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badlii hai unki nazar dheere dheere.........Ghazal -
13th March 2007, 11:31 AM
aadaab yaaran-e-mehfil
hosh meiN nahiiN huuN so zyada nahiiN kahuNga Ghazal mula'izaa kijiye badlii hai unki nazar dheere dheere ubhre haiN zakhm-e-jigar dheere dheere bichaR'te gaye humsafar dheere dheere mushkil huii rehguzar dheere dheere guzaari hai yuuN ziNdagi bin tumhaare goyaa piyaa ho zahar dheere dheere zaroorat ho jab hosh khone ki yaaro karti hai mai kyoN asar dheere dheere ? taara koi TooT'ta dekh ke hum royaa kiye raat bhar dheere dheere kahaa tha ummiidoN se bach ke guzarna kahaa tha dil-e-muz'tar*, dheere dheere dil-e-muz'tar = besabr dil , impatient heart vo aaye haiN khaaboN meiN muddat ke baad ae shab rafta rafta, guzar dheere dheere "maikash" abhi to, uThaa hai janaazaa pahuNchegi un taq khabar dheere dheere maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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13th March 2007, 11:59 AM
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Aadaab Maikash Sahab!!! Wah Sahab !! kam aate hai par jab aate hai, khoob laate hai!!! aapkaa kalaam hameshaa ki tarah kuchh chhaap mujh pe chhod hi jaataa hai!!! meri aur se daad kabool farmaayiyegaa!!! |
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13th March 2007, 06:40 PM
aadaab maikashji,
kaise hain aap?ek arse baad aapka likha padhne mila hai,bahut badhiya likha(no doubt). guzaari hai yuuN ziNdagi bin tumhaare goyaa piyaa ho zahar dheere dheere zaroorat ho jab hosh khone ki yaaro karti hai mai kyoN asar dheere dheere ? vo aaye haiN khaaboN meiN muddat ke baad ae shab rafta rafta, guzar dheere dheere yeh ashaar behad pasand aaye,chuu gaye dilko.yunhin likhte rahen.dil se di daad kabool karen. khush rahen. tc,bye gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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13th March 2007, 07:53 PM
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ek bahut hi umda kalam pesh kiiya hai aapne maikash jii or ise pesh karne ki ada bhii bahut khoon hai dil se daad hazir hai daad kabool farmaiyega  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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13th March 2007, 10:59 PM
maikasH bhaiya namskaar aur SSA
"bahot dino baad bazm meiN aapki tehreer ko deKha bhaiya khusHii hui aapko paRH ke ..ek dilkasH ghazal ko lekar aap hazir hue is baar, ehsaasoN ko lafzoN ke sahaare bahot hii khoob bayaaN kiye haiN aapne "maikash" abhi to, uThaa hai janaazaa pahuNchegi un taq khabar dheere dheere dil se nikli daad ko kubul kijiyenGa apna khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN jai shree krishna aapka dost dhaval |
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14th March 2007, 10:29 AM
Jitni baar is kalaam ko padho lutf utnaa hee badhtaa jaata hai...itne khuubsurat ashaar kehkar aapne inaayat farmaayi hai...shukriaa aapka...iss gazal ko padhkar janab Qamar Jalalwi sahib ki gazal Mariiz e Mohabbat kee yaad aa gayi...usi mein se ek sher yoon hai...
u.nhe.n Khat me.n likhaa thaa dil muztarib hai javaab un kaa aayaa muhabbat na karate tumhe.n dil lagaane ko kisane kahaa thaa bahal jaayegaa dil bahalate bahalate aapke is kalaam kee rawaani bhi kuchh yoonhi saa asar karti hai...nashaa tau ho jaata hai par, khumaar utartaa hai dheere dheere...allah kare zor-e-kalam aur ziyaadaa... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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bhut khub -
14th March 2007, 10:44 AM
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14th March 2007, 12:19 PM
hi maikash ji
kese ho aap? sasriyakal maikash ji aapki rachna padh ke achchha laga, jis khubsurti se aapne apne ehsaaso ko sabdo mein dhaya hai aapne wo daad ke kabil hai , daad kubul ki jiyega maikash ji, aapki rachna mein jo aapne kaha hai ki badli hai nazar unki dheere dheere ye ehsaas hamien behad pasand aaya, aur jis khubsurati se aapne puri rachna mein dard jalkaaya hai wo hamein bahut achchha laga maikash ji aapki rachna pe hamari ye chhoti se koshish ummid karta hu aapko pasand aayegi gaur farmaiyega dost.. Dheere dheere jaam ka maza lenge hum, Aapki panaho mein guzari is shaam ka maza lenge hum, Ab agar katl kardogi to koi gila nahi, Zindagi ke anjaam ka maza lenge hum. ese hi likhte rahiyega aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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17th March 2007, 08:13 AM
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Dheer saheb namaste kya kaheiN bhai in dinoN to saaNs bhi yuuN aa rahi hai jaise maiN yahaaN aata huuN...ruk ruk ke  shayad ye meri aakhiri Ghazal hai...! ba-har-haal aapne Ghazal ko pasaNd kiya, mehrbaani aapki uupar waale ne chaha to phir mulaqaat hogi shukriya maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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17th March 2007, 09:45 AM
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23rd March 2007, 06:31 AM
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akelijaan sb/sba aadaab tasleem daad sar-aaNkhoN par. aapne ash'aar pasaNd farmaaye haiN unke liye shukriya qabuul kijiye rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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23rd March 2007, 06:38 AM
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haaN miyaaN kaafi waqt ho gaya tha kuch mehfil ki nazar kiye hue, ab kya kareiN bhai umr ho chali hai aapki daad dil se tasleem aur aap bhi tah-e-dil se shukriya qabuul farmaaiye rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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23rd March 2007, 06:41 AM
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dhaval bhai namaste kaafi de'r baad haazir hua huuN, muaafi chahta huuN bhai, aapko Ghazal kisi qaabil lagi mere liye khushi ki baat hai aapne aksar mujhe duaa'oN meiN yaad rakha hai, ek she'r khaaskar aapke liye likha hai, mula'izaa kijiye : karam itna sa bas zaraa kiije aakhiri saaNs ho, duaa kiije  rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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23rd March 2007, 10:58 AM
Maikash ji,
bahut pasanD aayi aapki yeh gazal. regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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24th March 2007, 11:03 AM
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SSA Paras muaaf kijiyega aapke khat ka jawaab dene meiN 'bohat' de'r ho gayi, pichhle dinoN kuch haalaat zaraa be'kaa'buu se the , mazrat shukriya to jee mujhe aapka adaa karna chahioye, Ghazal pasaNd farmaane ke liye shukriya tasleem kareiN aapne jo Qamar saahab ka kalaam yaad dilaya hai voh mujhe behadd pasaNd hai, kuch saal pehle taq mere paas sabri brothers ki ek audio cassette hua karti thi jismeiN ye Ghazal bhi thi phir yuuN hua ke Ghar badalte waqt kahiiN kho gayi aur pichhle 4 saal se maiN ye Ghazal dhooNd raha huuN ba-har-haal aapne hamesha ki tarah mujh naalaayiq ka hauNsla badhaaya, behadd shukurguzaar huuN aapka rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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3rd April 2007, 09:50 PM
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Sat Sri Akaal janaab tusi vi hamesha waaNg hauNsla-afza'ii keeti hai, dhannvaad tuhadi daad sir-matthe rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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5th April 2007, 06:59 PM
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Maikash saahaab, aadaab..... kaise haiN aap? ummeed hai ba-Khairiyat hoNge... aap kii ess Ghazal par nazar to meri usii din paR gayee thee jabv aap ne bazm meiN pesh kiya tha... par waqt kii maara maari aise rahii kii itminaan se aap kii Ghazal ka lutf na le sakaa, aur ess ke liye meiN sharmShaar huuN.. Chaliye ek ittefaaq kii baat bataata huuN, aap kii yeh Ghazal post hone se kuchh din pahle meiN television ke kisii urdu channel dekh raha tha.. aur wahaaN par mushaira chal raha tha.. mushaiara meiN sab apni apni Ghazal suna rahe the.. aur meiN un ka lutf le raha tha.. aur ess mushaira meiN mujhe 2 Ghazal behad pasand aaye.. maiN ne sochaa kii kyoN na ess zameen ham bhi khast kaari kar leN, Shaayad achchhii paidawaar haath lage..  par jaise hii programme khatam huaa, Ghazal to yaad rahii nahiiN sirf raadiif aur qaafiya yaad rah gaye.,. ittefaaq kii baat hai kii ek ka raadiif thaa 'dhire dhire' aur qaafiya thaa "nazar, khabar etc.. aur duusra ka raadiif tha 'socha na thaa' qaafiye yaad nahiiN aa raha.. aur maiN ne socha kii in dono zameen par kuchh likhuuN. maiN ne ek zameen par Ghazal puuri kar lii thii,duusri ess liye nahiiN kar paaya kii zameen kuchh mushkil sii thee aur waqt kii maara maara bhii thaa... socha kii fursat meiN likhuNga, kii duusre zameen par aap kii likhi huiii Ghazal saamne aa gayee.. aur paRh kar dil baagh baagh ho gaya... aur mooh se nikal "jiyoo maikash miyaaN, kya khuub Ghazal kahii hai"Huzuur, aap hosh meiN nahiiN reh kar itni achchhi Ghazal kah sakte haiN to hosh meiN hoNge to kya kahne... sabhii Sher la-jawaab haiN, pasand aaye..Bohat khuub ghazal kahii hai, kyaa baat hai huzuur... yuuN hii likhate raheN.. ek 2 KauRi ka Sher meiN bhii arz kiye deta huuN,, mita do naam ulfat ka jahaaN se yaaroN, kiya hai ab talak aabaad ess ne kis ko ? Mayank |
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10th April 2007, 12:43 PM
bahut khoob maiksh ji..........aapki shayri ki koi misaal nahi....har sher dil par asar karta jata hai dheerey dheerey....!
.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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7th May 2007, 07:06 AM
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Merul saheb namaste aur SSA pehle to daad ke liye shukriya qabuul kijiye, mujhe khushi hai ke aapko ye haqeer se ash'aar pasaNd aaye haiN aur aapne jo ash'aar nazr kiye haiN unke liye alag se shukriya tasleem farmaayeN bohat shukriya maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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Manu saheb namaste haaN bhai kaafi de'r ke baad aana hua lekin agle kuch din maiN bazm meiN roz shirkat karne ki koshish karuNga, kya pata phir mauqa mile na mile aapko padh kar maza aaya to mujhe yeh sun kar bhi maza aaya, bohat shukriya ab miyaaN phooloN ka maiN kya karuNga ? , yeh to ahl-e-husn ke kaam ki chiiz hai maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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7th May 2007, 07:10 AM
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aarya jee Ghazal pasaNd farmaane ka bohat shukriya maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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7th May 2007, 07:50 AM
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aadaab chhoTe miyaaN de'r se jawaab dene ke liye muaaf kar dijiyega pehle to aapse shikayat yeh hai ke aap gaayab rehte haiN aur duusre aapse darkhuvaast yeh hai aane waale kuch roz agar aap mehfil meiN ba'qaayda shirkat kareiN to mujhe bohat khushi hogi aur aapka ehsaanmaNd bhi rahuNga chaliye ab aapke jawaab-e-khat ki baari : sabse pehli baat, aapne jo do misre ataa kiye haiN miyaaN kaleja noch ke le gaye, dil se keh raha huuN yeh baat, do misroN meiN mohabbat ka falsafaa bayaan kar diya, kya kehne, jeete raho bhai! aapne jo wa'qyaa bayaan kiya hai use'y padhan behadd dilchasp raha, ab maiN bhi aapko ek dilchasp qissa bataata huuN, mere saath aksar yeh hota hai ke maiN beh'r aur zamiin kuch aur iNtekhaab karta huuN aur natijaa uske ae'n ulaT nikalta hai, ab isi zamiin ki baat leN to bohat din se mere zahan meiN radiif "haula haule" aur "chupke chupke" dastak de raha tha, bohat baar kohshish bhi ki lekin hosh meiN to miyaaN mujhse dhaNg se baat bhi nahiiN hoti Ghazal to bohat pare'y ki baat hai ab aap baadaakashoN ki tabiyat se waaqif hoNge to itna zaroor jaante hoNge ke hum log sochte kuch haiN,kehte kuch haiN aur karte kuch aur haiN to bhai dhalte-dhalte "haule haule" se "dheere dheere" kab hue pata hi nahiiN chala duusri buri aadat meri yeh hai ke agar ek hi baithak meiN Ghazal ke teen se zyada she'r raqm na kar luuN to use'y raddii ki Tokarii ke hawaale kar deta huuN, bayaan aur alfaaz ko parakhne meiN jo waqt darkaar hoti hai vo majbuuran hosh meiN ki kharch karna padta hai ba-har-haal, yeh bhi khoob rahi aapne Ghazal pasaNd farmaayi, shukriya bhi qabuul farmaaiye aate raha kijiye miyaaN rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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Sunita jee namaste aur SSA aap jaise dostoN ki inayat hai jo itni izzat baKhste'y haiN shukriya qabuul kijiye rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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7th May 2007, 01:17 PM
sukhriya maikash ji
esehi likhte rahe aapka dost Merul Quote:
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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8th May 2007, 11:41 AM
badlii hai unki nazar dheere dheere
ubhre haiN zakhm-e-jigar dheere dheere bichaR'te gaye humsafar dheere dheere mushkil huii rehguzar dheere dheere Waaah...kya baat khi hai huzoor... guzaari hai yuuN ziNdagi bin tumhaare goyaa piyaa ho zahar dheere dheere zaroorat ho jab hosh khone ki yaaro karti hai mai kyoN asar dheere dheere ? Waaaahhhh... taara koi TooT'ta dekh ke hum royaa kiye raat bhar dheere dheere kahaa tha ummiidoN se bach ke guzarna kahaa tha dil-e-muz'tar*, dheere dheere Waaaah bahut khooobbb... vo aaye haiN khaaboN meiN muddat ke baad ae shab rafta rafta, guzar dheere dheere "maikash" abhi to, uThaa hai janaazaa pahuNchegi un taq khabar dheere dheere Uff... khoob aashaar hain.... Dearest Maikash bhai, Ek bahut hi umda ghazal pesh ki hai aapne is baar bhi...Har sher ke saath munh se waah hi niklati hai... meri waah kubool kijiyega... apna khayal rakhiye Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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huzuur maiN kahaaN gaayab rehta huuN, maiN to aata hii rehta huuN.. haaN biich meiN zaruur kuchh din masruufiyat ke chalte nahiiN aa saka.. lekin aap to.. aate hii nahiiN hai... maasaaalaah eid ke chaand haiN bilkul aur jab aate haiN to lagta hai kii aaj eid ka chaand aaj haazir hai mehfil meiN waise aap ne farmaaya hai kii aane waale kuchh din mehfil meiN ba-qaayeda sirkat karta rahuuN, to huzuur yehi kahuuNga aap ka hukm sar aaNkhoN par.. lekiN gustaakhi muaaf kyaa aane waale din kuchh khaas hone waale haiN?Quote:
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aap ka chupke-chupke se haule-haule aur haule-haule se dhire dhire ka safar bhii khuub hai.. par ek baat yehi kahuuNga bhaai, ki jab tak ham sharaab to pii rahe haiN tab tak to Theek hai, lekin jab Sharaab ham ko peene kii Shuruaat karta hai to sab duShwaar ho jaata hai.. Quote:
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9th May 2007, 01:16 AM
bahut asardar aur sundar aur ehsaas bhara likha hai apne
sakhi ki daad kubul kare sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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19th September 2007, 06:47 PM
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ek baar phir se shukriya tasleem kijiye rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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19th September 2007, 06:50 PM
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namaste sabse pehle to bhai maiN apni bad'tamiizii ke liye sharmiNdaa huuN aur muaafi ka talabgaar huuN ke itni de'r baad aapke khat ka jawaab de raha huuN duusre badhaaii qabuul kijiye, moderators banaaye jaane par, bohat jald maiN aapko aapki pehli assignment bhejne waala huuN , tai'yaar rahiyega Ghazal pasaNd farmaane ke liye shukriya alag se qabuul kareiN rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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19th September 2007, 07:09 PM
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aapki daad sar-aaNkhoN par bohat shukriya maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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19th September 2007, 07:33 PM
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20th September 2007, 02:32 PM
Dear Maikash bhai,
Aapki assignment ka intezaar rahega... lekin agar mushkil assignment den to usse pehl tarining meterial bhi bhej dijiyega... yun hi mehfil sajaate rahiye... aap hi se yahaan raunak hai... khayal rakhiyega apna...Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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.. aapne mujhe itni izzat bakhshi hai us ke liye aap ka sa-raa-paa mamuun huu.nQuote:
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21st September 2007, 04:06 AM
namaskaar maikash ji
janab, maaf kijiye, bahut dher baar padha yeh kalaam aapka. isliye dheri se pahuncha yahan. janab, bahut hi umda likha hai. shuruwat to bahut hi jabardast ki hai aapne. aur ehsaas bi ache pesh kiye hain. daad hajir hai janab, kabul kijiye. khush rahein aur yuhin likte rahein aapka dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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23rd September 2007, 08:12 AM
kahaa tha ummiidoN se bach ke guzarna
kahaa tha dil-e-muz'tar*, dheere dheere vo aaye haiN khaaboN meiN muddat ke baad ae shab rafta rafta, guzar dheere dheere Maikash sahab adaab arz hei Hazur phir zehmat de rahe hein apko apni tehreer se Login kiya itifaq se apki ye dono ghazaliyaat nigah se guzreen Nigaah se to guzar gayeen magar dil mein utar gayeen Ye dono ashaar janae kitni baar parh chuke Ji he nahi bharta Hur baar jab jab in ashaar ko parha , eik naye zaaviye se inko ruh pe naqsh banate paya Bauahat taqatvar hei sahab apka qalam Rab iski hifazat kare Daad haazir hei eik haqeer see qaree ki jaanib se Gur qabul kijiye ga to izatafzayee hogee MahamAzmi |
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