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Arrow Kya sarokaar ab kisi se mujhe.... [a ghazal for life] - 31st August 2006, 10:42 PM
Kya sarokaar ab kisi se mujhe
waasta tha to tha tujhi se mujhe

behisi ka bhi ab nahin ehsaas
kya hua teri berukhi se mujhe

maut ki aarzoo bhi kar dekhun
kya ummeedein thi zindagi se mujhe

tera gham bhi na ho to kya jeena
kuch tasalli hai dard hi se mujhe

kar gaye kis qadar tabaah Zia'
dushman andaaz e dosti se mujhe...

na jiski shakl hai koi, na jiska naam hai koi - ek aisi shae ka kyun hamein azal se intezaar hai...
   
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wah bohat zabardast likha hai parrh ker laga aap waqai dard ashna hain bohat acha likha hai yunhin likhtay rahain poori ghazal hi bohat achi hai
   
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1st September 2006, 12:19 AM
bahut acha likha aapne zia ji,bahut khoob.yeh do ashaar bahut ache lage,


maut ki aarzoo bhi kar dekhun
kya ummeedein thi zindagi se mujhe

kar gaye kis qadar tabaah Zia'
dushman andaaz e dosti se mujhe

likhte rahiye.

yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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Re: Kya sarokaar ab kisi se mujhe.... [a ghazal for life] - 1st September 2006, 12:55 AM
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Kya sarokaar ab kisi se mujhe
waasta tha to tha tujhi se mujhe

behisi ka bhi ab nahin ehsaas
kya hua teri berukhi se mujhe

maut ki aarzoo bhi kar dekhun
kya ummeedein thi zindagi se mujhe

tera gham bhi na ho to kya jeena
kuch tasalli hai dard hi se mujhe

kar gaye kis qadar tabaah Zia'
dushman andaaz e dosti se mujhe...

Aashna ji namaste,
har ek sher ko dhyaan se ek baar aap fir padhe...ki jo aapne likha hai woh itna pyara...or dard milakar likha hai ki bus dil ko chhoo gaya.... pehli baar padha apko.... achcha likhte ho aise hi likhe...


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6th September 2006, 03:50 PM
Salaam to Alll.....

Shukriya Dosto....

aaj lagta hai Dard bhi achcha lagta hai ... aur kyun na ho! PURE jo hai.... ... ek yahi cheez hai jiska koi tabai wajood hai hi nahin magar sabse se zyada.....

shukriya mere post kiye huye " DARD " ko sarahne ka...

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28th January 2009, 03:18 PM
Phir Kisi Par Na Aitbaar Aaye
Yun Utaaro Na Apne Jee Se Mujhe....

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28th January 2009, 07:55 PM
bahut Accha Likha Hai Aapne Zia Ji......yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.....,

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28th January 2009, 10:15 PM
Yaar ek baat to bataiye..

Aap Rehan hain, Aashna hain ya Zia?? Kuch samajh nahin aaya..

Beherhaal, behetreen peshkash. Keep it up

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8th September 2009, 11:17 AM
PHIR KISI PAR NA AITBAR AAYE
YUN UTAARO NA APNE JI SE MUJHE

Amit Widhani ji
AADAB,
main Rehan hun aur ye ghazal Zia Jalandhari ji ki hai.. jo sab se pehle main ne Abida parveen ji ki awaz mein suni (ho sake to kahin se talash kake zaroor sunein)
aik sher reh gaya tha wo ab add kar diya

PHIR KISI PAR NA AITBAR AAYE
YUN UTAARO NA APNE JI SE MUJHE

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8th September 2009, 12:47 PM
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Yaar ek baat to bataiye..

Aap Rehan hain, Aashna hain ya Zia?? Kuch samajh nahin aaya..

Beherhaal, behetreen peshkash. Keep it up

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This ghazal is written by famous poet "Zia Jalandhari"....

Rehan sb, yeh acha hota agar aap ghazal ke aakhir mein
poet ka naam bhi likh dete.....

*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
   
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