hello manoj ji
,,,
kya gazab ki romantic gazal likhi hai,,!!!!!!!!
iske liye dil se daad kabool kijiye.. sari ki sari hi rachna apki haledil ko bayan ker rahi hai,,per kuch sher vastav mein saccahi ki jyada kareeb behaktey nazar atey hain.....
jalti shamma mein sulagte jismon ki si tapish kahan ?
jawan raaton mein jalte rahe do parwane ab hosh nahin
saya bhi hota nahin apna tanhaiyon ke safar mein
bahon ki girafat mein kab gujre jamane ab hosh nahin
jindagi bhar nashe mein "kureel" dagmagayenge kadam
un aankhon se sharmate hai maikhane ab hosh nahin
bahot khoob!!!!!!!!
keep it up