tasavvur

vaaiz · **tasavvur -** 22nd December 2004, 12:06 PM

shaam se un ke tasavvur kaa nashaa thaa itanaa
niind aa_ii hai to aa.Nkho.n ne buraa maanaa hai

can someone continue the lead......

Vaaiz

talib · 22nd December 2004, 03:00 PM

Gustaakhi mauf...

shaam se un ke tasavvur kaa nashaa thaa itanaa
niind aa_ii hai to aa.Nkho.n ne buraa maanaa hai

guzaar dee tamaam raat khayaaloN mein tere,
yeh pehli baar hamne dil ka kahaa maana hai.

Pulkit_gupta · 22nd December 2004, 04:01 PM

Wah!

Daad kubool kijiyega Vaaiz Sahab aur Talib jee... Bahut sundar sher bankar aya hai... Dil me utar gaya....

Bohot khoob.. age bhi aise hi likhte rahiyega

vaaiz · 28th December 2004, 08:56 AM

Talib saheb....

achchhaa hai sar_angusht-e-hinaa_ii kaa tasavvur
dil me.n nazar aatii to hai ek buund lahuu kii

Aage...

talib · 28th December 2004, 11:31 AM

Adaab Huzoor,

Ek aur khoobusrat sher aapki jaanib se..aur meri yeh hasb-e-haisiyat koshish...

achchhaa hai sar_angusht-e-hinaa_ii kaa tasavvur
dil me.n nazar aatii to hai ek buund lahuu kii

ba-ruuh mera jism, mera dil hai fasurdaa,
tu hai to nazar aati hai ummeed rafuu kii.

meena chheda · 28th December 2004, 11:26 PM

vaaiz aur talib sir ji,
gr8..........

pulkit,

itni achhi post ka pata batane k liye tumhara shukriaa

vaaiz · 29th December 2004, 09:14 AM

Talib Saheb... aap ke huzoor main peesh hai...

tuune dekhii hai vo peshaanii vo rukhsaar vo ho.nTh
zaindagii un ke tasavvur me.n guzaarii ham ne

Saheb aap ke sheer humain bahut pasand aaye hain. Bhala ho Technology ka ki aap jaise loogon se mulaqat ho gayi.

Appke Tahe-dil se Fan ho gaye hain

Vaaiz

vaaiz · 29th December 2004, 09:18 AM

Meena ji,

Haunsla-aafzai ka shukriya. Talib ji ka kamal hai ki woh humari post main aaye....

Woh aaye humari post main Technology ki kudrat hai...
kabhi hum post ko kabhi Computer ko dekhte hain....

Mauf kijiyega ke eek aache sheer ko kuch tabdeel kar diya...

Aap ka swagat hai..

Vaaiz

dil_e_sikast · 29th December 2004, 10:00 AM

Bahot khub
Kya khubsurat share farmaye ja rahe hai yaha par
lekin...
Ek gujarish hai.
Aap ke in behtarin shero ko samajne ke liye urdu ka achha khasa knowledge hona chahiye..nahi?
I mean jab bhi aap urdu wording use kare tab agar uske meanings bhi likhenge to nawajish hogi.

Actually i love urdu,bangoli and punjabi..ye bat alag hai ki muje aati nahi hai

And im sure ki yaha par mere jaise bahot se log honge to agar aap meanings likhenge to hamari tuti futi urdu me kuchh ijafa hi ho jayega.. kya khayal hai?

Quote:

tuune dekhii hai vo peshaanii vo rukhsaar vo ho.nTh
zaindagii un ke tasavvur me.n guzaarii ham ne

bahot khub..
iske reference me kuchh likhne ki gustakhi kar rahi hu..

tune dekhi hai wo khelti,bahekti,machalti julfe
zindagi un julfo ki ghatao main sawari ham ne

Pulkit_gupta · 29th December 2004, 10:13 AM

Vaaiz sahab, Talib jee,

I also agree with Sanam.. Meri urdu bhi kamzor hai... Agar aap saath me meanings bhi likhenge to hume daad dene me aasaani hogi.... Plzz

vaaiz · 30th December 2004, 08:39 AM

Pulkitji/ Sanam ji,

Aap ki baat ka hum khayal rakhenge. Waise zarra-nawazi ka shukriya.

Sanam ji aap ne zulf ki baat ki to eek purana sheer yaad aaya...

"chhe.Datii hai.n kabhii lab ko kabhii ruKhsaaro.n ko
tum ne zulfo.n ko bahut sar pe cha.Dhaa rakhaa hai"

Vaaiz

talib · 30th December 2004, 11:21 AM

Adaaab,

Sanam G aur Pulkit Sahab.. Aaap ka hukm sar aankhoN par..

tuune dekhii hai vo peshaanii vo rukhsaar vo ho.nTh
zaindagii un ke tasavvur me.n guzaarii ham ne

haif-sad-haif bazm-e-yaar mein makhmoor huaa,
aamad-e-ziist hai aur kar li khumaari hum ne.

haif=regrets,
sad=100 (jaise 100 saal ko ek sadi kehte hain)
haif-sad-haif = regrets - 100 -regrets
bazm-e-yaar=friends party
makhmoor = drunk
aamad=arrival
ziist=life (here it refers to beloved)
khumaari = intoxication.

dil_e_sikast · 30th December 2004, 05:12 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by talib
haif-sad-haif bazm-e-yaar mein makhmoor huaa,
aamad-e-ziist hai aur kar li khumaari hum ne.

haif=regrets,
sad=100 (jaise 100 saal ko ek sadi kehte hain)
haif-sad-haif = regrets - 100 -regrets
bazm-e-yaar=friends party
makhmoor = drunk
aamad=arrival
ziist=life (here it refers to beloved)
khumaari = intoxication.

thoda kam dose diya kijiye janab

vaaiz · 31st December 2004, 08:30 AM

Talib saheb,

Eek sheer aaj subh-subh se yaad aa raha tha, Soocha aap ke saath yeh jazba baant leen....

"ham se sharmaataa hai aa_iinaa muqaabil aakar
bevafaa hai.n na munaafiq na adaakaar hai.n ham"

muqaabil aanaa = to confront/come face to face with
munaafiq = hypocrite/infidel
adaakaar = actor

Bus naaye saal ke inteezar hai.... Aap ko aur aap ke parivaar ko kumari taraf se naye saal ki mubaraqbaad. Naya saal aap sub ke liye khushiyaan le kar aaye.

Vaaiz

vaaiz · 31st December 2004, 08:33 AM

Sanam ji/Pulkit ji,

Aap ko aur aap ke ghar main sabhi ko humari taraf se naya saal mubaraq ho. Yeh naya saal aap sub ke liye khushiyaan le kar aaye.

Eek sheer is post main sabhi ke liye...

"ham aksar dosto.n kii bevafaa_ii sah to lete hai.n
magar ham jaanate hai.n dil hamaare TuuT jaate hai.n"

Vaaiz.

dil_e_sikast · 31st December 2004, 09:20 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by vaaiz
"ham aksar dosto.n kii bevafaa_ii sah to lete hai.n
magar ham jaanate hai.n dil hamaare TuuT jaate hai.n"

Bewafai ko bhi wafa se na sajaya karo sanam
aksar aisi nadani.o me apne chhuT jaate hai.n

vaaiz ji..
aap ko bhi naya sal mubarak..
lekin ye kya..naye sal ki badhai bhi aise sher se ki jisme bewafai hai or wo bhi dosto ki!!!
ye baat to galat hai ji..

well, wish you best of luck for this year
take care

Pulkit_gupta · 31st December 2004, 10:29 AM

Hi Vaaiz & Talib jee!

Aapko bhi naya saal bahut bahut mubarak ho... May good fulfills all that u aspire for.. may u hav a wonderful wonderful time....

Ugta hua Suraj roshni de aapko
Mehkte hue phool khushboo den aapko

Hum to kucch dene ke kaabil nahi
Dene waaala hazaar khushiyaan se aapko...

(I read it somewhere

)

Aisa nahi ke hum kucch dene ke kaabil nahi... Hum de sakte hain Dil se daad aur apni Dosti... woh humesha aapke saath hai...

Apna Khayaal rakhiyega