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23rd January 2005, 09:04 PM
Doston..kehne ko sher hai par bahut samay laga ek baat ko is nazm ka roop dene mein..umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi..
aaj talak kuch kho jaane par, apna apna karta tha apna apna karte karte mein bhul gaya apnaa saaya peeche se aab kandhe par, ahahat karte hai sannaate haste hai woh saare kehkar kya khoya aur kya paaya aaj ek raahguzar se seekhi maine yeh duniyaadaari aadhi pyaali chai mili par baant ke woh na pachtaaya aadhi peekar laga tha jaane maine tha itnaa puchaa baaki aadhi kiski hai aur mand mand woh muskaaya bolo woh aadhi takdeer ki hai aur hai woh meri yaadon ki mera sahaara bankar jinhone naam-e-wafaa phir dohraaya bahut ajab thi itni si kahaani aise hi ek musaafir ki apni woh takdeer milaa kar usne kuch tha batlaaya ek mein hoon aur ek woh hai yaaron, gham hum sabka unta hai par dekho nayaab shaks ne yaadon se ghar ko ujlaayaa apna apna karte karte mein bhul gaya apnaa saaya khud hi mein khoya tha aur dosh inhe detaa aaya... aaj talak kuch kho jaane par... Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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23rd January 2005, 10:33 PM
Lovely sir jee,
wonderful yaar. Thanks Rohin |
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24th January 2005, 09:47 AM
aaj talak kuch kho jaane par, apna apna karta tha
apna apna karte karte mein bhul gaya apnaa saaya bahut ajab thi itni si kahaani aise hi ek musaafir ki apni woh takdeer milaa kar usne kuch tha batlaaya ek mein hoon aur ek woh hai yaaron, gham hum sabka unta hai par dekho nayaab shaks ne yaadon se ghar ko ujlaayaa Dear Anu! Bhaut khoob... Mujhe bahut pasand aayi aapki yeh nazm bhai... though the complete post i beautiful...but the above lines were just 2 goood.... Aage bhi aise hi likte rehna.... TC  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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24th January 2005, 01:44 PM
Pyare Mast Bhai,
Samaj sakta hu kitni mehnat karni pardi hogi. Bhai itne seedhe alfazo mein bohot gehri baat ka izhaar kiya hai jo dil ke bohot kareeb se guzri hai. Humesha ki tarha lajawaab aur nayaab kalaam. Khush raho mere bhai. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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24th January 2005, 10:53 PM
aaj talak kuch kho jaane par, apna apna karta tha
apna apna karte karte mein bhul gaya apnaa saaya Mast veer..... bahut khoob aur acchi guftgu pesh ki hai mere bhai..... tumhare kalam ke aage likhne ki zuraat kar raha hoon..... ek anjaan sa shaks mujh se takraya aur bola..... pehchaan mujhe main hoon tera hi saaya...... bhool baitha tha mujhe tu kai barsoon se...... kyun tune gair ko apna tha banayaa..... main na choodonga kabhi tujhe rahoon mein..... rahoonga saath tere ban ke tera humsaaya..... ek tak dekha aur suna uski har baat ko...... phir mud ke dekha ubharti hui raat ko...... kaha, gum ho jaata hai tu bhi andherron mein..... nahi tu mera humsafar, tu hai sirf ek saaya...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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25th January 2005, 03:50 PM
nice..written...
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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27th January 2005, 07:51 PM
Rohin dost..aapki di izzat aur pyar sedhaa dil mein utar gaye...aage bhi umeed hai aapko yeh kalaam yunhi pasand aate rahenGee....aur aap aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahenGee
aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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27th January 2005, 07:53 PM
Pulkit bhai...aapka saath hamesha se aur likhne ka haunslaa deta aaaya hai...aapko yeh nazm bhi pasand mein apne aap ko khushnaseeb samajhta hoon...aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa
-aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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27th January 2005, 07:55 PM
Salim bhai aap sab ke pyaar ke aage koi mehnat khadi nahi ho sakti aapne is kalaam ko bhi seene se lagaya .. bas aur kya chahiye...
kehne ki zaroorat to nahi ki aage bhi saath dete rahiYeGaa kyunki aapka saath to hamesha se mere saath raha hai -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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28th January 2005, 01:20 AM
hi ur words took me in some dream world to think about a lot of differnet things, i could make a lot of differnet pictures but not fix them onone paper so one whole scene could be created....nice and deep thoughts...
Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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2nd February 2005, 08:22 PM
akant bhai..do lafzon mein aapne jo izzat di uska abhaari hoon...aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa
-aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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2nd February 2005, 08:25 PM
Priya Ji..diverse and complex pictures are often related to each other..it's like a puzzle you only win if you know the order they go in....my words my thoughts were able to make a dream for you that's really impressing and I hope to continue down that lane until these pieces reveal a meaning in them...
yours Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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