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Question Tasavvur - 4th April 2007, 10:33 AM

Tanhai mein unka tasavvur hua to aakhen nam ho gayi,
Aaj fir dil ko dhadakne ki tamanna kam ho gayi,
Mat roko unki yaadon ko hamare ghar pe aane se,
Unki rukhsat ke baad unki yaad hi to hamari sanam ho gayi
   
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4th April 2007, 10:58 PM

nice sher... thx for sharing...


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5th April 2007, 10:44 AM

hi there,sry aapka naam to nai jaanti.pehli baar padha hai aapko.bahut khoob,bahut pasand aaya yeh sher.yunhin likhte rahiye.
khush rahen.
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5th April 2007, 10:50 AM

deep ji bahut hi achchha sher share kiya hai aapne hamare sath

aapke sher jesa hi kuch hamari taraf se aapki rachna pe...

Ab is intezaar ki aadat si ho gayi hai,
Khamoshi ek mohlat si ho gayi hai,
Sikwa naa sikayat karne ki jarurat hai hamein,
Kyuki is tanhaaai se mohabbat si ho gayi hai.



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Tanhai mein unka tasavvur hua to aakhen nam ho gayi,
Aaj fir dil ko dhadakne ki tamanna kam ho gayi,
Mat roko unki yaadon ko hamare ghar pe aane se,
Unki rukhsat ke baad unki yaad hi to hamari sanam ho gayi


!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!





Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.


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Teri Ankhon Me - 5th April 2007, 01:40 PM

TERI IN KHOOBSURAT ANKHON MAIN UTAR JAYEN HUM,
DIL KAHTA HAIN HAR GUNAH AB KAR JAYEN HUM,
FIR BHI DIL KI EK ARJOO HAIN KI TU KAHE TO,
TERI ANKHON MAIN DOOB KAR MAR JAYEN HUM.

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