Acchee koshish rahi aapki AQS.. ehsaas se bharpoor kalaam tha yeh, meri daad qubool karen... paar ek baat aur kahnaa chahunga, ke is sher me 'jaaye' qaafiya ladkhadaa gaya hai..
kuch to samajh jao hal AQS ka tum bhi
ek pal bhi tumhare siva jaye nahi jata
ise dekh lijiyegaa...ye bhi bataiyega ke ye jaya hai ya jiyaa... shukriya..
aage bhi likhte rahiyega.
bahut sukriya shaad ji aap ne jis shayr ke bare main kaha hain waha jaye se murad hain pass hona matlab gujarna aap sahi hain main aage aur guar kar ke likhonga
thanks