बहुत है मंजिले ज़िन्दगी मे
क्यूँ कल की आहों मे फूटे बैठे हो
रास्तो मे सफ़र है सफ़र मे रस्ते
क्यूँ टेढ़ी मेढ़ी लकीरें घसीटे बैठे हो
यांदों के जंगल मे बातो के भवर
क्यूँ लम्हों मे कटे बैठे हो
उठ कर फिर एक नयी शुरोआत
क्यूँ मिटे होए से मिटे बैठे हो
kafiir
Ji .. Namaste Kafiir Ji ... kaise hai aap ?? ... har baar ki tarhaa aap ki ye rachanaa bhi bahot pasand aayi hume ...
sach kahe to kuchh hai is rachanaa mai jo hume khud se baandh raha hai ... kuchh kaheti huyi ... samajh kar bhi jinhe samajh naa mushkil hota hai aesi baatein bayaan karti huyi aap ki ye rachanaa .. hume kitani pasand aayi ye shabdo mai bayaan karna mushkil hai ..
Saath hi ek request hai ... ki aap apne likhe ko roman hindi mai bhi likh diyaa kijiye taaki jo hindi nahi padh sakte woh sab members bhi aap ka likha padh sake ...
ek gustaakhi kar rahe hai ... aap ki rachanaa bahot hi pyaari lagi hume .. socha sab log in ehsaason ko padh paaye ... isliye is rachanaa ko roman hindi mai likh rahe hai .. kahi par koi galti ho gayi ho to pleasseee please pleaseee aap correct kariyegaa hume .. aur galti ke liye pahele hi maafi maangate hai ... yunhi likhate rahiye .. and keep smiling ...
Toota wo jhootha tha aetbaar,
Kyon khud se toote baithe ho,
Bahot hai manzilein zindagi mai,
Kyon kal ki aahon mai foote baithe ho,
Raasto mai safar hai safar mai raaste,
Kyon tedhi medhi lakeere ghasite baithe ho,
Yaado ke jangal mai baato ke bhanwar,
Kyon naye lamho se kate baithe ho,
Uath kar fir ek nayi shuruaat,
Kyon mite huye se mite baithe ho,
Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,
Aapki Dost: Gudia
Khuda Hafiz, Jay Ambe
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ek gustaakhi kar rahe hai ... aap ki rachanaa bahot hi pyaari lagi hume .. socha sab log in ehsaason ko padh paaye ... isliye is rachanaa ko roman hindi mai likh rahe hai .. kahi par koi galti ho gayi ho to pleasseee please pleaseee aap correct kariyegaa hume .. aur galti ke liye pahele hi maafi maangate hai ... yunhi likhate rahiye .. and keep smiling ...
बहुत है मंजिले ज़िन्दगी मे
क्यूँ कल की आहों मे फूटे बैठे हो
रास्तो मे सफ़र है सफ़र मे रस्ते
क्यूँ टेढ़ी मेढ़ी लकीरें घसीटे बैठे हो
यांदों के जंगल मे बातो के भवर
क्यूँ नये लम्हों से कटे बैठे हो
उठ कर फिर एक नयी शुरोआत
क्यूँ मिटे होए से मिटे बैठे हो
kafiir
bhut hi behtareen kam shabdoo pe apne jo manzar byan kiya ha bhut hi khobsurat laga hume apne kitne asani se itni important baat ko byan kiya hai batana bhut mushkil bas unhi likhte rahyee orr unhi atte rahyee
duaoon ke sath ijazat apka dost
yasir
यूँ छुए रूह हमारी की चरंगा चरंगा हर जर्रा खुर्शेदे-आलम-ताब
हर बेकस मज-ज़ुब रूह को उसके रब से जोड़ दे
रास्तो मे सफ़र है सफ़र मे रस्ते
क्यूँ टेढ़ी मेढ़ी लकीरें घसीटे बैठे हो
यांदों के जंगल मे बातो के भवर
क्यूँ नये लम्हों से कटे बैठे हो
Bahut Khoooooob ..... Bhai !
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Originally Posted by samyasar1
bhut hi behtareen kam shabdoo pe apne jo manzar byan kiya ha bhut hi khobsurat laga hume apne kitne asani se itni important baat ko byan kiya hai batana bhut mushkil bas unhi likhte rahyee orr unhi atte rahyee
duaoon ke sath ijazat apka dost
yasir
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Originally Posted by mittal_pali
Nice sharing................................
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Originally Posted by rahi123
very beutiful really very nice
keep writing like this
take care nd be very happy
rahi
app sabhi logon ka tahe dil se shukriya...........
kafiir
na jane kon kon hume duaaon mai yaad rakhta hai
mai dobne lagta hoon samnder uchal deta hai
Us Mukaaaa pe mera junon aajaye
tujhe pukaroon mere muh se khoon ajaaye
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