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18th April 2005, 02:15 AM
My 1000 post is been completed by this post, one more journey is about to begin after this one,
_________________________________ jab jab khamoshi ko seene se lagaaya hai,teri kasam ro ro ker bas tujhko bulaya hai,ye or baat hai ke mere aansoo kissi ne nahi dekhe,Magar mere lafzon me aansoon ki nami ko mehsoos ker or aaja... CHali AA chali aa ... Mujhse milna hai to phir khud ko mita ke chali aa Aa jaa ke jaraa himmat jutaa ke chali aa Mai bulaata houn tujhe dil se,mere liye tu chali aa Deewaron ko raaste se hataa ke chali aa Mujhse milna hai to phir khud ko mita ke chali aa aa ja ke jaraa himmat jutaa ke chali aa Chali aa ke aankh num hai,Aa ja ke waqt cum hai chaahaton ki dagar me,jajbaaton ke safar me, Mujhper tu apna tan mann luutaa ke chali aa Mujhse milna hai to phir khud ko mita ke chali aa aa jaa ke jaraa himmat jutaa ke chali aa aa ja meri ragon me , lahoo bann ke daud aa ja aa ja mere labhon pe, Apni khushbu chodh aa ja Tu hai meri ye jamaane ko bataa ke chali aa Mujhse milna hai to phir khud ko mita ke chali aa aa jaa ke jaraa himmat jutaa ke chali aa karan kehta hai aarzoo hai,Mujhe teri just-ju hai Aa ja tu khud ko khoo ke,khud ko paa le meri hoke Tu Aasmaa ko sir per uttha ke chali aa Mujhse milna hai to phir khud ko mita ke chali aa aa ja ke jara himmat jutaa ke chali aa Tera chehra jo aaj mere jeene ka sabab hai,mai tera chehra he na dekhun ye teri zidd bhee ghazab hai,chal tera sitam hai to kubool hai mujhe tera nazrana,Zindgi na sahi to maut bann ke paas aaja karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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18th April 2005, 02:22 AM
First of all congratulations on completing 1000 posts...
a nice post to bring up your thousandth post....glad to be the first one to read it.... Tera chehra jo aaj mere jeene ka sabab hai,mai tera chehra he na dekhun ye teri zidd bhee ghazab hai,chal tera sitam hai to kubool hai mujhe tera nazrana,Zindgi na sahi to maut bann ke paas aaja kya kahoon.....jab puri nazam padhi aur end mein yeh padha...to yehi padhta reh gaya....kaha na mein simple hi padh pata hoon....lol... good really nice Thanks Rohin |
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1000 post mubarak ho |
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1000 post mubarak ho -
18th April 2005, 03:11 AM
tumne pukara aur hum chale aae
 bahot achha likha hai karan humesha ki tarh en shabdo mai kho gai humesha yun he likhte raho hum padte rahe congratulation on ur 1000 post tumhari aane wali aur har jurney kamyab ho bye roji |
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18th April 2005, 08:25 AM
first of all karan congratulations for completing 1000 post
khuda se yehi dua hai ki aap aise likhte jayiye aur khush rahiye..... aur ju nazm apne likhi hai wo sach meinkamal ki likhi hai apne karan itni pyarr nazm hai ki padte padte ji nahi bhar raha sach mein nice wording.....and different from other.. TUM MERI AANKH KE TEVAR NA BHOOLA PAOGE ABKAHI BAAT KO SAMJHO GE TU YAAD AAOGI HUM NE KHUSHIYO KI TARAH DUKH BHI IKHATTE DEKHE HAI SAFA-E-ZEST KO PALTO GE TU YAAD AAOGI IS JUDAI MEI TUM ANDER SE BIKHER JAOGE KISI MAZUR KO DEKHO GE TU YAAD AAOGI ISI ANDAAZ MEIN HOTEY THE MUKHATIB MUJHSE KHAT KISI AUR KO LIKHGE TU YAAD AAOGI SARD RAATO KE MEHKATE HUYE SANATO MEIN KISI PHOOLO KO CHUMO GE TU YAAD AAOGI AAJ TU MEHFILE YARAN PE HU MAGROOR BUHUT JAB KABHI TOOT KE BIKHAROGE TU YAAD AAOGI.... UNFORGTEBALE SIMRAN ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ju PaL mIlE uSs PaL kO jEe lO sHaYaD kAl Ho Na Ho...... love is seeing yourself in someone's eyes and finding yourself in somebody's heart!!!!!(*-*) (¨`·.·´¨) Always `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ ITS STATE OF MIND..... |
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Hii rohin |
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Hii rohin -
19th April 2005, 08:56 AM
Hmm 1000 post ho gayi poori iss site me
Khair ab ek saal bhee hone ko aaya umeed hai ki safar or lamba chale jab tak zindgi itna masroof na ker de ki saans lene ki fursat na rahe tab tak aate rahenge.. dil ke nagme sunaate rahenge izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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Hii roji |
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Hii roji -
19th April 2005, 08:59 AM
hi roji..
bade din baad nazar aayi khair .. tumse jyada kaun jaanta hai mujhe? humne pukara or tum chale aaye tumhare post bhee badh ker 27 ho gaye hain i wonder augar ye sabhi repllys sirf meri poetrys me he hain shayad tumhe or kaheen kissi post per dekha he nahi izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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19th April 2005, 12:39 PM
hi karan
tumne sahi kaha ye sab replay tumhari he post per hain aur kahi jaati he nahi to dekhoge kese jo shabd dil ko chu jaen essa wo tumhari post ki jagah aur kahi dikhe he nahi esliye kahi jaati nahi. haan kuch aur bhi log hain jo bahot achha likhte hain ...but nothing like urs likhte raho .... take care bye roji |
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