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Lightbulb Waqt ki chaal se bekhabar ho gaye eik ghazal - 13th December 2010, 08:12 AM

WAQT KI CHAAL SE BEKHABAR HO GAYE



Waqt ki chaal se bekhabar ho gaye
raat din umar ke youN basar ho gaye

roshni se ulajh is kadar maiN gayaa
aNdhere mere hamsafar ho gaye

maNzil to khaRi Thi mere saamne
magar raaste darguzar ho gaye

kaarvaN se pataa pooChta maiN rahaa
gardo.gubaar meri nazar ho gaye

"ASHK" jannat gar nahiN yeh zamiN
kisliye chaaNd taare shajar ho gaye

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basar- pass away, darguzar- ignore, kaarvaN- group of travelleres
gardo.gubaar- dirt and dust, jannat- heaven, shajar-trees
   
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WAQT KI CHAAL SE BEKHABAR HO GAYE



Waqt ki chaal se bekhabar ho gaye
raat din umar ke youN basar ho gaye

roshni se ulajh is kadar maiN gayaa
aNdhere mere hamsafar ho gaye

maNzil to khaRi Thi mere saamne
magar raaste darguzar ho gaye

kaarvaN se pataa pooChta maiN rahaa
gardo.gubaar meri nazar ho gaye

"ASHK" jannat gar nahiN yeh zamiN
kisliye chaaNd taare shajar ho gaye

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Good One ....... Ashk Ji !!!!!!!!!




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Smile Waqt ki chaal se bekhabr ho gaye - 1st March 2011, 09:32 AM

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Good One ....... Ashk Ji !!!!!!!!!
Naresh Ji

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HARDEV ASHK
   
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WAQT KI CHAAL SE BEKHABAR HO GAYE



Waqt ki chaal se bekhabar ho gaye
raat din umar ke youN basar ho gaye

roshni se ulajh is kadar maiN gayaa
aNdhere mere hamsafar ho gaye

maNzil to khaRi Thi mere saamne
magar raaste darguzar ho gaye

kaarvaN se pataa pooChta maiN rahaa
gardo.gubaar meri nazar ho gaye

"ASHK" jannat gar nahiN yeh zamiN
kisliye chaaNd taare shajar ho gaye

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basar- pass away, darguzar- ignore, kaarvaN- group of travelleres
gardo.gubaar- dirt and dust, jannat- heaven, shajar-trees


bahut khoobsurat....................keep writing.


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

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....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
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