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4th April 2007, 10:18 AM

My dearest Shayri.com Members,

After a lot of bad blood between a few members, as a moderator I had to step in at this juncture. I have read all the aspects of the poetry in question and I have found out that this piece was indeed written by Amit Widhani.

I request all members to concentrate on the quality of the post and not on the originality as it has been established by me.

Also I request the members not to hurt others feelings by directly telling them " this post is stolen" . I request them to report the post to the moderators and later on it will become our responsibility to determine whether the sher was originally created by the poster.


Thanks in advance for your future cooperation,
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28th April 2007, 11:01 AM

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Meri mohabbat ki bas itni si kahaani hai
1 tutti hui kishti aur ruka hua pani hai
1 gulaab hai jo unki kitaab mein dam tod chuka hai
Aur unhe yaad bhi nahin ye kisi ki nishani hai
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very nice amit..


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Amit and lucky ji

aap dono ke sher ekse badh kar ek rahe, bahut acha laga aapko padhna. yunhi likhte rahiyega.

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Amit and lucky ji

aap dono ke sher ekse badh kar ek rahe, bahut acha laga aapko padhna. yunhi likhte rahiyega.

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bahut khoob likha hai janaab
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Thanks Raj and I promise aapko mere baaki ehsaas bhi pasand aayenge...


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