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31st January 2006, 06:35 PM
raat yeh bhi nikal gayi har raat ki tarah
humari aakhri hui tujhse mulakat ki tarah! bhigo diya phir sirhana aansoo baha bahake, roke ruke na aansoo kisi barsaat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal.......................................... tere khat,tasveer,tohfe,har pyaar ki nishaani rakhi sambhal sambhal heere jawaraat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal............................................. .. chaukhat par aayi jab humari badnaseebhi, tab tum bhi badal gaye humare halat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal............................................ tamam umrh tere diye gamon ko hi humne, seene se lagaye rakha teri saughat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal.......................................... sada nafrat hi paayi humne jisko bhi chaha, pyaar mila bhi to humko khairaat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal......................................... log arthi ko jab meri lekar ghar se nikle, janaza"roshani"ka laga kisi baraat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal.......................................... |
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Re: raat yeh bhi nikal gayi har raat ki tarah* -
31st January 2006, 06:41 PM
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wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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31st January 2006, 06:47 PM
Di as a poem ye bahoot achhi hai.. lekin.......
aap jaanti ho mai kya kahungee... aap apna achhe se khayaal rakhiyega  |
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Re: raat yeh bhi nikal gayi har raat ki tarah* -
31st January 2006, 07:07 PM
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roshani ji adaab,,, likha to bahaut hi khoob hai aapne magar yuh haal_e_dil ki daastan par daad dena khatta hogi hamari... hum nahi jaante ki yeh daur kaunsa hai aapki zindagi ka magar sambhal paana bahaut zaroori hai.... apna khayaal rakhiyega... shayad aapka dost... saakib... |
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Re: raat yeh bhi nikal gayi har raat ki tarah* -
31st January 2006, 07:20 PM
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Re: raat yeh bhi nikal gayi har raat ki tarah* -
31st January 2006, 07:32 PM
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jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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31st January 2006, 08:07 PM
diye ke charoN aur ujla sa savera hai...
khud jiske neeche ghana andhera hai... Jas mujhe kuch kehne ki jaroorat nahi .. par tumne likha itna jabardast hai ki ... kuch kehna bhi nahi chahta... bas ise likhawat ka naam diye hi tareef karta chala ja raha hun.. bohat acche lage alfaaz aur saadgi bhi ... flow barkraar raha ... par tab bhi yahi kahuNga .. doosroN ko gud khaane se rokne se pehle tum cheeni bhi band kar do... samajh gayi hogi jo maiN kehna chahta huN,... kyuNki umeedeN sabki hoti hai unse ... jo unse umeed rakhta hai ... tumhara apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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1st February 2006, 08:52 AM
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its a pleasure to knw tht u loved reading this thread,thx so much for always appreciating my thoughts.take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love urs di |
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Re: raat yeh bhi nikal gayi har raat ki tarah* -
1st February 2006, 10:52 AM
bhigo diya phir sirhana aansoo baha bahake,
roke ruke na aansoo kisi barsaat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal.......................................... tere khat,tasveer,tohfe,har pyaar ki nishaani rakhi sambhal sambhal heere jawaraat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal............................................. .. log arthi ko jab meri lekar ghar se nikle, janaza"roshani"ka laga kisi baraat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal NAMASHKAR ROSHNI JI kya baat hai ...!!! aapka har andaaz pehle se jayada asardaar lagta hai,,,yeh rachna to dil mein utar gayi,,,yun to har sher shaandaar hai,,magar yeh 3 sher behad pasand aaye...meri daad kuboool kijiye..likhte rahiye...apna khayal rakhiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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1st February 2006, 12:55 PM
ROSHNI JI NAMASKAAR....
SUCH KAHE TO AAP KE EK-EK ALFAAZ NE HILA K RAKH DIYA..AUR ANKHE NAM HO GAYI...SUCH ME KITNI KHOOBSOORTI SE AAPNE APNE DARD KO WAZENDAAR SUR-TAAL ME DHAAL KAR KALAAM KA ROOP DE DALA HAI...HAM POORI TAREH SE AAPKE HUNER K KAAYAL HO GAYE....AUR SUCH MANIYE..DUKH B HOTA HAI..APKO ITNA DUKHI DEKHKAR...BHAGWAAN AAPKO SAKOON DE..YAHI DUA KARTE HAI... OK BYE TAKE CARE |
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himmat se kam lo |
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himmat se kam lo -
1st February 2006, 02:26 PM
raat yeh bhi nikal gayi har raat ki tarah
humari aakhri hui tujhse mulakat ki tarah! bhigo diya phir sirhana aansoo baha bahake, roke ruke na aansoo kisi barsaat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal.......................................... tere khat,tasveer,tohfe,har pyaar ki nishaani rakhi sambhal sambhal heere jawaraat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal............................................. .. chaukhat par aayi jab humari badnaseebhi, tab tum bhi badal gaye humare halat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal............................................ tamam umrh tere diye gamon ko hi humne, seene se lagaye rakha teri saughat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal.......................................... sada nafrat hi paayi humne jisko bhi chaha, pyaar mila bhi to humko khairaat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal......................................... log arthi ko jab meri lekar ghar se nikle, janaza"roshani"ka laga kisi baraat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal.......................................... roshani ji Namaste,,, likha to bahaut hi khoob hai aapne magar yuh hare huye fauji ki taraha dil ki daastan ki wah wah karna galat hoga i... mai yeha nahi jaanta ki yeh daur yeh panna kaunsa hai aapki zindagi ka .. magar sambhal paana bahaut zaroori hai.... gir kar phir se sambhal na hi to jindagi hai hai na... Shayad niche di gayi kuch panktiya aap ki kuch madat karegi... Laharo se dar kar nauka par nahi hoti Koshish karne walon ki har nahi hoti ! Nanhi chinti jab dana lekar chalti hai Chadhti diwaron par saou bar phisalti hai Chadhkar girna girkar chadhana na akharta hai Akhir uski mehanat bekar nahi hoti, Koshis karne walon ki har nahi hoti ! Dubkiya sindhu me gotakhor lagata hai Ja jakar Cali hath lout ata hai Milte na sahaj hi moti gahare pani me Badhata duna utsah isi hairani me Mudhi uski khali har bar nahi hoti Koshis karne walon ki har nahi hoti ! Asaphalta ek chunouti hai – swikar karo kya kami raha gai dekho aur sudhar karo jab tak saphal na ho nind chain ka tyag karo tum Sanghrsho ka maidan chod mat bhago tum Kuch kiye bina hi jay-jay kar nahi hoti Koshis karne walon ki har nahi hoti ! |
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1st February 2006, 07:18 PM
har taraf mujhe roshni ki jarurat giti hai,
mujhe hi nahi balki sabko roshni pyari lagti hai. BY SONU IT'S HOT |
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2nd February 2006, 10:41 AM
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i know sumtimes words of mine make u hurted but then its gud to see tht u appreciated as a poem atleast. i know wat u wanted to say. kehte hai na sum words are well judged in silence, n i can make out ur thoughts from ur reply. neways thx for appreciating it as a poem. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love roshani |
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3rd February 2006, 04:47 PM
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its a pleasure to know tht u loved reading it as words. well i loved reading ur veiws. there r times in life wen u feel so low but wen friends like u r there all pains are washed away. yeh shayad aapke dost wali baat ko aaj mein jo kashma kash hai aapke maan mein , let me clear tht first, well all those who are memebers of this site are my friends. i love making friends everywhere i go. so plz yeh shayad wali baat ab na kehna phir se. u r my friend. thx for being here in my bad times too. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love roshani |
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3rd February 2006, 08:49 PM
raat yeh bhi nikal gayi har raat ki tarah
humari aakhri hui tujhse mulakat ki tarah! bhigo diya phir sirhana aansoo baha bahake, roke ruke na aansoo kisi barsaat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal.......................................... My Dear Roshani Kaise ho?Itna dard bhara qalam likh dala....hope so everything is fine.Rachna ke nazaria se dekhun to it's perfect.Tumhari yeh rachna padh mughey ek geet yaad aa gaya tumharey liye ganey ka mann hay .....Raat jaise guzer gayi sotey huay...nahin main nahin dekh sakta tughey rotey huay. Apna khyal Rakhna keep smiling |
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3rd June 2009, 02:16 PM
log arthi ko jab meri lekar ghar se nikle,
janaza"roshani"ka laga kisi baraat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal..........................................[/ Aadaab Roshni ji lahawaab gazal har sher bahut khubeoorat bana hai meri daad kubool kijiye Quote:
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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Daad kabool kijiye... |
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Daad kabool kijiye... -
6th June 2009, 11:21 AM
sada nafrat hi paayi humne jisko bhi chaha,
pyaar mila bhi to humko khairaat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal.........................................Wah Wah !! Roshni ji ,Bahot accha likha hai aapne..meri daad kabool kijiye...baar baar aapki is rachna ko padne ka mann kar raha hai...kya karu ishq me dard hi kuch aisa mila hai....jo sukoon aapki is rachna ko pad kar mila wo shayad hi kahi aur mil pata mujhe...bahot khub...mai bhi jald hi kuch likhne kei soch raha hun...aapka aashirwaad chahta hoon...thanx |
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15th September 2009, 01:42 PM
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wah................kya khoob jazbaat haiN, ROSHNI jii....aapke ahsaas to dil ko hilla gaye, sabhi sher dil ke kareeb rahe par akhiri sher to ......dil mein bas hi gaya : log arthi ko jab meri lekar ghar se nikle, janaza"roshani"ka laga kisi baraat ki tarah! raat yeh bhi nikal.............................. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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