jaan nikal gayi jo meri jaan chale gaye
qaid dil ke mere armaan chale gaye

qusoor tha mera kabhi zikr to kiya hota
khamoshi se bandh kar samaan chale gaye

subah subah jaha hota tha hasna rona
kar ke soona mera makaan chale gaye

'mast' rehte hai gumnaam in deewaron mein
maikashi mein hote yun badnaam chale gaye



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Adaab shaad jii..,anu jii...
Bahut hee achcha silsila hai ye aur sach kahoon aise kisi silsile ki khwahish bhi thi dil me..jjisse likhne ka ek naya bahana mile..aap dono ne bahut hee achche kalaam pesh kiye...koshish karoongi ki mai bhi apni koi koshish aap sab se share kar paun.....
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Bahut hee achcha silsila hai ye aur sach kahoon aise kisi silsile ki khwahish bhi thi dil me..jjisse likhne ka ek naya bahana mile..aap dono ne bahut hee achche kalaam pesh kiye...koshish karoongi ki mai bhi apni koi koshish aap sab se share kar paun.....
filhaal to aap logon ne interwiev me busy kar rakha hai mujhe.......
jaldi hee shirkat karoongi...


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kia hii zaberdast qism ka "silsila" hy Mast bhai ....
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to kabhi karta pashemaaN

rakhta hai ik alag shaaN

nahi is ka koi baaghbaaN

agar ho jaye kisi ko yahaaN

nazroN se haal hota bayaaN

lagta to hai be-zubaaN

per leta hai kayi imtehaaN

hewaaN ko banaye insaaN

yeHi hai ishQ ki shaaN

gar kar le koi iss jahaN

saath rehta hai daaemaaN

teri doori se dil hai pareshaaN

jaaN! maiN yahaN tu kahaN?


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kia hii zaberdast qism ka "silsila" hy Mast bhai ....
muaafi ka talab-gaar hooN ky is haseen safhe ko aaj tak na dekh paya ...

chaleN lafz "jaaN" per meri aik mukhtasar si nazm... :-


mohabbat ki daastaaN

zarra sun toH meri jaaN

ishQ karna nahi asaaN

kabhi karta hai hairaaN

to kabhi karta pashemaaN

rakhta hai ik alag shaaN

nahi is ka koi baaghbaaN

agar ho jaye kisi ko yahaaN

nazroN se haal hota bayaaN

lagta to hai be-zubaaN

per leta hai kayi imtehaaN

hewaaN ko banaye insaaN

yeHi hai ishQ ki shaaN

gar kar le koi iss jahaN

saath rehta hai daaemaaN

teri doori se dil hai pareshaaN

jaaN! maiN yahaN tu kahaN?


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Lafz jaan par ek koshish. ...umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....

Ab maan bhi lo jana tum jaan hamare ho.
dil se kahiin na jana mehmaan hamare ho.

Tum Rang e muhabbat me dooba sa ek tarana
Sun kar labon pe chhaye muskaan hamare ho.

Veeraan se raahon par mahki si saba ho tum.
Tum Khilte se phoolon ka baagan hamare ho.

Haathon ki hina ho tum kajal bhi ho ankhon ka...
Har shokh adaa ka tum samaan hamaare ho.

Rahbar ho madhu ke tum anjaan se safar me...
Bas saath tera chaahun armaan hamare ho.



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wow........... a big woowwwwwwwwwwwwww...

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muaafi ka talab-gaar hooN ky is haseen safhe ko aaj tak na dekh paya ...

chaleN lafz "jaaN" per meri aik mukhtasar si nazm... :-


mohabbat ki daastaaN

zarra sun toH meri jaaN

ishQ karna nahi asaaN

kabhi karta hai hairaaN

to kabhi karta pashemaaN

rakhta hai ik alag shaaN

nahi is ka koi baaghbaaN

agar ho jaye kisi ko yahaaN

nazroN se haal hota bayaaN

lagta to hai be-zubaaN

per leta hai kayi imtehaaN

hewaaN ko banaye insaaN

yeHi hai ishQ ki shaaN

gar kar le koi iss jahaN

saath rehta hai daaemaaN

teri doori se dil hai pareshaaN

jaaN! maiN yahaN tu kahaN?


daaemaaN : forever






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Lafz jaan par ek koshish. ...umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....

Ab maan bhi lo jana tum jaan hamare ho.
dil se kahiin na jana mehmaan hamare ho.

Tum Rang e muhabbat me dooba sa ek tarana
Sun kar labon pe chhaye muskaan hamare ho.

Veeraan se raahon par mahki si saba ho tum.
Tum Khilte se phoolon ka baagan hamare ho.

Haathon ki hina ho tum kajal bhi ho ankhon ka...
Har shokh adaa ka tum samaan hamaare ho.

Rahbar ho madhu ke tum anjaan se safar me...
Bas saath tera chaahun armaan hamare ho.



Allaah ye ek din ke lye mian site se door kyaa huaaaa yahaan to doston ne ghazal ki yoon mahfil jamaaii hai ke bas ham iske ras me doobe hue hain...

ek se ek kalam hue hain aap dono ki taraf se hassan bhia ur madhu saahibaa..... beshaq aapne jaan me rang bhar ke jaan me jaan daal dii hai...

bahot acchii tarah se nibhaa rahe hain ye silsilaa sab... mujhe bahot khushi ho rahii hai ke sab actively participate kar rahe hain.....

Salaamat rahiye .... khush rahiye....

Shaad....


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wow........... a big woowwwwwwwwwwwwww...

kia hii zaberdast qism ka "silsila" hy Mast bhai ....
muaafi ka talab-gaar hooN ky is haseen safhe ko aaj tak na dekh paya ...

chaleN lafz "jaaN" per meri aik mukhtasar si nazm... :-


mohabbat ki daastaaN

zarra sun toH meri jaaN

ishQ karna nahi asaaN

kabhi karta hai hairaaN

to kabhi karta pashemaaN

rakhta hai ik alag shaaN

nahi is ka koi baaghbaaN

agar ho jaye kisi ko yahaaN

nazroN se haal hota bayaaN

lagta to hai be-zubaaN

per leta hai kayi imtehaaN

hewaaN ko banaye insaaN

yeHi hai ishQ ki shaaN

gar kar le koi iss jahaN

saath rehta hai daaemaaN

teri doori se dil hai pareshaaN

jaaN! maiN yahaN tu kahaN?


daaemaaN : forever






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Lafz jaan par ek koshish. ...umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....

Ab maan bhi lo jana tum jaan hamare ho.
dil se kahiin na jana mehmaan hamare ho.

Tum Rang e muhabbat me dooba sa ek tarana
Sun kar labon pe chhaye muskaan hamare ho.

Veeraan se raahon par mahki si saba ho tum.
Tum Khilte se phoolon ka baagan hamare ho.

Haathon ki hina ho tum kajal bhi ho ankhon ka...
Har shokh adaa ka tum samaan hamaare ho.

Rahbar ho madhu ke tum anjaan se safar me...
Bas saath tera chaahun armaan hamare ho.



Allaah ye ek din ke lye mian site se door kyaa huaaaa yahaan to doston ne ghazal ki yoon mahfil jamaaii hai ke bas ham iske ras me doobe hue hain...

ek se ek kalam hue hain aap dono ki taraf se hassan bhia ur madhu saahibaa..... beshaq aapne jaan me rang bhar ke jaan me jaan daal dii hai...

bahot acchii tarah se nibhaa rahe hain ye silsilaa sab... mujhe bahot khushi ho rahii hai ke sab actively participate kar rahe hain.....

Salaamat rahiye .... khush rahiye....

Shaad....


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Lafz jaan par ek koshish. ...umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....

Ab maan bhi lo jana tum jaan hamare ho.
dil se kahiin na jana mehmaan hamare ho.

Tum Rang e muhabbat me dooba sa ek tarana
Sun kar labon pe chhaye muskaan hamare ho.

Veeraan se raahon par mahki si saba ho tum.
Tum Khilte se phoolon ka baagan hamare ho.

Haathon ki hina ho tum kajal bhi ho ankhon ka...
Har shokh adaa ka tum samaan hamaare ho.

Rahbar ho madhu ke tum anjaan se safar me...
Bas saath tera chaahun armaan hamare ho.
arrry waaaah...

kia baat hy Madhu jee...

ishQ ky rung mein rangi yeh ranga rung tehreer bohat hii lutf de gayi....

aise hii meHfil roshan karte rahiye .. aur humain mehzooz aur mehzoor karte rahiye..


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Allaah ye ek din ke lye mian site se door kyaa huaaaa yahaan to doston ne ghazal ki yoon mahfil jamaaii hai ke bas ham iske ras me doobe hue hain...

ek se ek kalam hue hain aap dono ki taraf se hassan bhia ur madhu saahibaa..... beshaq aapne jaan me rang bhar ke jaan me jaan daal dii hai...

bahot acchii tarah se nibhaa rahe hain ye silsilaa sab... mujhe bahot khushi ho rahii hai ke sab actively participate kar rahe hain.....

Salaamat rahiye .... khush rahiye....

Shaad....
nawaazish hy Shaad bhai ...

bohat hii mazeedaar silsilay hy....
issy aur aagy le jaana chaiye!


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nawaazish hy Shaad bhai ...

bohat hii mazeedaar silsilay hy....
issy aur aagy le jaana chaiye!
jee hassan bhai..... ham poorii koshish karenge ke ye silsilaa aage aur aage badhtaa Jaae...

bas is koshish me hame aap sab doston ki zaruurat padegii... ummeed hai aap sab saath dete rahenge......

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jee hassan bhai..... ham poorii koshish karenge ke ye silsilaa aage aur aage badhtaa Jaae...

bas is koshish me hame aap sab doston ki zaruurat padegii... ummeed hai aap sab saath dete rahenge......

Shukriyaa

Shaad.....
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Allaah ye ek din ke lye mian site se door kyaa huaaaa yahaan to doston ne ghazal ki yoon mahfil jamaaii hai ke bas ham iske ras me doobe hue hain...

ek se ek kalam hue hain aap dono ki taraf se hassan bhia ur madhu saahibaa..... beshaq aapne jaan me rang bhar ke jaan me jaan daal dii hai...

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Salaamat rahiye .... khush rahiye....

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behad shukriyaa Mast bhai ...

saath dete rahiye ga... salamat rahen ..




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kia baat hy Madhu jee...

ishQ ky rung mein rangi yeh ranga rung tehreer bohat hii lutf de gayi....

aise hii meHfil roshan karte rahiye .. aur humain mehzooz aur mehzoor karte rahiye..
Shukriya hassan jee...................



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Lafz jaan par ek koshish. ...umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....

Ab maan bhi lo jana tum jaan hamare ho.
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Tum Rang e muhabbat me dooba sa ek tarana
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Kabhi socha nahi tha ki aisi pur asar ghazlon se rubaruu hogi yeh mehfil. Aapko mast ki daad ke saath saath salaam bhi karta hooN.

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Allaah ye ek din ke lye mian site se door kyaa huaaaa yahaan to doston ne ghazal ki yoon mahfil jamaaii hai ke bas ham iske ras me doobe hue hain...

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Mast saahab aadaab.... bajaa farmaaya aapne ke ye site nahii ek adab hai ek aadaat hai ek lahzaa hai.......

beshaq agar ek din bhi door jaaen to khaaamiyaazaa bhugatnaa hi padtaa hai, ke doston ke aise pyaare pyaare kalaam se nazar chook jaatii hai.....

Ek sawaal thaa aapse.... kyaa abhi lafz JAAN par hi ghazal kahnii hai.....??

aglaa lafz kitne dino me pesh kiyaa jaawegaa......

aapke jawaab ka muntazir....

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Mast saahab aadaab.... bajaa farmaaya aapne ke ye site nahii ek adab hai ek aadaat hai ek lahzaa hai.......

beshaq agar ek din bhi door jaaen to khaaamiyaazaa bhugatnaa hi padtaa hai, ke doston ke aise pyaare pyaare kalaam se nazar chook jaatii hai.....

Ek sawaal thaa aapse.... kyaa abhi lafz JAAN par hi ghazal kahnii hai.....??

aglaa lafz kitne dino me pesh kiyaa jaawegaa......

aapke jawaab ka muntazir....

Khaaksaar..
Aapka sawaal se aapki aage likhne ki bechaaini saaf jhalak rahi hai aur kyun na ho bazm ka mahool hi kuch aisa bana hua hai..

amooman to hidaayat 5-7 mukarrar ghazalon ki hai aur mashallah 4 nayaab nazraane to aap logon ne padh liye hai.

Main ise 1 din ka aur waqt deta hoon aur aapse iltejaa hai ki kal naya alfaaz aap bhi adaa farmaayein is mehfil mein.

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Shaad bhai - mehfil naye ashaar ke intezaar mein aabshaar baha rahi hai, jaldi aayein aur is mehfil ko aage badhayeiN.



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Mast bhai .. shaad bhai to nahi aaye .. maiN aa gaya ...


‘parStaar’ jaaN se haara ik saraapa-e-husn pe!
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Amooman to hidaayat 5-7 mukarrar ghazalon ki hai aur mashallah 4 nayaab nazraane to aap logon ne padh liye hai.

Main ise 1 din ka aur waqt deta hoon aur aapse iltejaa hai ki kal naya alfaaz aap bhi adaa farmaayein is mehfil mein.

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Chaliye bhai yahi sahii....................

hamaari taraf se is baar ka nayaa word hai.....

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Chaliye bhai yahi sahii....................

hamaari taraf se is baar ka nayaa word hai.....

deedaar.


awesome word .. Shaad bhai ..

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ab muamm'a yeh hy ky poori ghazal share karni hy ya sirf couplet ?


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