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Wink Paya nahi jata - 19th March 2011, 02:28 PM

aake teri bazm main jaya nahi jata
ek tera hi chera aisa hain jo bhulaya nahi jata

youn to dil phek hamara hain har ek nazar ka muntazir
par tera zikr bhi kisi se chupaya nahi jata

kuch to samajh jao hal AQS ka tum bhi
ek pal bhi tumhare siva jaye nahi jata

bad hone ke asar dhondho ge tum dar badar
tham lo aisa aashiq lakhoon main paya nahi jata


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19th March 2011, 03:04 PM

Acchee koshish rahi aapki AQS.. ehsaas se bharpoor kalaam tha yeh, meri daad qubool karen... paar ek baat aur kahnaa chahunga, ke is sher me 'jaaye' qaafiya ladkhadaa gaya hai..

kuch to samajh jao hal AQS ka tum bhi
ek pal bhi tumhare siva jaye nahi jata





ise dekh lijiyegaa...ye bhi bataiyega ke ye jaya hai ya jiyaa... shukriya..
aage bhi likhte rahiyega.


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23rd March 2011, 05:58 PM

bahut sukriya shaad ji aap ne jis shayr ke bare main kaha hain waha jaye se murad hain pass hona matlab gujarna aap sahi hain main aage aur guar kar ke likhonga
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