 |
|
|
|
|
 |
 |
teri bateiN...... |
 |
|
 |
|
(#1)
|
|
Moderator
  
Offline
Posts: 5,211
Join Date: Jul 2014
Rep Power: 28
|
teri bateiN...... -
21st August 2015, 10:32 AM
namaskaar dostoN.......
fir se ek baar dil ke kuch khyaal pesh kar rahi hoon... aap sab ki rai ka intzaar rahega.......... teri gulaab ki khushboo si mahakti bateiN chaman ke phool par titli si hain sajti bateiN.. Meri udasiyaaN gamgeen iNhe karti haiN meri khushi me udti aur chahakti bateiN Jo dooriyaN banayeiN dil ko kabhi deewana. Lage yun wasl ki chahat me tadapti bateiN bina piye he maiN madhosh huyi jati hooN Nasha sharaab ka ye teri bahakti bataeiN Mujhi se roothti aur mujhko manati bhi haiN madhu ke jaisi haiN bachchoN si machalti bateiN.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
|
|
|
 |
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#2)
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 1,646
Join Date: Oct 2013
Location: Mumbai, India
Rep Power: 22
|
21st August 2015, 10:46 AM
Quote:
bahot khub alfaazo.n se saji hai ye rachna, Madhuji... dheroN daad hamaari jaanib se aapki iis kaavish ke liye..... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#3)
|
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
21st August 2015, 11:02 AM
Quote:
Madhu ji sabse pahle to main aapke is athak prayaas ki saraahnaa karta hoon..... aap nirantar apne kalam ke jaadu se bazm ki roshnii me izaafaa kartii aayee hain aur is baar bhi aapne wahi kiya hai.... Agar aapki ghazal ki baat karun to na jaane kyon (merii niji raay ) mujhe aisaa lag rahaa hai ke is baar is ghazal me wo baat nahi nazar aa rahii hai jiske liye aapkii tahreer mash'hoor hai.... main mahaz khayaal aur lafzon ki bunaai ki baat kar raha hoon.... technically kuch point out nahi kar raha hoon.... ummeed hai meri baaten aapko nagawaaraa saabit nahi hongee aur aap isse bhi acchaa likhne ka prayaas kartee rahengee..... khush rahiye.... likhtii rahiye Shaad...... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#4)
|
|
|
Super Mod
Offline
Posts: 3,901
Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 45
|
21st August 2015, 05:57 PM
Quote:
Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
|
  |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#5)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 451
Join Date: Feb 2013
Rep Power: 14
|
21st August 2015, 06:23 PM
Madhu di, I always like whatever you write and liked it this time as well. I will request you to write more often as I love reading you :-)...yeh sher bahaut achha laga :-)
Ye dooriyaN kabhi dil ko jo kare bekabu.. lage yuN wasl ki chahat me tadapti bateiN Thank You di share karne ke liye. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#6)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 94
Join Date: Feb 2012
Rep Power: 14
|
21st August 2015, 08:53 PM
Madhuji bahut achche khayalat se is ghazal ko saNvara hai. Mubarak ho. aap ki her paishkash lajawab hoti hai. Shaadsaheb ka bhi shukria ke woh hamesha achchi raey dete hai.N
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#7)
|
|
|
RADHE RADHE
Offline
Posts: 4,115
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: DELHI
Rep Power: 58
|
21st August 2015, 10:01 PM
Quote:
likhti rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#8)
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 5,211
Join Date: Jul 2014
Rep Power: 28
|
22nd August 2015, 02:41 PM
Quote:
Aur aapki bateiN kabhi nagwaar nahi lag sakti mujhe...kyun ki vo hamesha improvement ke liye hee kahi jati hain...ek nek irade se....to aap bina hichak apni rai dete rahiyega aage bhi....  Salamat rahein..... Aate rahein.......... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#9)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 554
Join Date: Nov 2014
Rep Power: 13
|
25th August 2015, 08:46 AM
Madhu ji namaste,
Bohot achha laga is peshkash ko padhkar......bohot hi sundar dhang se alfazo me sajaya hai in khoobsurat ehsasoon ko apne.....ek behad khas andaaz hai aapka...kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki aapki gazlen aur kalam agar bina signature bhi padhne ko mile to bhi shayad aapke andaaz e bayan se pata chal jayega ki ye jaroor hamari Madhu ji ka likha hai....dher sari shubhkamnaye.. Aapka apna Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#10)
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 5,211
Join Date: Jul 2014
Rep Power: 28
|
21st September 2015, 07:13 PM
Quote:
Aage bhi sath dete rahiyega... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#11)
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 15,199
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 63
|
23rd September 2015, 10:32 AM
Quote:
Madhu Bala.............khoobsrat ehsaas...hame accha lga aapko aik baar phir padna...yu hi likhti rho...khush rho. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#12)
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 5,211
Join Date: Jul 2014
Rep Power: 28
|
24th October 2015, 02:40 PM
Quote:
Shaad ji ki baat bilkul sahi hai...kuch changes bhi kiye the maine..ummeed hai aapko bhi pasand aaye honge.......koshish karoongi agli baar kuch behtar likh sakoon..... Duaon me yaad rakhiyega... Salamat rahein... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#13)
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 5,211
Join Date: Jul 2014
Rep Power: 28
|
24th November 2015, 12:40 PM
Quote:
achcha lagta hai sunkar ki tumhe meri poetry pasand aati hai.... hame bhi aapko padhna pasand hai.. hamse apne thughts share karti raha karo..' aati raha karo... takecare.. madhu, अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#14)
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 5,211
Join Date: Jul 2014
Rep Power: 28
|
13th December 2015, 01:47 PM
Quote:
Aate rahiyega... Shukriya.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#15)
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 5,211
Join Date: Jul 2014
Rep Power: 28
|
1st January 2016, 02:17 PM
Quote:
Aate rahiyega. ......... Regards madhu अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#16)
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 5,211
Join Date: Jul 2014
Rep Power: 28
|
15th January 2016, 12:36 PM
Quote:
meri khushkismati hai ki aap jaise doston ka sath hai.. behad shukriya aapka.. kafi vyast nazar aa rahe hain aajkal aap..sdc ko intzaar hai apka.. aate raha kariye... takecare madhu अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#17)
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 5,211
Join Date: Jul 2014
Rep Power: 28
|
31st January 2016, 11:11 PM
Quote:
Aati rahiyega.... aapke sath ki hamesha ummeed karti hun... Regards Madhu.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
«
Previous Thread
|
Next Thread
»
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | Rate This Thread |
Linear Mode
|
|
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
