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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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*~*?? WhY iN lOvE ??*~* -
30th March 2006, 07:07 PM
The lover is back wid all his love.for u all.bas doston ek baar fir pesh hai ishq me dooba ek aur ghayal kalaam isi umeed ke saath ki aap sabhi ko ye pasand aayega..........
to pesh-e-khidmat hai ek aur GHAYAL kalaam..........
Why do in love,
Hearts break,
Why it seems dat,
All ur love was fake……………
My love was thee,
With u I wanted 2 b,
Why u broke my heart?
Why u did this with me………….
What I had done wrong?
Why our love waas not long?
Why u have torn the page?
Containing my life’s song……………
To say no why u had felt shy?
When we always passed by,
But now u have got courage,
To say me gud bye……………
I had thought u 2 b mine,
U were my forever valentine,
Than why did u leave me?
When I was far from fine…………..
When u never loved me,
Why u always came to see me,
How cud I believe dat,
Who murdered my love,was she………..
I had always loved u,
I cud always see through,
But 2 some1 who loved her so much,
How this she cud do…………
I don’t know why?
She has left me shattered llike this.
At least she cud have,
Granted me a kiss…………..
Why do in love,
Hearts break,
Why it seems dat,
All ur love was fake……………
Last edited by Taish; 30th March 2006 at 07:09 PM..
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EK CHAMAKTA HUA SITARA
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Re: *~*?? WhY iN lOvE ??*~* -
31st March 2006, 07:59 AM
Very Nice
Ghayal ji aapki english ki ghayal poem bohat khoob rahi
likhte rahiye
Apka
Diggaj
Quote:
Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
The lover is back wid all his love.for u all.bas doston ek baar fir pesh hai ishq me dooba ek aur ghayal kalaam isi umeed ke saath ki aap sabhi ko ye pasand aayega..........
to pesh-e-khidmat hai ek aur GHAYAL kalaam..........
Why do in love,
Hearts break,
Why it seems dat,
All ur love was fake……………
My love was thee,
With u I wanted 2 b,
Why u broke my heart?
Why u did this with me………….
What I had done wrong?
Why our love waas not long?
Why u have torn the page?
Containing my life’s song……………
To say no why u had felt shy?
When we always passed by,
But now u have got courage,
To say me gud bye……………
I had thought u 2 b mine,
U were my forever valentine,
Than why did u leave me?
When I was far from fine…………..
When u never loved me,
Why u always came to see me,
How cud I believe dat,
Who murdered my love,was she………..
I had always loved u,
I cud always see through,
But 2 some1 who loved her so much,
How this she cud do…………
I don’t know why?
She has left me shattered llike this.
At least she cud have,
Granted me a kiss…………..
Why do in love,
Hearts break,
Why it seems dat,
All ur love was fake……………
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Navard-e-ishq mein kya hua kya bataye hum
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha
Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne
K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj"
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31st March 2006, 08:30 AM
lucky achha likha hai why all ur love seems fake
hmm english mai bhi gud ji
likhte raho aur aate raho
love
shrdh
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31st March 2006, 10:11 AM
bahut acche lucky bhai bahut gehrai main likh dala hai pasand aaya yuhi likhte raho........................
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31st March 2006, 03:22 PM
Ghayal ji its very good bahut hi accha likha hai aap ne
I like it very much
lagey raho........@
Bobby Rawat
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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Re: Re: *~*?? WhY iN lOvE ??*~* -
31st March 2006, 06:12 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by Diggaj_Dave
Very Nice
Ghayal ji aapki english ki ghayal poem bohat khoob rahi
likhte rahiye
Apka
Diggaj
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thanks a lot bhaiya aapko meri posm pasand aayi humari khush naseebi.bas aap yunhi padhte rahiye hume.
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1st April 2006, 05:27 PM
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Originally posted by shrdh
lucky achha likha hai why all ur love seems fake
hmm english mai bhi gud ji
likhte raho aur aate raho
love
shrdh
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dd jaan kar behad khushi hui mujhe ki aapko humara ye kalaam pasand aaya.umeed hai ki aap aage bhi bas yunhi aati rahengi is ghayal ki mehfil me.
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2nd April 2006, 05:07 PM
haaye....isiliye to main kehti hu ki pyar karna hi nahi chahiye!!
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2nd April 2006, 06:26 PM
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bahut acche lucky bhai bahut gehrai main likh dala hai pasand aaya yuhi likhte raho........................
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meet ji jaan kar khushi hui hume ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya umeed hai ki aap aage bhi bas yunhi hume padhte rahiyega.
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4th April 2006, 04:19 PM
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Ghayal ji its very good bahut hi accha likha hai aap ne
I like it very much
lagey raho........@
Bobby Rawat
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thanks a lot bobby sahab.loved to kno dat u liked it.just keep reading the same way.
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4th April 2006, 04:20 PM
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5th April 2006, 01:23 AM
gayal ji
maine aapki pehli english poetry padhi hai
and it is simply awesome ..
keep writing like this
and keep sharing with us
bye TC
Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)
*(`'·.¸(`'·.¸*¤*¸.·'´)¸.·'´)*
.....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»......
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5th April 2006, 06:46 PM
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Originally posted by cute_ashu
gayal ji
maine aapki pehli english poetry padhi hai
and it is simply awesome ..
keep writing like this
and keep sharing with us
bye TC
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ashu ji aapko ye poetry pasand aayi,hume is baat ki dili khushi hai.umeed hai aap aage bhi yunhi padhte rahiyega hume.
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6th April 2006, 07:55 AM
well, ab main kya bolu?? acha suno yaar, lets bunk it. matlab ki itne heavy-heavy aur gehre topic par baat kya karna jiska kisi ko koi idea hi nahi ho!!?? just b urself!!
yaar, mujhse to at least itni bhaari topic ke baare mein discuss mat karo-main is maamle mein bacchi hu!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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7th April 2006, 12:27 AM
Lil Bro ..
Having so many answer in mah hands.. but also know .. u know everything .. just try to retrive bete ..
Urs bro
Kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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11th April 2006, 07:23 PM
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Originally posted by sacccha_pyar
Lil Bro ..
Having so many answer in mah hands.. but also know .. u know everything .. just try to retrive bete ..
Urs bro
Kunal
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big b thanks a lot.n yups i kno everything but u kno na this heart.......... doesnt accepts nething dats wat.kee reading bro.
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