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19th May 2003, 04:59 AM
Pehle waqt bhi hota tha,pehle pyar bhi hota tha
pehle yaad bhi aati thi , to intezaar bhi hota tha ab naa wo din, na mahine ,na woo saal rahe hai pehle ummed bhi hoti thi,dil beqarar bhi hota tha ab woo raat nahi, woo baat nahi, woo saath nahi pehle nend bhi ati thi,kwad me dedar bhi hota tha zeba likhti rahegi................. |
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19th May 2003, 12:38 PM
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19th May 2003, 01:31 PM
Salam O Allecum Zeba Ji,,
Buhat Hi Aacha Kaha Ha Aap Na,, Waqat , Waqat ki Bat ha,, Waqat , Halat or Khayalat kabhi aak Gasa Nahi Rehata,, Keep smiling, B happy, b brave, and B ALIVE zs |
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19th May 2003, 05:40 PM
Thanks bano ji,
aap ko yeh gazal acchi lagi is ka shukriya. zeshaan ji, walekum assalam,aap ka bhi shukriya is ki padhne ke liye aur iski tareef karne ke liye. zeba |
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19th May 2003, 07:20 PM
zeba ji
bohat achcha likha hai aap ne. shairy takraar zabardast hai aur alfaz mein eik naghmagi hai. shabash zeba keep it up. or haan, mein ne bhe eik nazm shairy. dard mein kal post ki hai, waqt mile to eik nazar daal len, aur please agar aap apni tanqeedi raaey bhejen to mujhe shukhi ho gi. take care and wishing you all the best. musharrafhusain |
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19th May 2003, 08:20 PM
Zaba ji,
Kaise ho aap? Aapko lag raha hoga ke aapko bahut der baad reply karr raha huun main..shayad aapko parna kam kar diya hoga. Magar aisa hargiz nahin hai..aapki likhi har post main zaroor parta huun..par jab dekhta huun ke pehle hi itne log aapki tareef kar chuke hain to ,main ghabra kar raply nahin karta kahin meri tareef itne bare logon ke beech feeki na lage. Khair aapne ye ghazal bhi apni har ghazal ki tarah khaabsurat likhi hai.. Aage bhi likhte rehna Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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19th May 2003, 10:42 PM
musharraf ji ,mai aap ki nazam pe zaroor nazar daloongi,shukriya aap ne waqt nikaala meri gazal ko padne ke liyeh aur iski tareef karne ke liye.
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19th May 2003, 10:44 PM
varinder ji,
aap ka behad shukriya aap ne finally reply ki to sahi,itna waqt nikaal isko padhne ka aur iski tareef ke liye bhi shukriya. mai koshish karoongi accha likh sakoon. zeba |
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