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'Where Were You...?' -
24th April 2006, 12:41 AM
After " Don't They Know...? " , Here I am again with a new poem entitled..." Where Were You...? "
I am sorry for my so many posts today...,but I had been rebuked for my scarce presence on site...! So do not blame me...ok ?  Where you were..., when all of a sudden my certainty of being loved has collapsed … Where you were..., when in the silent darkness howls of pain were tearing my heart… Where you were..., when I could not make it and Time, unfair, was flowing so slowly… Where you were..., when I tried not to think of you and the first thought that accompanied the rising sun was for you… Where you were...? Simply…you were not anywhere because I was not anything anymore for you... Now you ask for my forgiveness and I have already forgiven you… because a love that rises again from a great pain has the right to another possibility…  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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24th April 2006, 12:53 AM
very nice...
keep on writin take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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24th April 2006, 01:09 AM
Amanspeare,
this creation....has really left me thinking.... wow...where were you.....hmmmmm fabulous keep writing take care p.s. u can post 8465751587 more posts today, and it will juss make me happier! »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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24th April 2006, 01:11 AM
well good that some angel rebuked u
 ...and we are abke ti see a master at work,.... Keep writin danny bhai... as iur heart says yeh dil mange more! tc Rohin |
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27th April 2006, 05:06 AM
Hello Mushkilji
kaise hia aap? bhoate hi aacha likha hai aap ne aure sach bhi very true. but onlly that person can understand more about this words and impotant of this words who has been there. very nice job. love it Mushkan |
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27th April 2006, 07:28 AM
hmmmm......gr8 mukhraji, bt did u report it to the police tht ur love was missing?? u must hav done, so by now, u would hav found him!! go hasty, dnt wait, wht if he is kidnapped???
 ??anyways, take care |
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27th April 2006, 10:51 AM
ufffffffff... this touched the heart deep.... this seemed so close... loved it bhaiya....
nobody is gonna be contemptuous of yours posting so many... we love it... abut if u again go missing thenn...Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th April 2006, 10:54 PM
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mukhraji nahi....mushkil ji bolein aap...hehe, yeh unhone ne likha hai...not me...lol»~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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28th April 2006, 12:34 AM
Originally posted by Mukhra
mukhraji nahi....mushkil ji bolein aap...hehe, yeh unhone ne likha hai...not me...lol Koyi baat nahin...Mukhra Ji ! Virtual Dad likha ya Pyaari si Beti...ek hi baat hai na ? Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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28th April 2006, 12:40 AM
Originally posted by karthik
very nice... keep on writin take care Thanks for liking...Karthik ! Keep encouraging...! Aur galtiyan bhi bataa diya karna...ok ? Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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28th April 2006, 12:42 AM
Originally posted by Mukhra
Amanspeare, this creation....has really left me thinking.... wow...where were you.....hmmmmm fabulous keep writing take care p.s. u can post 8465751587 more posts today, and it will juss make me happier! Ok...Naughty Girl ! I will try to post one daily...Ok ? With blessing...! Amanspeare Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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29th April 2006, 06:36 AM
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Re: 'Where Were You...?' -
29th April 2006, 02:23 PM
dear friend,
fantastic... an amazing feelings. very true. I like reading you... take care & keep writting. Have a nice day. |
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1st May 2006, 01:00 AM
Originally posted by Rohin
well good that some angel rebuked u ...and we are abke ti see a master at work,.... Keep writin danny bhai... as iur heart says yeh dil mange more! tc Rohin The show must go on...hai na, Rohin Bhai ? Take care you too...ok ? Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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Sorry for the delay in replying...! -
18th May 2006, 02:30 AM
Originally posted by Mushkan
Hello Mushkilji kaise hia aap? bhoate hi aacha likha hai aap ne aure sach bhi very true. but onlly that person can understand more about this words and impotant of this words who has been there. very nice job. love it Mushkan Hello Mushkan ji...! Hum thik hein aur aap keissi hein ? Thanks for reading and loving it...! Do keep coming Mushkil Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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Sorry for the delay in replying...:) |
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18th May 2006, 02:33 AM
Originally posted by adarshgirl
hmmmm......gr8 mukhraji, bt did u report it to the police tht ur love was missing?? u must hav done, so by now, u would hav found him!! go hasty, dnt wait, wht if he is kidnapped??? ??anyways, take care Take care you too...ok ? Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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18th May 2006, 02:35 AM
Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
ufffffffff... this touched the heart deep.... this seemed so close... loved it bhaiya.... nobody is gonna be contemptuous of yours posting so many... we love it... abut if u again go missing thenn... Saath dete hi rehna, Chote Bhaiya...! With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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Sorry for the delay in replying...! |
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18th May 2006, 02:39 AM
Originally posted by adarshgirl
myshkil ji, acha likha hai. Shukriya, ji ! Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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Re: Re: 'Where Were You...?' -
18th May 2006, 02:41 AM
Originally posted by Parul
dear friend, fantastic... an amazing feelings. very true. I like reading you... take care & keep writting. Have a nice day. Thanks for the nice compliments...Dear friend ! Take care you too...! Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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