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8th February 2008, 08:11 PM
[quote=LAMHA;269461]
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arey wahhhhhhhhh KRENIL.....kya baat hai yaar......
gunaah karke sazaa se darte hai,
zeher pee ke ab davaa se darte hai,
dushmano ke sitam ka khof nahi,
hum to doston ki wafaa se darte hai.........
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aaj har ek pal khubsurat hai
dil me teri sirf teri hi surat hai
kuch bhi kahe ye duniyawale hame gum nahi
duniya se jyada hum ko teri jarurat hai
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8th February 2008, 08:17 PM
[quote=krenil;269470][quote=LAMHA;269461]
aaj har ek pal khubsurat hai
dil me teri sirf teri hi surat hai
kuch bhi kahe ye duniyawale hame gum nahi
duniya se jyada hum ko teri jarurat hai
wah krenil kya baat hai dost
khubsurati ka nazara hi aisa hota hai
dil humesha usika hi deewana hota hai
kuch bhi kahe hum duniya se
magar pyar to sirf pyar se hi hota hai
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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8th February 2008, 08:27 PM
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adab !!!
Denish mai app ko kabhi jawab nhi day paya mager aj koshish kerta hon
jaisa app ne likha k uljhan mai sab ki pehchan hoti hai is liye mai ne likha kon chahata hai apno ya piyaro mai pehchan . or dil mai rehny walo k bat ko bayan na kero
kisko apno or piyaroo ki pechan ho ?
dil mai rehny walon ki bat q bayan ho ?
mujhy to hai sirf aik hi khuwahish
mai uska poojari or who mera bhagwan ho .
regards
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wah wah dost bahut hi acha likha hai apne
dil me rehne walo ki baat ko bayan karte hai
taki dil ko aur jyada chot na lage
pyar karke sirf usko pana chahte hai
taki fir se vo humare dil ko jalane na lage
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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8th February 2008, 08:29 PM
[quote=LAMHA;269461]
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arey wahhhhhhhhh KRENIL.....kya baat hai yaar......
gunaah karke sazaa se darte hai,
zeher pee ke ab davaa se darte hai,
dushmano ke sitam ka khof nahi,
hum to doston ki wafaa se darte hai.........
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Bin Jurm k saza humne pai hai
unki nafrat se b mohabbat nibhai hai
hamien dar tha dushmano k war se
or chout hum ne doston se khai hai
Regards Mujeeb
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8th February 2008, 08:35 PM
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wah wah dost bahut hi acha likha hai apne
dil me rehne walo ki baat ko bayan karte hai
taki dil ko aur jyada chot na lage
pyar karke sirf usko pana chahte hai
taki fir se vo humare dil ko jalane na lage
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Na dost mera to kuch or hi manana hai
dil ki baaton ko to zuban se bayan na ker
khai hai choot to ne usy preshan na ker
ger pana hi shirt hai to usky dil mai sama
dil hai bahut choota us mai makan na ker
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8th February 2008, 08:36 PM
[quote=krenil;269451][quote=dineshdharvi;268794]
kabhi dost kahete hai kabhi dua dete hai
kabhi bewaqt neend se jaga dete hai
par jab bhi phone karte hai hame
khuda ki kasam zindagi ke sare gum bhula dete hai
wah wah dost kitna acha likha hai tumne
dua hai tumare sath hal pal humari
fir kis baat ka darr hai tume yaar
kehdo karte ho pyar tum use jaan se bhi jyada
fir dekho kese karte hai vo bhi tumse pyar
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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8th February 2008, 08:43 PM
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aaj har ek pal khubsurat hai
dil me teri sirf teri hi surat hai
kuch bhi kahe ye duniyawale hame gum nahi
duniya se jyada hum ko teri jarurat hai
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bahut hi umda
dad hazir hai
tu dunya ko mat dekh, to mujh se piyar ker
thori se mohabat hai to uska izhar ker
kab ka hai dekho mausam khizan ka chahya
aik baar mery jeevan mai aa ke bahar ker
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8th February 2008, 08:46 PM
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Na dost mera to kuch or hi manana hai
dil ki baaton ko to zuban se bayan na ker
khai hai choot to ne usy preshan na ker
ger pana hi shirt hai to usky dil mai sama
dil hai bahut choota us mai makan na ker
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dil ko dard se mitaya nahi jata hai
chup rehkar bhi ab gum ko bhulaya nahi jata hai
usko wafa sabit karke khud ko bewafa mana humne
fir bhi uski yaado ko ab humse jataya nahi jata hai
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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8th February 2008, 08:49 PM
Bachpan mein khwahish thi ki badaa aadmi banoonga
Kaafi padh-likh liya par bada na ban saka
Badi badi digreeyan haasil ki par rokada na kama paaya
Ab sirf itni khawahish hai ki ek mentally-retarded ki tarah
baaqi zindagi guzaar doon aur agle janam ka intezaar karoon...jismen phir bada
aadmi banne ka khwaab dekh sakoon...
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8th February 2008, 08:52 PM
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dil ko dard se mitaya nahi jata hai
chup rehkar bhi ab gum ko bhulaya nahi jata hai
usko wafa sabit karke khud ko bewafa mana humne
fir bhi uski yaado ko ab humse jataya nahi jata hai
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jawab hazir hia
Uski yadoon ko mai apny dil se mitaon, q ?
uski kahi howi baatien mai Bhool jaon , q ?
Bewafa who bhi nhi bewafa mai bhi nhi
mager howa sitam kahan yeh bataon, q ?
ya aisy bhi ho sakta hai
Uski yadoon ko mai apny dil se mitaon q ?
uski kahi howi baatien mai Bhool jaon q ?
Bewafa who bhi nhi bewafa hum bhi nhi
mager kon hai majboor mai bataon q ?
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8th February 2008, 08:54 PM
wah dost bahut achcha likha ....
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Bachpan mein khwahish thi ki badaa aadmi banoonga
Kaafi padh-likh liya par bada na ban saka
Badi badi digreeyan haasil ki par rokada na kama paaya
Ab sirf itni khawahish hai ki ek mentally-retarded ki tarah
baaqi zindagi guzaar doon aur agle janam ka intezaar karoon...jismen phir bada
aadmi banne ka khwaab dekh sakoon...
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8th February 2008, 08:58 PM
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Bachpan mein khwahish thi ki badaa aadmi banoonga
Kaafi padh-likh liya par bada na ban saka
Badi badi digreeyan haasil ki par rokada na kama paaya
Ab sirf itni khawahish hai ki ek mentally-retarded ki tarah
baaqi zindagi guzaar doon aur agle janam ka intezaar karoon...jismen phir bada
aadmi banne ka khwaab dekh sakoon...
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adab !!!
Janab jab is janam mai agly janam ka intazar hai to agly janam mai bhi isi cheez ka intazaar ho ga . or yeh bhi ho sakta hai app ka agla janam ho hi na ya yeh last janam hoo
jo kerna isi janam mai kerna hai takeh agla janam safel rahy
Uth Bandh kamer kiyon derta hai
phir dekh Khuda kya kerta hai
himat nhi harni chhaiye .
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8th February 2008, 09:03 PM
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jawab hazir hia
Uski yadoon ko mai apny dil se mitaon, q ?
uski kahi howi baatien mai Bhool jaon , q ?
Bewafa who bhi nhi bewafa mai bhi nhi
mager howa sitam kahan yeh bataon, q ?
ya aisy bhi ho sakta hai
Uski yadoon ko mai apny dil se mitaon q ?
uski kahi howi baatien mai Bhool jaon q ?
Bewafa who bhi nhi bewafa hum bhi nhi
mager kon hai majboor mai bataon q ?
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kisi ek ko to majboor hona tha
halat se jo bahut door jana tha
fir kese kehte use hum bewafa
dono ko sab kuch to bhool hi jana tha
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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8th February 2008, 09:06 PM
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Bachpan mein khwahish thi ki badaa aadmi banoonga
Kaafi padh-likh liya par bada na ban saka
Badi badi digreeyan haasil ki par rokada na kama paaya
Ab sirf itni khawahish hai ki ek mentally-retarded ki tarah
baaqi zindagi guzaar doon aur agle janam ka intezaar karoon...jismen phir bada
aadmi banne ka khwaab dekh sakoon...
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dost me yahi kahuga
soch ko badlo sitare badal jayege
nazar ko badlo nazare badal jayege
khud ko badlo khud duniya hi badal jayegi
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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8th February 2008, 09:10 PM
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kisi ek ko to majboor hona tha
halat se jo bahut door jana tha
fir kese kehte use hum bewafa
dono ko sab kuch to bhool hi jana tha
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Bhola nhi hoon aj bhi uski baatien
they hathon mai hath or thien bersatien
ab tanha hon to ilzam usko kiyon don ?
yeh dard nhi yeh hain piyar ki soghatien
keep it up
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8th February 2008, 09:13 PM
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Bhola nhi hoon aj bhi uski baatien
they hathon mai hath or thien bersatien
ab tanha hon to ilzam usko kiyon don ?
yeh dard nhi yeh hain piyar ki soghatien
keep it up
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jindagi se aitbaar kisko hai mil jaaye khushi to inkaar kisko hai
app dono ki bahut kuch majbooriya rahi hogi dost
varna judya se pyar kisko hai
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8th February 2008, 09:36 PM
[quote=dineshdharvi;269482][quote=krenil;269451]
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kabhi dost kahete hai kabhi dua dete hai
kabhi bewaqt neend se jaga dete hai
par jab bhi phone karte hai hame
khuda ki kasam zindagi ke sare gum bhula dete hai
wah wah dost kitna acha likha hai tumne
dua hai tumare sath hal pal humari
fir kis baat ka darr hai tume yaar
kehdo karte ho pyar tum use jaan se bhi jyada
fir dekho kese karte hai vo bhi tumse pyar
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wah yaar kya baat hai
basa hai aankho me unka chahera is tarah
gulab me khushbu basti hai jis tarah
namaz padh li ho aur dua na mangi ho
unki kami mahesus hoti hai is tarah
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8th February 2008, 09:39 PM
Woh kehte the ki imaan ka rastaa khuda ke darwaze tak jaata hai..
chal pada us raste par... bina roshni ke, tuti chappal pahan kar..
raste mein anake logon ne overtake kiya, mahangi gaadiyon mein jaate the..
kuch ne lift dene ka offer bhi kiya..
sabko nakaar diya, dil hi di mein us kahani ko duhrata raha
aakhir mein jeet kachuwe (tortoise) ki hogi..
din bhar chalta raha...saal bhar chala
zindagi khatm hone aayi...khuda to na dikha par...
samne board par likha tha "Road Closed, take diversion"...
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8th February 2008, 09:48 PM
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dost me yahi kahuga
soch ko badlo sitare badal jayege
nazar ko badlo nazare badal jayege
khud ko badlo khud duniya hi badal jayegi
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DINESH....agar tumhari ijazat ho to mai is sher ko thoda aur behtar karna chahungi....i hope u wont mind......
soch ko badlo,sitare badal jayenge,
nazar ko badlo,nazare badal jayenge,
kashtiyan badalne ki zaroorat nahi,
dishaon ko badlo kinare badal jayenge........
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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8th February 2008, 09:53 PM
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Woh kehte the ki imaan ka rastaa khuda ke darwaze tak jaata hai..
chal pada us raste par... bina roshni ke, tuti chappal pahan kar..
raste mein anake logon ne overtake kiya, mahangi gaadiyon mein jaate the..
kuch ne lift dene ka offer bhi kiya..
sabko nakaar diya, dil hi di mein us kahani ko duhrata raha
aakhir mein jeet kachuwe (tortoise) ki hogi..
din bhar chalta raha...saal bhar chala
zindagi khatm hone aayi...khuda to na dikha par...
samne board par likha tha "Road Closed, take diversion"...
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zindagi ki dastaan itni saadgi se .......bahut khub....
tukdo tukdo me milne wale zara itna soon,
jab mukammal nahi milna to koi khawab na boon,
tanha tanha hoo mai ,mujko teri zaroorat hai,
mujko tujse itni hi shikayat hai,
jo mujse mil nahi sakta kyo usi ki chahat hai???????
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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9th February 2008, 04:07 AM
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zindagi ki dastaan itni saadgi se .......bahut khub....
tukdo tukdo me milne wale zara itna soon,
jab mukammal nahi milna to koi khawab na boon,
tanha tanha hoo mai ,mujko teri zaroorat hai,
mujko tujse itni hi shikayat hai,
jo mujse mil nahi sakta kyo usi ki chahat hai???????
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wah lamha bahut hi achha hai
hum ne kisi ki yaad me rona hi chhod diya
apni zindagi ko talash karna hi chhod diya
sab biti hui baate bhula di hum ne
ab dil me khushi basana hi chhod diya
kaanto se bhar dete hai log daman
hum ne aangan me phool khilana hi chhod diya
kabhi na magenge kisi se bheekh mahobat ki
isiliye hum ne pyaar karna hi chhod diya
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9th February 2008, 06:40 AM
Hum Aah bhi bharte hain to ho jaate hain badnaam
Woh Qatl bhi karte hain par Saza nahin hoti.
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wah lamha bahut hi achha hai
hum ne kisi ki yaad me rona hi chhod diya
apni zindagi ko talash karna hi chhod diya
sab biti hui baate bhula di hum ne
ab dil me khushi basana hi chhod diya
kaanto se bhar dete hai log daman
hum ne aangan me phool khilana hi chhod diya
kabhi na magenge kisi se bheekh mahobat ki
isiliye hum ne pyaar karna hi chhod diya
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9th February 2008, 10:18 AM
[quote=krenil;269591]wah lamha bahut hi achha hai
hum ne kisi ki yaad me rona hi chhod diya
apni zindagi ko talash karna hi chhod diya
sab biti hui baate bhula di hum ne
ab dil me khushi basana hi chhod diya
kaanto se bhar dete hai log daman
hum ne aangan me phool khilana hi chhod diya
kabhi na magenge kisi se bheekh mahobat ki
isiliye hum ne pyaar karna hi chhod diya
har pyaar karne waale ki ajab kahaani hai,
chup rehna bhi pyaar ki nishani hai,
kahin koi zakham nahi phir kyon dard kaa ehsas hai,
isi liye to har wak uski tasveer tumare pass rehti hai.
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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9th February 2008, 04:22 PM
[quote=dineshdharvi;269600]
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wah lamha bahut hi achha hai
hum ne kisi ki yaad me rona hi chhod diya
apni zindagi ko talash karna hi chhod diya
sab biti hui baate bhula di hum ne
ab dil me khushi basana hi chhod diya
kaanto se bhar dete hai log daman
hum ne aangan me phool khilana hi chhod diya
kabhi na magenge kisi se bheekh mahobat ki
isiliye hum ne pyaar karna hi chhod diya
har pyaar karne waale ki ajab kahaani hai,
chup rehna bhi pyaar ki nishani hai,
kahin koi zakham nahi phir kyon dard kaa ehsas hai,
isi liye to har wak uski tasveer tumare pass rehti hai.
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Youn gum sum ho k mujhy sataya na ker
Bin bataey meri jaan kahien jaya na ker
Bhalay na day mujhe khushi aik pal ki bhi
Mager khudara mujhy rulaya bhi na ker
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9th February 2008, 04:48 PM
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wah lamha bahut hi achha hai
hum ne kisi ki yaad me rona hi chhod diya
apni zindagi ko talash karna hi chhod diya
sab biti hui baate bhula di hum ne
ab dil me khushi basana hi chhod diya
kaanto se bhar dete hai log daman
hum ne aangan me phool khilana hi chhod diya
kabhi na magenge kisi se bheekh mahobat ki
isiliye hum ne pyaar karna hi chhod diya
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wah wah wah bahot khub krenil ji bahot hi aacha likha hain
muje mouf karne kyo ki aapke dard ko bhi wah wah kar gaya
kya karu raha hi nahi gaya aapki yeh baat sunkar so muju mouf kardijiye ga
duniya se chupana chaha aapne pyar ko
par hume chupana na aaya
woh bewajahi chale gaye hume chod kar
aur hume manana bhi na aaya
hum tadap te rahe unki yaado main pal pal
aur unko samaja na aaya
koshish ki lakh humne unko dil se nikal ne ki
par hume unko bhool na na aaya
aaj bhi karte hain unse be inteha mohabbat
fir bhi mohabbat ko samajna na aaya
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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9th February 2008, 04:55 PM
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zindagi ki dastaan itni saadgi se .......bahut khub....
tukdo tukdo me milne wale zara itna soon,
jab mukammal nahi milna to koi khawab na boon,
tanha tanha hoo mai ,mujko teri zaroorat hai,
mujko tujse itni hi shikayat hai,
jo mujse mil nahi sakta kyo usi ki chahat hai???????
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wah lamha ji bahot khoob likha hain aapne
tukdo me milta hoon
tukdo me pal ta hoon
himmat he khuda meri
isiliye to khawab boon ta hoon
teri zarurat muje khud se jyada hain
isliye to yaar aapne dil ki soonta hoon
aabhi bhi nahi hui he der
dil ke darwaje aaj bhi khule chood aaya hoon
pukarle muje ek baar aapne dil se
aaj bhi tere liye wohi jagah khali chood aaya hoon
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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9th February 2008, 07:17 PM
main wakif nahi hun khuda se
main khuda ko nahi jaanta
par jahan mein khudai nahi hai
baat ye bhi nahi maanta"
very nice ji
Anil Arora
Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai,
Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai,
Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare,
Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai?
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9th February 2008, 08:37 PM
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main wakif nahi hun khuda se
main khuda ko nahi jaanta
par jahan mein khudai nahi hai
baat ye bhi nahi maanta"
very nice ji
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bahot khub dost
mano ya na mano yeh hakikat hain
khuda aur khudai yahi par hain
ek baar pyar kar ke dekhlo
samaj jaoge ki khuda aur zallad dono zami par hi hain
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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9th February 2008, 09:40 PM
[quote=nihar;269662] wah lamha ji bahot khoob likha hain aapne
tukdo me milta hoon
tukdo me pal ta hoon
himmat he khuda meri
isiliye to khawab boon ta hoon
teri zarurat muje khud se jyada hain
isliye to yaar aapne dil ki soonta hoon
aabhi bhi nahi hui he der
dil ke darwaje aaj bhi khule chood aaya hoon
pukarle mje ek baar aapne dil se
aaj bhi tere liye wohi jagah khali chood aaya hoon
mat karo kisi ka itna intzaar ki had se badh jaaye
mat karo kisi se itna pyar ki hum khud ko bhool jaaye
mat karo kisi se aisa wada jo us se nibhaya na jaaye
mat lagavo kisi se itna dil jo dil ko tod jaaye
pyar ki jarurat duniya me sabko hai har koi pyar ke liye tadap ta hai
per mat karo kisi se itni mohbaat ki jindagi hi hume chhod jaaye
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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9th February 2008, 09:46 PM
[quote=nihar;269658]wah wah wah bahot khub krenil ji bahot hi aacha likha hain
muje mouf karne kyo ki aapke dard ko bhi wah wah kar gaya
kya karu raha hi nahi gaya aapki yeh baat sunkar so muju mouf kardijiye ga
duniya se chupana chaha aapne pyar ko
par hume chupana na aaya
woh bewajahi chale gaye hume chod kar
aur hume manana bhi na aaya
hum tadap te rahe unki yaado main pal pal
aur unko samaja na aaya
koshish ki lakh humne unko dil se nikal ne ki
par hume unko bhool na na aaya
aaj bhi karte hain unse be inteha mohabbat
fir bhi mohabbat ko samajna na aaya
mohbaat ko samaj ke liye ansoo ko girana padta hai
ishq lagane se pehle khud ko dard dena padta hai
hum bhi chahte kisi ko bahut per hume chup rehna padta tha
isi liye to ab har wakt dil ko rulana padta hai
tab jakar pata chalta hai ki kab pyar karna padta hai aur pyar karne se pehle pyar ko izhaar karna padta hai
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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9th February 2008, 10:12 PM
[quote=dineshdharvi;269713]
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Originally Posted by nihar
wah lamha ji bahot khoob likha hain aapne
tukdo me milta hoon
tukdo me pal ta hoon
himmat he khuda meri
isiliye to khawab boon ta hoon
teri zarurat muje khud se jyada hain
isliye to yaar aapne dil ki soonta hoon
aabhi bhi nahi hui he der
dil ke darwaje aaj bhi khule chood aaya hoon
pukarle mje ek baar aapne dil se
aaj bhi tere liye wohi jagah khali chood aaya hoon
mat karo kisi ka itna intzaar ki had se badh jaaye
mat karo kisi se itna pyar ki hum khud ko bhool jaaye
mat karo kisi se aisa wada jo us se nibhaya na jaaye
mat lagavo kisi se itna dil jo dil ko tod jaaye
pyar ki jarurat duniya me sabko hai har koi pyar ke liye tadap ta hai
per mat karo kisi se itni mohbaat ki jindagi hi hume chhod jaaye
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wah yaar kya khub kaha hai
aankho me unki shararat thi
baato me unki najakat thi
hum to mar chuke unke bagair
aur unko hamare bina hi zindagi bitani thi
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9th February 2008, 10:27 PM
[quote=krenil;269719]
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wah yaar kya khub kaha hai
aankho me unki shararat thi
baato me unki najakat thi
hum to mar chuke unke bagair
aur unko hamare bina hi zindagi bitani thi
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bahut khub KRENIL...........
zindagi jafaa karti rahi fir bhi palko pe rahi,
wafaa maut ne ki jisse humne thi nazare churayi..(NM)
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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9th February 2008, 10:31 PM
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Originally Posted by krenil
bahut khub KRENIL...........
zindagi jafaa karti rahi fir bhi palko pe rahi,
wafaa maut ne ki jisse humne thi nazare churayi..(NM)
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wah lamha kya baat hai
ye dil tu zindagi me kyu udas hai
wo nahi to unki yaado se mahekta raheta hai
wo naseeb me nahi the hamare ab to samaj ja
tu kyu unki yaad me khud se naraz raheta hai
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10th February 2008, 09:52 AM
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Originally Posted by krenil
wah lamha kya baat hai
ye dil tu zindagi me kyu udas hai
wo nahi to unki yaado se mahekta raheta hai
wo naseeb me nahi the hamare ab to samaj ja
tu kyu unki yaad me khud se naraz raheta hai
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Yeh mai kaisi Zindagi jee rha hoon ?
dil k zkhmon ko khud see rha hoon
yeh soch ker, koi tera bhi hota "MUJEEB"
baha k ashk ankh se , Labon se pee rha hon
un sab ko dedicate ker rha hoon jin ka khayal mery is khayal se milta hai .
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10th February 2008, 09:57 AM
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Originally Posted by LAMHA
bahut khub KRENIL...........
zindagi jafaa karti rahi fir bhi palko pe rahi,
wafaa maut ne ki jisse humne thi nazare churayi..(NM)
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Adab!!!
App k liye aik jawab hai .
Mukhlis maseeha bun k ab , ker na dawa bachta nhi hoon
bachta tha jab bachaya na tha ab na bacha bachta nhi hoon
Kaisa laga ?
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10th February 2008, 02:36 PM
KHAFA RAH KAR TUM BHI NA RAH PAOGE.
JAAN TO JAEGI HAMRI SAANS TO TUM BHI NA LE PAOGE -,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Last edited by yash chawla; 10th February 2008 at 02:39 PM..
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11th February 2008, 11:18 PM
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KHAFA RAH KAR TUM BHI NA RAH PAOGE.
JAAN TO JAEGI HAMRI SAANS TO TUM BHI NA LE PAOGE -,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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wah bahut khub
ye dil to hai unki har yaad me gum
pukar ne par bhi kyu nahi aate hai wo
saanso me unka ahesas aur dil ki dhadkano me hai wo
dur hu tanha rota hu phir bhi kyu nahi aate hai wo
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12th February 2008, 12:48 AM
RAAT HOGHI TO CHAND BHI DUHAI DEGA
KHWABON ME TUM HE WOH CHEHRA DIKHAAYI DEGA
MOHABBAT KABHI BHI ZARA SOCH KE KARNA DOSTO
EK AANSU BHI GIRA TO SUNAI DEGAA .......................
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12th February 2008, 12:51 AM
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RAAT HOGHI TO CHAND BHI DUHAI DEGA
KHWABON ME TUM HE WOH CHEHRA DIKHAAYI DEGA
MOHABBAT KABHI BHI ZARA SOCH KE KARNA DOSTO
EK AANSU BHI GIRA TO SUNAI DEGAA .......................
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wah yaar bahut khub
aansu ki nadi bahe rahi hai
khoon ke aansu nikal rahe hai
dil chir kar dekh lo tum
waha bas meri dreamgirl ki tasveer dikh rahi hai
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12th February 2008, 09:15 PM
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wah yaar bahut khub
aansu ki nadi bahe rahi hai
khoon ke aansu nikal rahe hai
dil chir kar dekh lo tum
waha bas meri dreamgirl ki tasveer dikh rahi hai
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bahut khub KRENIL.............
is duniya ka aitbaar kare bhi to kaise kare,
ki aansoo bhi apni aankh ka apna na hua...(NM)
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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