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Teraa Tasavvur - 3rd February 2009, 11:03 PM
Doston ye jo ghazal main pesh karne jaa rahaa hoon. ye maine bahut early days mein likhi thi. Baad mein edit karne ka man nahi kartaa, kyonki inmein mere lahmein qaid hai. Ummid hai aapko pasand nahi aayegi, but phir bhi post kar rahaa hoon.

Jab Tasavvur mein tu samaati hai
Apni har saans se teri khushbu aati hai

Zulfien Chehre par giraa kar aankhon se ghaayal karnaa
Teri ye adaa mujhko deewaana banaati hai

Har baar ajnabi ki tarah milna teraa
Ye baat dil ko pareshaan kar jaati hai

Bahut koshish kartaa hoon bhulne ki tujhko
Masoom si teri soorat bhulaayi nahi jaati hai

Mumkin nahi ab milnaa ki paraayi ho tum
Kaise sambhaloon dil ko tishnagi badhti jaati hai

Kyaa ye hi anjaam hai ek taraf mohabbat ka "Rashid"
Dil se sukoon aur aankhon se neend kho jaati hai.


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3rd February 2009, 11:33 PM
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Doston ye jo ghazal main pesh karne jaa rahaa hoon. ye maine bahut early days mein likhi thi. Baad mein edit karne ka man nahi kartaa, kyonki inmein mere lahmein qaid hai. Ummid hai aapko pasand nahi aayegi, but phir bhi post kar rahaa hoon.

Jab Tasavvur mein tu samaati hai
Apni har saans se teri khushbu aati hai

Zulfien Chehre par giraa kar aankhon se ghaayal karnaa
Teri ye adaa mujhko deewaana banaati hai

Har baar ajnabi ki tarah milna teraa
Ye baat dil ko pareshaan kar jaati hai

Bahut koshish kartaa hoon bhulne ki tujhko
Masoom si teri soorat bhulaayi nahi jaati hai

Mumkin nahi ab milnaa ki paraayi ho tum
Kaise sambhaloon dil ko tishnagi badhti jaati hai

Kyaa ye hi anjaam hai ek taraf mohabbat ka "Rashid"
Dil se sukoon aur aankhon se neend kho jaati hai.


Rashid

Rashid ji,
kuchh yaadein onmol hote hain waqt ke saath unka mol nahin badalta ..........aise bhi bahot khubsoorat ehesaas aapne pesh kiye hain....hume aapki ghazal achha laga

younhi apna feelings share karte rahiye


Dua.on ke saath
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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

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3rd February 2009, 11:48 PM
Diyaa ji, Shukreeyaa aapne humaare ehsaason ko pasand kiyaa.
Aap ne sahi kahaa- Yadein bahut anmol hoti hai,
Aur Lamhein jab ghuzar rahien ho to hum uski keemat nahi samjhte but unki importance baad mein pataa chalti hai

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Rashid

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Rashid ji,
kuchh yaadein onmol hote hain waqt ke saath unka mol nahin badalta ..........aise bhi bahot khubsoorat ehesaas aapne pesh kiye hain....hume aapki ghazal achha laga

younhi apna feelings share karte rahiye


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Doston ye jo ghazal main pesh karne jaa rahaa hoon. ye maine bahut early days mein likhi thi. Baad mein edit karne ka man nahi kartaa, kyonki inmein mere lahmein qaid hai. Ummid hai aapko pasand nahi aayegi, but phir bhi post kar rahaa hoon.

Jab Tasavvur mein tu samaati hai
Apni har saans se teri khushbu aati hai

Zulfien Chehre par giraa kar aankhon se ghaayal karnaa
Teri ye adaa mujhko deewaana banaati hai

Har baar ajnabi ki tarah milna teraa
Ye baat dil ko pareshaan kar jaati hai

Bahut koshish kartaa hoon bhulne ki tujhko
Masoom si teri soorat bhulaayi nahi jaati hai

Mumkin nahi ab milnaa ki paraayi ho tum
Kaise sambhaloon dil ko tishnagi badhti jaati hai

Kyaa ye hi anjaam hai ek taraf mohabbat ka "Rashid"
Dil se sukoon aur aankhon se neend kho jaati hai.


Rashid


Rashid ji namaskaar...............aapke ahsaas hume acche lage aur aapne sahi kaha ki kuch purane ahsaas edit karne ka dil nahi hota, un mein technically beshaq kitni bhi galtiyaN kyuN na ho, phir bhi woh bahut aziz hote haiN, kyuNki un ahsaaso.n ke saath bahut yaadeN judi hoti haiN.....agree with u.....purani yaado.n ko phir se jeene ka yehi tareeka hai ki un ahsaaso.n ko phir se pad lijiye.....purani diary ke page phir se palat lijiye....!

aapne apne ahsaas share kiye hume accha laga.

god bless u

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4th February 2009, 12:40 PM
Shukriyaa Sunita Ji,

Kisi shayar ne theek kahaa hai-

Tujh se zyaadaa teri yadein azeez hai
Kabhi mujhe tanhaa nahi karti.

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4th February 2009, 02:51 PM
Har baar ajnabi ki tarah milna teraa
Ye baat dil ko pareshaan kar jaati hai

Bahut koshish kartaa hoon bhulne ki tujhko
Masoom si teri soorat bhulaayi nahi jaati hai


bahut acchhe ehsaas hain rasheed saheb...yuhi likhte rahiye..

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Honslaa afzaai ke liye Shukriyaa Zainy Ji. Aap dosto ki duaayein rahi to likhte rahenge.

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Doston ye jo ghazal main pesh karne jaa rahaa hoon. ye maine bahut early days mein likhi thi. Baad mein edit karne ka man nahi kartaa, kyonki inmein mere lahmein qaid hai. Ummid hai aapko pasand nahi aayegi, but phir bhi post kar rahaa hoon.

Jab Tasavvur mein tu samaati hai
Apni har saans se teri khushbu aati hai

Zulfien Chehre par giraa kar aankhon se ghaayal karnaa
Teri ye adaa mujhko deewaana banaati hai

Har baar ajnabi ki tarah milna teraa
Ye baat dil ko pareshaan kar jaati hai

Bahut koshish kartaa hoon bhulne ki tujhko
Masoom si teri soorat bhulaayi nahi jaati hai

Mumkin nahi ab milnaa ki paraayi ho tum
Kaise sambhaloon dil ko tishnagi badhti jaati hai

Kyaa ye hi anjaam hai ek taraf mohabbat ka "Rashid"
Dil se sukoon aur aankhon se neend kho jaati hai.


Rashid

rashid ji, hume aap ka ye kalaam behad pasand aaya kyon ki isme bahut saadgi hai. hume apni feelings ko edit kabhi nahi karna chahiye kyonki edit karne ya bahut zayada gehre lafzon me apne jazbaaton ko uljhane se unki khubsoorati kam ho jati hai. dil se nikli hui baat ko bhale chahe hum sahi zubaan naa de paye,par fir bhi wo baat padhne walon ke dilo tak zaroor pahunchti hai. aap ki ye koshish ek kaamyaab koshish rahi.congratulations

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Doston ye jo ghazal main pesh karne jaa rahaa hoon. ye maine bahut early days mein likhi thi. Baad mein edit karne ka man nahi kartaa, kyonki inmein mere lahmein qaid hai. Ummid hai aapko pasand nahi aayegi, but phir bhi post kar rahaa hoon.

Jab Tasavvur mein tu samaati hai
Apni har saans se teri khushbu aati hai

Zulfien Chehre par giraa kar aankhon se ghaayal karnaa
Teri ye adaa mujhko deewaana banaati hai

Har baar ajnabi ki tarah milna teraa
Ye baat dil ko pareshaan kar jaati hai

Bahut koshish kartaa hoon bhulne ki tujhko
Masoom si teri soorat bhulaayi nahi jaati hai

Mumkin nahi ab milnaa ki paraayi ho tum
Kaise sambhaloon dil ko tishnagi badhti jaati hai

Kyaa ye hi anjaam hai ek taraf mohabbat ka "Rashid"
Dil se sukoon aur aankhon se neend kho jaati hai.


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Assalaamalekum,

Rashidji apne ehsaas ko zubaan dena koi mamuli baat nahin hoti aur jis tarah aapne apne ehsasaat ko pesh kiya hai wo wakai tareef ke kabil hai aur jo aapne kaha ummeed hai aapko pasand nhi ayegi to ye aapke khare emotions hai aur jis chiz mein sachchai ho wo khubsurat hi hosakti hai aur kuch nahin.
   
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Shifa Ji,

Tareefo ke liye shukriyaa. Aap dost log honslaa badhaate rahenge to koshishe zaari rahegi.


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rashid ji, hume aap ka ye kalaam behad pasand aaya kyon ki isme bahut saadgi hai. hume apni feelings ko edit kabhi nahi karna chahiye kyonki edit karne ya bahut zayada gehre lafzon me apne jazbaaton ko uljhane se unki khubsoorati kam ho jati hai. dil se nikli hui baat ko bhale chahe hum sahi zubaan naa de paye,par fir bhi wo baat padhne walon ke dilo tak zaroor pahunchti hai. aap ki ye koshish ek kaamyaab koshish rahi.congratulations


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Walekumassalam

Nazneen Ji,

Itni dher saari tarifon ke liye to shukriyaa kehnaa bhi kam hogaa, bahut- bahut-bahut shukriyaa ki aapne humaare ahsaanson ko pasand kiyaa

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Assalaamalekum,

Rashidji apne ehsaas ko zubaan dena koi mamuli baat nahin hoti aur jis tarah aapne apne ehsasaat ko pesh kiya hai wo wakai tareef ke kabil hai aur jo aapne kaha ummeed hai aapko pasand nhi ayegi to ye aapke khare emotions hai aur jis chiz mein sachchai ho wo khubsurat hi hosakti hai aur kuch nahin.


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