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moot say chand sanso ka sauda hai zindagi...... -
22nd June 2006, 11:00 AM
moot say chand sanso ka sauda hai zindagi,
kabhi chingari to kabhi dhuan hai zindagi... har qadam pay tujh say nazar milata raha hoon main, na janay phir bhee kiyon mujh say khafa hai zindagi..... kiyon sooni rahon main awara phirtay ho, mere dil main aa kay dekho kitni khushnuma hai zindagi.... kabhi kahin kisiko do ghaz zamee nahi milti, kahin kisi par bewajha meharba hai zindagi..... unki nazar say dekho zindagi ki haqkat, jinkay liye har saans ik saza hai zindagi..... tujhsay qabal to mar mar kay jee raha thaa'veer', tunay aakay meri har saans pay likha hai zindagi..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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21st September 2007, 01:49 PM
wah janab kya umda agaz kiya hai
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Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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21st October 2007, 09:50 PM
Rajveer bhayya bahut umda aaghaz ke saath ghazal pesh ki....dili daad qubool kijiye dost...dekhiye ham aapke kalaam ki chahat me yahaN bhi aaa gaye...
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15th December 2007, 10:20 AM
rajveer ji behad khoobsurat ahsaas hote haiN aapki har shayri maiN.....aur aapki gazal dekh kar to waqt na bhi ho to bhi dil rukne ko majboor karta hai.....pade bina aagey nahi jaya ja sakta
 yu hi likhtey rahiye kush rahiye aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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27th December 2007, 03:36 AM
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Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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wah kya baat hai |
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wah kya baat hai -
27th December 2007, 03:50 PM
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appki je humne pehli nazam padhi hai appne itni khoobsoorti se likha ki ab hum kya kahe appko ek baat bata thi hoon je nazam padhkar lagga ki appne hamari zindghi par hi kuch likha ho appne bilkul sach kaha jo mout chata hai use milti nahi aur kisi par bin wajjah hi maherban ho jatti hai je mout appki je nazam padhkar bhot acha lagga hum appkji harek nazam ko padhana chahe ghe app jaldi hi koi new nazam likhe aur pehla reaply hamara hi pae ghe khush rehiye bename hai hamari zindghi koi to hume koi name de do varna bename si mout ho jaeghi hamari Main Ne Poocha
Keh... Zindagi kya hai??? Hanss Parray PHOOL Ro Parri Shabnam !!!  |
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30th December 2007, 05:27 PM
moot say chand sanso ka sauda hai zindagi,
kabhi chingari to kabhi dhuan hai zindagi... har qadam pay tujh say nazar milata raha hoon main, na janay phir bhee kiyon mujh say khafa hai zindagi..... kiyon sooni rahon main awara phirtay ho, mere dil main aa kay dekho kitni khushnuma hai zindagi.... kabhi kahin kisiko do ghaz zamee nahi milti, kahin kisi par bewajha meharba hai zindagi..... unki nazar say dekho zindagi ki haqkat, jinkay liye har saans ik saza hai zindagi..... tujhsay qabal to mar mar kay jee raha thaa'veer', tunay aakay meri har saans pay likha hai zindagi..... yaar..aap to kal bhi kamaal the..aur aaj bhi kya khoob likhte ho...puri ki puri ghazal qaabile-tareef hai!!! aik mutthi main kaid kar loon, yeh aasman hai jitna!" |
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frnd 4 ever |
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frnd 4 ever -
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Aadab raj ji kaise hain aap? MASHA ALLAH KYA BAAT HAI JANAB, aapka likha ek ek ashar kabile tarif hain, humne aapki ghazal kya padhi,,,zindagi ko dekhne ka nazariya hi badal gaya, sach kaha AAPNE,, zindagi badi ajeeb hai,,apne hi tor tarike se nawazti hain, bohot hi khoob, dili daad kabul kijiye. APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE, KHUSH RAHIYE ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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