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kaSh yu bhi tu SaNaM ke Sath ho.. - 17th March 2005, 04:54 PM

Thodi Si Sham ho, thodi Si raat ho
khamoSio ke darmiya dilo ki baat ho
kaSh koi waqt aiSa bhi aaye..
kaSh yu bhi tu Sanam ke Sath ho

dhimi dhimi hawao ke Shore main
behki behki Si wo mulakat ho
aur iS dilkaSh manjar ke naShe me
Sambhle hue Se jajbaat ho..
kaSh...yu bhi tu Sanam ke Sath ho

Ne khena kuchh chahu par kehj na pau
kabhi aiSe Sehme hue Se halat ho
kabhi kuchh na keh ke bhi tu Sab keh de..
jab tere hath me mera hath ho..
kaSh..yu bhi tu Sanam ke Sath ho

taqdeer ne kya kam sataya hua tha
jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye
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17th March 2005, 05:10 PM
Thodi Si Sham ho, thodi Si raat ho
khamoSio ke darmiya dilo ki baat ho
kaSh koi waqt aiSa bhi aaye..
kaSh yu bhi tu Sanam ke Sath ho

Kya baat haii! Aapka NAshaa to zoron par hai!! LOL


dhimi dhimi hawao ke Shore main
behki behki Si wo mulakat ho
aur iS dilkaSh manjar ke naShe me
Sambhle hue Se jajbaat ho..
kaSh...yu bhi tu Sanam ke Sath ho

Waaaaaahhh!! Saadgi se sanam apne dil ki baat kahe jaa rahe hain


Ne khena kuchh chahu par kehj na pau
kabhi aiSe Sehme hue Se halat ho
kabhi kuchh na keh ke bhi tu Sab keh de..
jab tere hath me mera hath ho..
kaSh..yu bhi tu Sanam ke Sath ho

Wah Wahhh!! bahut sundar!!

Dear Sanam!

So good to see u writing again...Thou it wud have suited more on ishq... but jisko jo pasand ho wahin post karna chhiye....

Meri daad to humesha tumhare saath hi rehti hai...Is baar bhi khoob saari le lo.. on writing such a beautiful poem... Acha laga ise padhkar...

Yunhi mehfil sajati rehna Do TC

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Re: kaSh yu bhi tu SaNaM ke Sath ho.. - 17th March 2005, 06:49 PM
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Thodi Si Sham ho, thodi Si raat ho
khamoSio ke darmiya dilo ki baat ho
kaSh koi waqt aiSa bhi aaye..
kaSh yu bhi tu Sanam ke Sath ho

dhimi dhimi hawao ke Shore main
behki behki Si wo mulakat ho
aur iS dilkaSh manjar ke naShe me
Sambhle hue Se jajbaat ho..
kaSh...yu bhi tu Sanam ke Sath ho

Ne khena kuchh chahu par kehj na pau
kabhi aiSe Sehme hue Se halat ho
kabhi kuchh na keh ke bhi tu Sab keh de..
jab tere hath me mera hath ho..
kaSh..yu bhi tu Sanam ke Sath ho

meri sanam,

sab ke dilo maie jajbaat ka samandar oomad aaye.. aisa hi kuch paya yaha....
dil maie humesha k liye bas gayi yah rachna

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17th March 2005, 06:52 PM
Thodi Si Sham ho, thodi Si raat ho
khamoSio ke darmiya dilo ki baat ho
kaSh koi waqt aiSa bhi aaye..
kaSh yu bhi tu Sanam ke Sath ho


Dear Sanam.....

kaafi dinon ke baad aayi ho......

dil se daad kabool karoo.......

khush rahoo....


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Nice one - 17th March 2005, 08:15 PM
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Aapke Yeh Rachna dekhey bahut khuubsurat hay.......These lines were very touching

Ne khena kuchh chahu par kehj na pau
kabhi aiSe Sehme hue Se halat ho
kabhi kuchh na keh ke bhi tu Sab keh de..
jab tere hath me mera hath ho..
kaSh..yu bhi tu Sanam ke Sath ho

Beautiful.....Mughey apni ek kavita Dhundli Dhundli si yaad hay baaki....... ke kuch alfaz yaad aa rahey hain........

Bheeghi Bheeghi si Shaam hay baki humsafer
Tere Hothon se kuch Ankahi baat hay baki humsafer
Mere Ankhon se kuch ankahi baat hay baki humsafer
Dhuundli Dhuundli si Yaad hay baki Humsafer

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18th March 2005, 09:23 PM
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Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta

So good to see u writing again...Thou it wud have suited more on ishq... but jisko jo pasand ho wahin post karna chhiye....

Meri daad to humesha tumhare saath hi rehti hai...Is baar bhi khoob saari le lo.. on writing such a beautiful poem... Acha laga ise padhkar...

Yunhi mehfil sajati rehna Do TC
Thanks pulki
I knw ye ishq me jiyada suit karti..
but ek psychology hoti hai.. u knw something..this forum is very close to me.. u knw shayri-e-dard seems like my own place.. I like to be in this forum..dont knw the reason but ...

And thanks for the reply n also thanks for suggesting me to post this..

Take care..

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Re: Re: kaSh yu bhi tu SaNaM ke Sath ho.. - 18th March 2005, 09:30 PM
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meri sanam,

sab ke dilo maie jajbaat ka samandar oomad aaye.. aisa hi kuch paya yaha....
dil maie humesha k liye bas gayi yah rachna

tumhari DDD
Thanks ddd..
Waise Aap ka avtar bahot bahot achha hai.. bahot suit karta hai aap ko.. waise to bahot pehle se dekha tha par kehne ka mauka nahi mila..

Take care

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18th March 2005, 09:32 PM
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Dear Sanam.....

kaafi dinon ke baad aayi ho......

dil se daad kabool karoo.......

khush rahoo....
ji.. kafi dino bad..
lekin jab bhi aati hu.. aap se mulakat kiye bina nahi jati...
aur is liye me aapki bahot sukra gujar hu
Thanks for all your replies..

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Re: Nice one - 18th March 2005, 09:35 PM
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Bheeghi Bheeghi si Shaam hay baki humsafer
Tere Hothon se kuch Ankahi baat hay baki humsafer
Mere Ankhon se kuch ankahi baat hay baki humsafer
Dhuundli Dhuundli si Yaad hay baki Humsafer
Wah.. bahot sahi hai..

Well, is rachna ko pasand karne ke liye aur express karne ke liye shukriya

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Re: Re: Re: kaSh yu bhi tu SaNaM ke Sath ho.. - 18th March 2005, 11:11 PM
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Thanks ddd..
Waise Aap ka avtar bahot bahot achha hai.. bahot suit karta hai aap ko.. waise to bahot pehle se dekha tha par kehne ka mauka nahi mila..

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meri sanam,

mera avtar....... haan.. yah muje pulkit ne pyaar ka taufa diya hai.

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Re: Re: Re: Re: kaSh yu bhi tu SaNaM ke Sath ho.. - 20th March 2005, 05:53 PM
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meri sanam,

mera avtar....... haan.. yah muje pulkit ne pyaar ka taufa diya hai.

tumhari DDD
Oh..
Pulkit ne diya hai?!?...tab to itna khas nahi hai

Usko bolna ki aur bhi jiyada suitabe avtar dhunde.. kyoki yaha to aap ke pass ek hi "bachcha" hai jab ki reality me to aapke dhero bachche hai... hai na?

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