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Smile Sanjay Sehgal ji ke saath Guftagu - 1st January 2015, 10:46 AM

Dosto...aap sabhi ko naye saal ki shub-kaamnaye.

es guftagu ke silsiley meiN ham aapko SDC ke bahut umda shayr se milvane ja rhe hai, aap sabne enko enki kalam ke madyam se jana hoga, par ab ham ense ru-b-ru baate kareNge, enhone SDC 2 saal pehle hi join ki hai par SDC par enhone 2 saal meiN hi jo yogdaan diya hai wo kabil-e-tareef hai.

SDC ki bagiya ko enhone ne apni shayri se mehkaya hai, kabhi apni gazloN ke ehsaas se hamko hasaya to kabhi rulaya bhi hai, enki har shayri bahut khaas hoti hai.

ji dosto, ham baat kar rhe "SANJAY SEHGAL" ji ki

Sanjay ji, aapka es guftaggu ke silsiley meiN hardik-suwagat hai, naye saal ki bahut bahut mubarakbaad, naye saal ki shuruyaat ke saath aapki guftagu ki shuruyaat bhi ho rhi hai...umeed hai aap es guftagu ka bharpoor lutf uthayeNge.

SawaloN ka silsila shuru karte hai

1. aap ham sabko apne bare meiN batayeN, apni shuruyaati zindgi, aapki padai, aapka kaam-kaaj, famaily aur friends ?

2. aap pehli baar SDC par kaise pahunche ?

3. SDC par bane dosto ke naam aur unke bare meiN kuch khaas baate batayeN ?

filhaal etna hi...baaki break ke baad


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waaah ji waahhhhhhhhhhhh sunita dee................ good choice.
sanjay ji ki shaan me chand alfaaz..



ye huii na baat..... naye saal me nayee saugaat.

sanjay ji se ham sab hain awgat, karte hain mil jul kar swaagat.

aapse hai SDC ki shaan..... sab karte aapka bahot sammaan.

likhte hain har roz kalaam..... kar dete hain kaam tamaam.

aapki kavitaa jag se niraali..... pyaar bhi hai aur meethi gaali.

patnii se peedhit rahte hain.... bach ke raho sabse kahte hain...

Gaayak hain ye bahot sureele... shaayar waese bahot kaTeele.

Roshan mahfil sadaa rahe......... sab pe aapki duaa rahe.




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great choice sunita dii........bahut besabri se intezaar tha sanjay jee ka is katghare mein......ab hogi sawalon kee bauchhaar.....patni se pidit....sahi kha aapne shoiab bhai.....



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waaah ji waahhhhhhhhhhhh sunita dee................ good choice.
sanjay ji ki shaan me chand alfaaz..



ye huii na baat..... naye saal me nayee saugaat.

sanjay ji se ham sab hain awgat, karte hain mil jul kar swaagat.

aapse hai SDC ki shaan..... sab karte aapka bahot sammaan.

likhte hain har roz kalaam..... kar dete hain kaam tamaam.

aapki kavitaa jag se niraali..... pyaar bhi hai aur meethi gaali.

patnii se peedhit rahte hain.... bach ke raho sabse kahte hain...

Gaayak hain ye bahot sureele... shaayar waese bahot kaTeele.

Roshan mahfil sadaa rahe......... sab pe aapki duaa rahe.




Shaad.....


wahhhh Shaad bhai...kya suwagat kiya hai aapne Sanjay ji ka...

es suwagat ke liye aap daad ke haqdaar hai.

pyar aur duaoN ke saath


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Aap logon ki haunsalfazai dekiye ...
kya mil rahi hai mujhe duhai delhiye.

kya khub mila humko apka samman ,
Patni se peerit ka de diya upnaam.

Humari sharafat ka yehi hai anjaam,
jo khata humne na ki laga uska ilzaam.

Jo bhi kaho haiN hum aapke HAMDAM,
Aur kya likhein bus itni humari pehchan.

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Dosto...aap sabhi ko naye saal ki shub-kaamnaye.

es guftagu ke silsiley meiN ham aapko SDC ke bahut umda shayr se milvane ja rhe hai, aap sabne enko enki kalam ke madyam se jana hoga, par ab ham ense ru-b-ru baate kareNge, enhone SDC 2 saal pehle hi join ki hai par SDC par enhone 2 saal meiN hi jo yogdaan diya hai wo kabil-e-tareef hai.

SDC ki bagiya ko enhone ne apni shayri se mehkaya hai, kabhi apni gazloN ke ehsaas se hamko hasaya to kabhi rulaya bhi hai, enki har shayri bahut khaas hoti hai.

ji dosto, ham baat kar rhe "SANJAY SEHGAL" ji ki

Sanjay ji, aapka es guftaggu ke silsiley meiN hardik-suwagat hai, naye saal ki bahut bahut mubarakbaad, naye saal ki shuruyaat ke saath aapki guftagu ki shuruyaat bhi ho rhi hai...umeed hai aap es guftagu ka bharpoor lutf uthayeNge.

SawaloN ka silsila shuru karte hai

1. aap ham sabko apne bare meiN batayeN, apni shuruyaati zindgi, aapki padai, aapka kaam-kaaj, famaily aur friends ?

2. aap pehli baar SDC par kaise pahunche ?

3. SDC par bane dosto ke naam aur unke bare meiN kuch khaas baate batayeN ?

filhaal etna hi...baaki break ke baad


1.Mera bachpan , schooling ,college aur higher studies Chandigarh (UT) mein hui, jahan maine apni life ke twenty years spend kiye . Indeed those were t
best years of my life . I am a commerce graduate and semi qualified CA.
Apni CA finals nahi kar saka and because ,aiN apna boss khud banan chahta tha , isliye business mein Chala gaya and presently running a factory.
My wife is a home maker and my elder daughter is studying in USA and younger son is in 10th Class .. Friends bahut kum haiN limited se.

2. Google pe shayri ko search karte karte SDC pe pahunch gaya aur wahan Aru ji Main Kanch ke tukroN se Aina banata huN pari and I was so impressed ki bus yahiN ka ho ke reh gaya.

3.SDC pe sab se pehle Lucky bhai (Taish) se dosti hui , phir Rashmi ji , Vikas , Arvind , Shoaib , Rajeev Sharma , sumeet AnjaaN , Anubhav, Zarra sahib and Ahmad Hyderabadi jaise kuch logoN se jurne ka mauka mila .

Taish bhai, Vikas, Rashmi ji bahut passionate lage mujhe shayri ke bare meiN , In logon se personally milne ka mauka bhi mila ek baar mujhe .
Arvind se kabhi kabhi baat ho jati hai, I found him a true gentleman and a matured person and besides this a good poet with very fertile imagination.

Shoaib mein ek shayar ke ilava , ek dedicated and apne point pe stand hone wali shaksiyat dikhi mujhe .
Rajeev ji and Anubhav bhi kafi mast swabhav ke lage, happy go lucky type.

Ahmad hyderabadi se meri communiction Pm se ya posts pe hui and we were connected to each other because of English poetry.
Zarra Sahib ki shayri ka tau main kayal huN aur unse kafi inspire bhi hua .

Lately Aap se , Kshitij bhai se aur maikash sahib se jurne ka mauka mila . And I really admire Maikash sahibs talent of writing few words which are larger in meaning .




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Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.

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waaah ji waahhhhhhhhhhhh sunita dee................ good choice.
sanjay ji ki shaan me chand alfaaz..



ye huii na baat..... naye saal me nayee saugaat.

sanjay ji se ham sab hain awgat, karte hain mil jul kar swaagat.

aapse hai SDC ki shaan..... sab karte aapka bahot sammaan.

likhte hain har roz kalaam..... kar dete hain kaam tamaam.

aapki kavitaa jag se niraali..... pyaar bhi hai aur meethi gaali.

patnii se peedhit rahte hain.... bach ke raho sabse kahte hain...

Gaayak hain ye bahot sureele... shaayar waese bahot kaTeele.

Roshan mahfil sadaa rahe......... sab pe aapki duaa rahe.


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Shaad.....
Shoaib bhai ....apka shayrana andaaz mein swagat , bhai cha gaye aap ..

Ref patni se pedit ,,,,,Main aap se Arvind ji ko yehi nek salah dunga ...

Jo Biwi se karte pyar , aur hardam khate usse jhar ;
Aur jo karein takrar , unka sada sukhi rahe ghar sansar .

Patni ki dant apko logon ki buri nazar se bachati hai ,
Badi badi museebatein is daant ke aage sharmati haiN.

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Shoaib bhai ....apka shayrana andaaz mein swagat , bhai cha gaye aap ..

Ref patni se pedit ,,,,,Main aap se Arvind ji ko yehi nek salah dunga ...

Jo Biwi se karte pyar , aur hardam khate usse jhar ;
Aur jo karein takrar , unka sada sukhi rahe ghar sansar .

Patni ki dant apko logon ki buri nazar se bachati hai ,
Badi badi museebatein is daant ke aage sharmati haiN.

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waaah ji waahhhhhhhhhhhh sunita dee................ good choice.
sanjay ji ki shaan me chand alfaaz..



ye huii na baat..... naye saal me nayee saugaat.

sanjay ji se ham sab hain awgat, karte hain mil jul kar swaagat.

aapse hai SDC ki shaan..... sab karte aapka bahot sammaan.

likhte hain har roz kalaam..... kar dete hain kaam tamaam.

aapki kavitaa jag se niraali..... pyaar bhi hai aur meethi gaali.

patnii se peedhit rahte hain.... bach ke raho sabse kahte hain...

Gaayak hain ye bahot sureele... shaayar waese bahot kaTeele.

Roshan mahfil sadaa rahe......... sab pe aapki duaa rahe.




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Sanjay ji aap bhi Chandigarh se judey hai aur aapne zindgi ke shuruyaati 20 saal yahan bitaye hai, aap tab ke aur ab ke Chandigarh meiN kya fark mehsoos karte hai.

Chandigarh meiN aapki manpasand jagah, yahan aap kabhi bhi jana pasand karte hai, aapka fav. eating place ?

Chandigarh ka kuch aisa khaas jo aapko aur kahin pasand nahi aata...aur aap uske liye baar baar chandigarh ko miss karte hai ?


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thanx sanjay jee....for everything....aapse ek hee sawaal hai abhi.....which one is more better...arrange marriage or love marriage.....



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Sanjay ji aap bhi Chandigarh se judey hai aur aapne zindgi ke shuruyaati 20 saal yahan bitaye hai, aap tab ke aur ab ke Chandigarh meiN kya fark mehsoos karte hai.

Chandigarh meiN aapki manpasand jagah, yahan aap kabhi bhi jana pasand karte hai, aapka fav. eating place ?

Chandigarh ka kuch aisa khaas jo aapko aur kahin pasand nahi aata...aur aap uske liye baar baar chandigarh ko miss karte hai ?
Mere wala Chandigarh (1984 and before) Mere bachpan ki tarah masoom tha ..Ek Saadi si duniya aur choti choti chahteiN ..Log scooter per ghoomte the aur jo log bahut rich hote the unke pass Car hoti thi ..vo bhi Ambassador ya fiat . Khula dula shehar aur thore si abaadi , log bahut milan saar the aur ek dooze ke sukh dukh mein hissa lete the.
Ab ka Chandigarh bahut badal gaya hai aur ab charon taraf paise ka bol bala hai , logon ke pass swanky cars haiN aur bheer bhi bar gayi hai charon taraf .
Per ye kahunga ki ab Chandigarh bahut zyada modernise ho gaya hai aur log bhi zyada polished ho gaye haiN.. Mujhe is Chandigarh aur Singapore mein kafi samantayein lagati haiN , dono beautiful aur green haiN.

Sector 14 university jahan main library meiN perne jaata tha aur Sec 17 ka shopping centre dono point of attraction the .. Eating places tau Sec 17 mein bahut thi ..Baki favourite places mein Sukhna lake, Rock garden and Rose garden bahut pasand they ..Rose garden hum roz morning sair ko jate the and Sukhna lake mere last college Guru Gobind college ke kafi pass tha . Kabi kabhi college se bunk mar ke movie dekhne jate the sector 17 movie halls meiN.

Rock garden and Lake do jagah haiN jahaN maiN baar baar jana chaunga ..

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thanx sanjay jee....for everything....aapse ek hee sawaal hai abhi.....which one is more better...arrange marriage or love marriage.....
Marriage is like a well jismeiN har kisi ko ek na ek din chalang lagani perti hai aur under pahunchane per pata chala hai ki kueiN ka pani meetha(sweet) hai ya khara (saline) hai.

Love marriage mein aap khud kueiN mein chalang lagate hain apne partner ke saath and arranged marriage mein aapke ghar wale ek parnter doondte haiN aapke liye aur apko peeche se dhakka de dete haiN kueiN ke andar .

Love marriage mein aap chalang lagane se pehle sab kuch jaanch lete haiN ki kueiN ki depth kitni hai aur whehter you can sink aur swim with your partner in it . Wheras arranged marriage meiN aap ko kueiN mein pahunchne ke baad pata chalta hai ki main tairunga ya doob jaunga ismeiN.

Marriage chahe love ho ya arranged aap is kueiN ke dayre mein simat jaate haiN aur aap ki duniya kueiN ke maindek (frog) ki tarah ho jaati hai jo wahin uchal kood machat hai .


Love marriage mein aap pehle ek doosre ko jante hain, likes dislikes pehchante haiN aur ek concious decison lete hain to live together for a life.

Whereas in arranged marriage you are tied up first and later you learn about the similarities aur dissimilarties aabout each other and decide as to how to coxist together..

Meri arranged marriage hai ..and maiN apne experience se keh sakta huN ki Love marriage is more better becoz there you find out a partner and work out on compatibility beforehand .. Whereas in arranged marriage compatibility doondhte doondhte umr guzar jati hai and its more of a compromise.

Arvind bhai umeed hai ki main apke prashnn ka uttar theek se de paya huN.

Sanjay Sehgal



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Marriage is like a well jismeiN har kisi ko ek na ek din chalang lagani perti hai aur under pahunchane per pata chala hai ki kueiN ka pani meetha(sweet) hai ya khara (saline) hai.

Love marriage mein aap khud kueiN mein chalang lagate hain apne partner ke saath and arranged marriage mein aapke ghar wale ek parnter doondte haiN aapke liye aur apko peeche se dhakka de dete haiN kueiN ke andar .

Love marriage mein aap chalang lagane se pehle sab kuch jaanch lete haiN ki kueiN ki depth kitni hai aur whehter you can sink aur swim with your partner in it . Wheras arranged marriage meiN aap ko kueiN mein pahunchne ke baad pata chalta hai ki main tairunga ya doob jaunga ismeiN.

Marriage chahe love ho ya arranged aap is kueiN ke dayre mein simat jaate haiN aur aap ki duniya kueiN ke maindek (frog) ki tarah ho jaati hai jo wahin uchal kood machat hai .


Love marriage mein aap pehle ek doosre ko jante hain, likes dislikes pehchante haiN aur ek concious decison lete hain to live together for a life.

Whereas in arranged marriage you are tied up first and later you learn about the similarities aur dissimilarties aabout each other and decide as to how to coxist together..

Meri arranged marriage hai ..and maiN apne experience se keh sakta huN ki Love marriage is more better becoz there you find out a partner and work out on compatibility beforehand .. Whereas in arranged marriage compatibility doondhte doondhte umr guzar jati hai and its more of a compromise.

Arvind bhai umeed hai ki main apke prashnn ka uttar theek se de paya huN.

Sanjay Sehgal
sanjay jee.......aapka jawaab pada .....par mujhe to lagta hai...jb well me hee jana jai to kya arrange aur kya love....hashr to ek hee hona hai.......mujhe lagata hai arrange marriage jyada acchi hoti hai.....at least kuch din ek doosre ko jaanne me to lagta hai.......
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Sanjay ji

Namaste


Naye saal ki shuruaat hui hai....naye saal me aapne kya taey kiyaa ki yeh karna hi hai....
Hi Dhaval ..Well naya saal shuru ho gaya ..REgarding New year Resolution ..

Well jab koi conflict hi nahi hai tau kya resolve karna aur if nothing to resolve then no Resolution . ha ha

On serious note ye tay kiya hai ki zindagi ko thora simplify karna hai aur apne ko pressure / tension kam deni hai ,, bus itna hi .


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Sanjay ji apne bachpan ki koi aisi khaas baat / shararat jisko aap abhi tak nahi bhooley ?


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Behad khoob shuruvaat hai bhai, mere aane se pehle mera do baar zikr hua..jaankar aacha laga ki hum bhi aache insaanon mein shumaar rakhte hai.

Sanjay ji chaliye aabhi ke liye aapse ek sawaal

Gaane ka shauq aapko kab se hai, yeh isliye bhi pooch raha hoon ki aapki aawaaz mein bahut sachaai aur dil ki gehraayi mehsoos ki hai maine

aap gaate hai bina is baat ki parwaah kiye ki saamne waala kya sochegaa..jo bahut kam log kar paate hai..shayad yeh baat mujhe bhi aapse jode rakhti hai.



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JI eik vakya yaad aata hai bachpan ka ..jum hum chote the tua main aur mera younger brother Ghar ki chat pe char ke kite flying karte the .. ye chat 3rd floor ke uupar bani thi aur iske charon or koi boundry wall nahi thi ..yani ki risky tha wahan , agar girte tau three floors neeche aa jate the ..Aur ek din humare Dada ji ne pakar liya humein chat pe chate hue aur complaint kar di humare father ko ..ki dekho bahce kya gul khilate haiN ..

Bus phir kya tha pita ji police walon ki tarah humaree jo khatir ki vo aaj bhi yaad hai Us din ke baad chat pe kabhi nahi gaye patang udane.



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Behad khoob shuruvaat hai bhai, mere aane se pehle mera do baar zikr hua..jaankar aacha laga ki hum bhi aache insaanon mein shumaar rakhte hai.

Sanjay ji chaliye aabhi ke liye aapse ek sawaal

Gaane ka shauq aapko kab se hai, yeh isliye bhi pooch raha hoon ki aapki aawaaz mein bahut sachaai aur dil ki gehraayi mehsoos ki hai maine

aap gaate hai bina is baat ki parwaah kiye ki saamne waala kya sochegaa..jo bahut kam log kar paate hai..shayad yeh baat mujhe bhi aapse jode rakhti hai.

Ji janab Anubhav ji ...Gane ka shauq bachpan se hi hai aur mera chota bhai bahut acha gata hai ..Main jab bahut chota tha ..8/9 years ka tau ek Dilip Kumar Sahib ki film shaheed ka gana bahut gata tha ...Mera rang de basanti chola ,maye rang de basanti chola ..

Honestly maiN bathroon singer hi huN .. ye tau aap logon ka badappan hai ki tareef kar dete ho.. Jab dil kiya khud ko khush karne ke liye ga ke record kar liya aur phir khud hi sun ker apni peeth thok li..Maine ek baat note ki hai ki apni khushi ke liye gane per aap ka mood swing +ve side mein ho jata hai ...jab kabhi tension mehsoos karta hun , tau akele kuch gunguna leta huN zor se aur mind relax ho jata hai . Kabhi kabhi gari chalate chalate kuch gungunane ka man kiya , tau phone meiN record ker leta huN aur khud hi sun leta huN ...Dil behal jata hai..

Kabhi kabhi get,together mein ek adha stanza ya antra ga deta hun , jisse crowd mein ek identity bhi banti hai aur log appreciate karte hain . thora mahoil bhi khushnuma ban jata hai .

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ham aik mahine ke liye SDC se chutti le rhe hai to ab sdc par aik mahina aana shayad mumkin na ho, hamne aapke saath yeh silsilla shuru kiya tha, par ab esko aage Anu (MAST) bhai badayeNge. umeed karti hu yeh silsilla aapke liye aur sdc ke members ke liye bahut yaadgaar rhega. meri taraf se chand sawaal aapke liye


1. apne shayri kis umr se shuru ki ?

2. shuruyaati shayri meiN aur ab ki shayri meiN kya fark mehsoos karte hai aap?

3. aap sabse jayada kis topic par shayri karna jayada pasand karte hai ?

4. apni pasand ki, apni likhi hue chand gazaloN ke link dijiye hame ?

5. kya aapki wife ko maloom hai ki aap bahut acche shayar hai ?

6. aapne apni wife ke liye ya apne kisi aur family member ke liye koi gazal likhi hai ? agar likhi hai to hamare saath share kijiye ?

7. mashoor shayroN meiN aapke pasandida shayar kaun kaun hai ?



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ham aik mahine ke liye SDC se chutti le rhe hai to ab sdc par aik mahina aana shayad mumkin na ho, hamne aapke saath yeh silsilla shuru kiya tha, par ab esko aage Anu (MAST) bhai badayeNge. umeed karti hu yeh silsilla aapke liye aur sdc ke members ke liye bahut yaadgaar rhega. meri taraf se chand sawaal aapke liye


1. apne shayri kis umr se shuru ki ?

2. shuruyaati shayri meiN aur ab ki shayri meiN kya fark mehsoos karte hai aap?

3. aap sabse jayada kis topic par shayri karna jayada pasand karte hai ?

4. apni pasand ki, apni likhi hue chand gazaloN ke link dijiye hame ?

5. kya aapki wife ko maloom hai ki aap bahut acche shayar hai ?

6. aapne apni wife ke liye ya apne kisi aur family member ke liye koi gazal likhi hai ? agar likhi hai to hamare saath share kijiye ?

7. mashoor shayroN meiN aapke pasandida shayar kaun kaun hai ?

Sunita ji main apko jawab point by point deta huN:

1.At the age of 22 .. Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai mere cousin ki shadi thi aur us
mein ladki walon ki taraf se aye logon se cher char karni thi . Pata nahi
Kahan se mere zehan me ek kavita aa gayi ( isse pehle maine kabhi poem
na likhi thi , na mujhe interest tha ]

Meri Pehli kavita :

Vo humari or dekh kar murkura rahe haiN,
Lagta hai kuch kehna chah rahe haiN.

Zalim waqt is bewafai thekhiye ,
kuch kehne se ghabra rahe haiN.

Thora ghabra rahe haiN thora sharma rahe haiN,
Hum unki in adaoN pe yuN hi mare ja rahe haiN.

YuN bemaut merna hai na kabool humko ,
Isliye unki her chal pe hum nayi chal phente ja rahe haiN.

2. Shuruati shayri ...pata nahi shyri bhi thi ya nahiN ... Bus jo kuch dil mein
aya keh diya ya likh diya ...ek kacha ehsaas tha voh .

Ab aap logoN ki sohbat mili SDC per , tau jana ki shayri kya hoti hai
aur iski haddein kya hain aur iski nazaqat kya hai ..
Yakeen mainye abhi main shyri ki pehli paydaan per huN aur bahut kuch
sekhna hai is ke bare mein .


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Sunita ji main apko jawab point by point deta huN:

1.At the age of 22 .. Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai mere cousin ki shadi thi aur us
mein ladki walon ki taraf se aye logon se cher char karni thi . Pata nahi
Kahan se mere zehan me ek kavita aa gayi ( isse pehle maine kabhi poem
na likhi thi , na mujhe interest tha ]

Meri Pehli kavita :

Vo humari or dekh kar murkura rahe haiN,
Lagta hai kuch kehna chah rahe haiN.

Zalim waqt is bewafai thekhiye ,
kuch kehne se ghabra rahe haiN.

Thora ghabra rahe haiN thora sharma rahe haiN,
Hum unki in adaoN pe yuN hi mare ja rahe haiN.

YuN bemaut merna hai na kabool humko ,
Isliye unki her chal pe hum nayi chal phente ja rahe haiN.

2. Shuruati shayri ...pata nahi shyri bhi thi ya nahiN ... Bus jo kuch dil mein
aya keh diya ya likh diya ...ek kacha ehsaas tha voh .

Ab aap logoN ki sohbat mili SDC per , tau jana ki shayri kya hoti hai
aur iski haddein kya hain aur iski nazaqat kya hai ..
Yakeen mainye abhi main shyri ki pehli paydaan per huN aur bahut kuch
sekhna hai is ke bare mein .


.........reply to be continued ( Sanjay Sehgal)
Doston Main yahn pe add karna chahunga ki maine apna Poetry writing English Poetry se shuru kiya tha at the age of 21 aur meri first English poem Agony of Wait thi ,
Prantu meri pehli hindi poetry 22 years ki age mein likhi gayi thi



3. aap sabse jayada kis topic par shayri karna jayada pasand karte hai ?


Main kisi bhi topic pe likhna pasand karunga chahe vo Ishq se related ho , ya ghum se , ya social cause se , ya humour se related , Sharab pe ho shabab pe, spirtual ho ya nature ke upar likhna ho, actual happening ho ya imagination ho , apna ehsaas ho ya kisi ko observe ker ke doosron pe likhna , bus jahan sur lag gaya , kuch likh diya .. Meri shayri universal hai , kisi topic ki mohtaj nahiN

4. apni pasand ki, apni likhi hue chand gazaloN ke link dijiye hame ?


1. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=75511
2. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=75294
3. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=75098
4. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=78440
5. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=77891
6 http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=77891


5. kya aapki wife ko maloom hai ki aap bahut acche shayar hai ?


Ji bilkul meri biwi kp maloom hai ki main poetry likhta huN , but unka shayri meiN koi interest nahin hai

6. aapne apni wife ke liye ya apne kisi aur family member ke liye koi gazal likhi hai ? agar likhi hai to hamare saath share kijiye ?

Maine koi bhi shayri apne kisi ghar wale se inspire ho ker nahin likhi .. sub kuch imaginary hai , ya phir bahar se observe kar ke likha hai


7. mashoor shayroN meiN aapke pasandida shayar kaun kaun hai ?


Mujhe mash,hoor shahroN ki jyada study nahin hai .. Ghalib ki shayri se maiN impressed hun jyada kuch para nahi....But main Shiv batalavi ji ki Ghazlon aur nazron se kafi impressed huN aur unki ghazlein maine bahut suni haiN Jagjeet Singh and Mahender Kapoor ki aawan mein



khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
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Doston Main yahn pe add karna chahunga ki maine apna Poetry writing English Poetry se shuru kiya tha at the age of 21 aur meri first English poem Agony of Wait thi ,
Prantu meri pehli hindi poetry 22 years ki age mein likhi gayi thi



3. aap sabse jayada kis topic par shayri karna jayada pasand karte hai ?


Main kisi bhi topic pe likhna pasand karunga chahe vo Ishq se related ho , ya ghum se , ya social cause se , ya humour se related , Sharab pe ho shabab pe, spirtual ho ya nature ke upar likhna ho, actual happening ho ya imagination ho , apna ehsaas ho ya kisi ko observe ker ke doosron pe likhna , bus jahan sur lag gaya , kuch likh diya .. Meri shayri universal hai , kisi topic ki mohtaj nahiN

4. apni pasand ki, apni likhi hue chand gazaloN ke link dijiye hame ?


1. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=75511
2. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=75294
3. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=75098
4. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=78440
5. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=77891
6 http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=77891


5. kya aapki wife ko maloom hai ki aap bahut acche shayar hai ?


Ji bilkul meri biwi kp maloom hai ki main poetry likhta huN , but unka shayri meiN koi interest nahin hai

6. aapne apni wife ke liye ya apne kisi aur family member ke liye koi gazal likhi hai ? agar likhi hai to hamare saath share kijiye ?

Maine koi bhi shayri apne kisi ghar wale se inspire ho ker nahin likhi .. sub kuch imaginary hai , ya phir bahar se observe kar ke likha hai


7. mashoor shayroN meiN aapke pasandida shayar kaun kaun hai ?


Mujhe mash,hoor shahroN ki jyada study nahin hai .. Ghalib ki shayri se maiN impressed hun jyada kuch para nahi....But main Shiv batalavi ji ki Ghazlon aur nazron se kafi impressed huN aur unki ghazlein maine bahut suni haiN Jagjeet Singh and Mahender Kapoor ki aawan mein
Bahut khoob mehfil jam rahi hai bhai, aapke baare mein aur aapki life ke baare kaafi baatein jaanne ka mauka mila hai aur aabhi to aur bhi raaz khulne baaki hai...

Chaliye rukh karte hai kuch aur baaton ki aur jinpar aabhi talak shayad kisi ne gaur nahi farmaaya hai....


1. Har kisi ke zindagi mein 'pyaar' ek alag andaaz mein dastak deta hai, aapki zindagi mein woh mod kab aur kaise aaya?

2. SDC par bhi aapko ab 2 saal se upar ho gaye hai, aapka yeh silsilaa ab talak kaisa raha hai?

aapke jawaabon ke intezaar mein.



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sanjay jee bahut accha lg rha hai aapke baare me jaanna........vaise to aapki awaaz maine bhi suni hai...aur ek kashish hai aapji aawaaz mein....ek dard bhi.....to kya koi purana dard juda hai aapke saath jo aapki aawaaz mein aur kabhi kabhi shayri mein bhi jhalakta hai।.............



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Sehgal saahab, Namaskar..!

Forum mein deri se shirkat keliye maazrat chahunga.
Aapke baare mein jaankar bohot achha laga, aur khaas kar aapka khud ko bayaan karne ka andaaz bilkul alag sa hai. Mods ne bhi ek se baRh kar ek sawal kiye hain aapko kathghare mein gherne keliye, jinko aapne bakhoobi sambhala hai.

Guftagu ka silsila behad dilchasp chal raha hai. Kuchh aur sawal-jawab ki kadiyoN ka muntizar.

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Bahut khoob mehfil jam rahi hai bhai, aapke baare mein aur aapki life ke baare kaafi baatein jaanne ka mauka mila hai aur aabhi to aur bhi raaz khulne baaki hai...

Chaliye rukh karte hai kuch aur baaton ki aur jinpar aabhi talak shayad kisi ne gaur nahi farmaaya hai....


1. Har kisi ke zindagi mein 'pyaar' ek alag andaaz mein dastak deta hai, aapki zindagi mein woh mod kab aur kaise aaya?

2. SDC par bhi aapko ab 2 saal se upar ho gaye hai, aapka yeh silsilaa ab talak kaisa raha hai?

aapke jawaabon ke intezaar mein.
Mast bhai apke sawalon ka jawab is tarah hai ...
1. Humara dil kabhi awara nahin hua , kabhi bechara nahin hua , Khud se ....itna masroof raha , Ki auron ka sahara na liya ....Shayad aap smajh hi
gaye honge ki hum itne khuddar the ki khud se hi mohabbat kar baithe .
Humari zindagee meIn kisi mohtrama nein jhankne ki koshish hi na kee
aur hum itne sharmeele the ki kisi ki or ankh utha ke nahiN dekhi ...

Ek sher yaad aa gaya (NM)
Tab dekh ke chupte the , ab dekhte haiN chhup ke ,
Vo dauraya lakadpan tha , ye dauraya Jawani hai .

Humein umeed thi ki pyar humari Zindagi mein shadi ke baad tau dastak
dega shayad , but there is old saying .You can be either married or happy

Vaise Sacche pyar ki mujhe abhi bhi talash hai , aur meri yeh ghazal Koi Mujh se
ek baar pyar kar le mein maine apni bhavnaiyein vyaqt ki haiN...gaur farmayeiN

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=76344

2. SDC pe mera 2 sal ka safar bahut haseen raha .
Tanha sa yun bhatakta tha main Kabhee,
Naye sathi mile dost bun gaye sabhee.

Jab main SDC pe aya tha tau bilkul anjaan tha ki shayri kya hoti hai , iski
bandishein kya hain , kaise pirona hai ehsaason ko . YahN sab logon ne
bahut haunsala badaya aur dheere main is kala ki mahrat aur training
hasil kar raha hun ..Yahan bahut achche ache articles mile subject ke
upar , jisse merei knowledge mein bahut izafa hua ,,Kafi sare logon ke
kalaam padne ko mile aur bahut kuch seekhne ko mila .. Mere hisab se
shayri.com ek bahut hi nayab platform hai shayri ke liye aur ye apne aap
mein unique hai aur mukammal hai.. Sabse badiya baat hai ki aap apne
talent ko net pe ujagar ker sakte ho ..Jab dil kiya log on kiya aur jur
gaye shari ki mehfil se ... Yakeen maniye mere do hi shauq hain ..ek
SDC pe aana aur doosra Likedin pe write karna ....

Sanjay Sehgal




khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.

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sanjay jee bahut accha lg rha hai aapke baare me jaanna........vaise to aapki awaaz maine bhi suni hai...aur ek kashish hai aapji aawaaz mein....ek dard bhi.....to kya koi purana dard juda hai aapke saath jo aapki aawaaz mein aur kabhi kabhi shayri mein bhi jhalakta hai।.............
Aru bhai ....

Dard pourana nahi ..roz milta hai apni begum ki fatkar sun kar mujhe ,, so apna ghum halka karne ke liye gaa leta hun. Ye tau raha mere gane meiN dard ki vajah .

Shayri meiN dard ..pata nahin apne aap se aa jata hai , shayad pichle janam mein kisi ne bewafai ki hogi hum se ..ha ha ..
Zindagi mein bahut struggle dekhi hai maine career mein ..kafi upar neeche hota rehta hai .. Main ek sensitive insaan hun jo ki insensitive kaam kar raha hai , Business aur us mein factory chalana is not my cup of tea basically, so tea spill hoti rehti hai idhar udhar ...bus yehi dard hai zindagi meiN ki do roti kamane ke liye itni jaddo zehat .. Vaise main financially sound hun , but ye safar ke tere mere raste tang karte hain kabhi kabhi..ha ha

On serious note main kahunga ki Poetry mein mujhe God given gift hai ki main ksi bhi pehlu pe likh sakta hun
Kuch imagination se kuch observation se poetry karta hun main.

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Sehgal saahab, Namaskar..!

Forum mein deri se shirkat keliye maazrat chahunga.
Aapke baare mein jaankar bohot achha laga, aur khaas kar aapka khud ko bayaan karne ka andaaz bilkul alag sa hai. Mods ne bhi ek se baRh kar ek sawal kiye hain aapko kathghare mein gherne keliye, jinko aapne bakhoobi sambhala hai.

Guftagu ka silsila behad dilchasp chal raha hai. Kuchh aur sawal-jawab ki kadiyoN ka muntizar.

Aapka khair khwah

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Tahe dil se mashkoor huN jo aapne humari hausalafazai ke liye aane ki zehmat ki . Apko humare javab pasand aye iske liye aaka bahut bahut shukriya .

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Sanjay Ji

Behad shukriya jo aap itni gehraayi aur sachaayi ke saath sabhi ke sawaalon ka jawaab de rahe hai..jaisa ki maine pehle bhi kaha ki aap se is tarah rubaruu hone ka maukaa behad khoob jam raha hai

jaan pehchaan se baat gehraayi tak utar aayi hai to chaliye isi silsile ko thodi aur hawaa dete hai

Yeh bataayein ki aap khud mein koi aisi baat paate hai jise aap khud badalnaa chahte ho par kar na paa rahe ho? Agar hai to kyun?

Yun to aapka apnaa karobaar hai jisme usually insaan kaafi masroof ho jaata hai par us mein se bhi aap aacha waqt is mehfil ke naam kar paate hai..iskaa koi khaas raaz jo aap hum sabse share karna chahenGe?



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Namaskaar sanjay jee..
Der se aa paayi main..mafi chahoongi....par aapke jawaab lagatar padti rahi hoon ab tak..achcha laga aapke bare me jankar..
Meri taraf se sawaal hazir hain.....
1-aapki zindgi ka aisa koi wakiya jo aapko hamesha yaad aata ho..aur gudguda jata ho..
2-aapki family me aapke sabse kareeb kaun hai...jisse kuch had tak aap apne dil ki baat kah sakte hon..



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Behad shukriya jo aap itni gehraayi aur sachaayi ke saath sabhi ke sawaalon ka jawaab de rahe hai..jaisa ki maine pehle bhi kaha ki aap se is tarah rubaruu hone ka maukaa behad khoob jam raha hai

jaan pehchaan se baat gehraayi tak utar aayi hai to chaliye isi silsile ko thodi aur hawaa dete hai

Yeh bataayein ki aap khud mein koi aisi baat paate hai jise aap khud badalnaa chahte ho par kar na paa rahe ho? Agar hai to kyun?

Yun to aapka apnaa karobaar hai jisme usually insaan kaafi masroof ho jaata hai par us mein se bhi aap aacha waqt is mehfil ke naam kar paate hai..iskaa koi khaas raaz jo aap hum sabse share karna chahenGe?
Khud mein kuch badalna chahta huN :

Bada hi gehra aur dilchasp sawal poocha aapne ...khud mein main apna aggressive temperament badalna chahta huN , matlab Anger kum karna chahta huN .
Zindagi mein main apna track badalna chahta huN , Jo main karobaar kar raha huN main uske liye bana nahiN huN but for survival I am just pulling on for survival . Main ek sensisitive aur intellectual insaan huN aur jo kam main kar raha huN usmein bilkun insensitivity chahiye , manipulation chaiye.
But maiN chahte hue bhi kuch nahin badal sakta and at the end of the day accepting my life as it is .


Mehfil ke naam waqt karna :


Ye koi badi baat nahin hai.. Aap ko jab kisi cheez se pyar ho jata hai tau aap baar baar uske pass jate hain , Mujhe bhi is mehfil aur mehfil walon se behad pyar ho gaya hai , isliye mujhe yahan jyada se jyada waqt bitana acha lagta hai ..



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Namaskaar sanjay jee..
Der se aa paayi main..mafi chahoongi....par aapke jawaab lagatar padti rahi hoon ab tak..achcha laga aapke bare me jankar..
Meri taraf se sawaal hazir hain.....
1-aapki zindgi ka aisa koi wakiya jo aapko hamesha yaad aata ho..aur gudguda jata ho..
2-aapki family me aapke sabse kareeb kaun hai...jisse kuch had tak aap apne dil ki baat kah sakte hon..
1. KOi ek khas waqya tau nahin main keh sakta ... but ek span jo college ki life aur uske baad CA ki padaee ke dauran jo bitaya , vo bahut yaad aata . Vo carefree life , koi responsibility nahinm bus masti hi masti .. Kash vo lamhe phir se aa sakein chahe kuch pal ke liye sahi

2. Apni better half ( jo kabhi kabhi bitter bhi ho jati hai, ha ha ) se hi sub kuch share kar leta hun . aur koi nahiN hai itna kareebi ki sab kuch sanjha kiya j sake



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Sanjay ji namaskar,

Jaisa ki aapne bataya ki aap kisi khas vyakti ya ghar ke sadasyon pe shayri nahi karte. Balki imagination use karte hain.............agar kabhi aapko kisi filmy adakara par shayri karni pade....to aap kispar karna pasand karenge......aur ab mai soch raha hoon ki agar likhenge to kya likhenge...

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Sanjay ji aapse chand swaaal merii taraf se bhii............

1) aap apni shhaayri ke safar ko shuru karne me kise apni prernastrot maante hain.

2) apni pahli likhi shayri me sabse khaas baat aapko kyaa nazar aatii hai.

3) SDC me aapka safar kaisaa guzar raha hai, kyaa aap SDC me near future kuch badlaaaw dekhna chaahte hain.

4) shaayri aur gaaykii ke alawa aapke pasandeeda shauq kya hain.... kaam ki bhaag dauud ke baad aapko ki cheez me raahat mitii hai...

filhaal itne hi.... baaki ke saath fir haazir houngaaa....

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16th January 2015, 08:08 PM

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Sanjay ji namaskar,

Jaisa ki aapne bataya ki aap kisi khas vyakti ya ghar ke sadasyon pe shayri nahi karte. Balki imagination use karte hain.............agar kabhi aapko kisi filmy adakara par shayri karni pade....to aap kispar karna pasand karenge......aur ab mai soch raha hoon ki agar likhenge to kya likhenge...

Aapka apna
Bhushan
Bushan bhai bara interesting question tha . Lo bhai maine Sonam Kapoor pe kuch
likha hai gaur farmayeiN :

Teri muskurahat ke sadke hum sub kuch haar baithe ,
Dil ho gaya bechara aur hum tumse ker pyar baithe.

Teri roop aur jawani pe maiN ho gaya pani pani ,
Tere ishq mein jo doobe bus hue bekarar baithe.

Bala ki khoobsoorat tera husan hai kamal walla walla ,
Ter naino ke kanjhar se hum qatl hone ko tayar baithe.

Teri ajeeb si kashish ne badal dali meri Zindganee ,
Tujhe dil mein basa ke hum khudmuktiar baithe.

LakhoN tere chanewale aur mil na payeinge kabhi hum,
Teri tasveer pe hi janam hum apna dil nisaar baithe.


Ummed hai Bhushan bhai maine Sonam ki tareef theek thak kar di hai as a fan > Ha ha



khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.

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16th January 2015, 08:47 PM

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Sanjay ji aapse chand swaaal merii taraf se bhii............

1) aap apni shhaayri ke safar ko shuru karne me kise apni prernastrot maante hain.

2) apni pahli likhi shayri me sabse khaas baat aapko kyaa nazar aatii hai.

3) SDC me aapka safar kaisaa guzar raha hai, kyaa aap SDC me near future kuch badlaaaw dekhna chaahte hain.

4) shaayri aur gaaykii ke alawa aapke pasandeeda shauq kya hain.... kaam ki bhaag dauud ke baad aapko ki cheez me raahat mitii hai...

filhaal itne hi.... baaki ke saath fir haazir houngaaa....


shukriya

Shaad...
Shoaib bhai kya baat hai , badi gehri hindi likhte ho ,,,,,

1. Shayri ka prernastrot tau aap jante hi hai ...apne mujhe Padtnipeedit ki
upathi jo de rakhi hai .. Bhai theek pehchana aapne , humari prerna strot
haiN humari begum ..jab jab unki taraf se ghumon ki bochar hoti hai ,
yakeen mano shayri ka jharna khud ba khud phoot aata hai .

2. Apni likhi shayri meiN mujhe kuch bhi khaas nahi lagta ,,, bus halka
phulka tukbandi kar leta hun kabhi kabhi ,, Haan itna kahunga ki meri
lehni mein spontaniety ( hazir jawabi ) dikhti hai mujhe .. Aur main
effortlessly likhta hun , jyada dimaag pe zor nahin dalna perta.

3. SDC pe safar bahut romanchak hai .. Roz jab tak SDC pe tehal ke na
aayein tau dil ko sakoon nahin milta .. Naye naye log allover the globe
se post karte haiN . Un sab ko per ke aisa lagta hai mano bichre hue
dost aapas mein baith ker diloN ke ehsaas suna rahe hon .
Raha SDC mein future mein kuch naya ...maiN chaht ahuN ki yahan apna
likha kalam apni awaaz mein post kerne ki provision ho.

4. Mere shauq kisi zamane mein music hua karta tha ..Ghulam ali, Jagjeet
Singh , Pankaj Udhas ki ghazlein bahut suni . Poetry ke elawa mera
shauq AStrology hai and writing on Linkedin group SKE ..



khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
   
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