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22nd November 2006, 04:58 PM
humne tumse pyar kiya,, sangini bana tujhe sweekaar kiya,, tujhe yaad karne ke siwa,, aur kuch na maine, eh yaar kiya,, sochte the ki kitni khoobsurat wo mulakaat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi,, na jaane kitne aadhe adhure ehsash honge,, pehli baar hum itne paas honge,, sochte hain kitni khoobsurat wo mulaakat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi...!
os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN,
husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN,
andhere me pighalna seher ka,
aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...!
*gum hoti,, putting off of lights...!
uff! jaare ka ye mausam,
aur unke kurbat* ki garmi,
meri baahon me unka hona,
aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!
*nikat.ta,, nearness...!
do badanoN ka lipatnaa,
ek choti si razaaai me...
aata hai ek alag hi mazaa,
pyar ki is angdaai me...
angdaai me,
ek choti si razaaai me...!
fir hui wahi praatah* bela,
kisi ka darwaaza khatkhatana,
uthana jaldi baazi me,
aur fir halka sharmana...!
*subah ka samay,, morning time...!
fir ek intezaar,
kaliyon ke sharmane ka...
machalna unhe dekh ke,
afsosh choo v na paane ka...!
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22nd November 2006, 06:55 PM
Lucky Ji
bahaut khoob likha hai aapne, parhkar bahaut accha laga.
"os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN / husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN / andhere me pighalna seher ka / aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...! "
vipin
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23rd November 2006, 10:31 AM
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Lucky Ji
bahaut khoob likha hai aapne, parhkar bahaut accha laga.
"os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN / husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN / andhere me pighalna seher ka / aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...! "
vipin
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vipin bhaiya bahut dino baad aana hua aapka is nacheez ki mehfil me aur jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko ye kalaam pasand aaya humara, guzarish bas yahi rahegi ki aap aage v hume yunhi padhte rahen...!
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28th November 2006, 04:29 PM
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Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar
humne tumse pyar kiya,, sangini bana tujhe sweekaar kiya,, tujhe yaad karne ke siwa,, aur kuch na maine, eh yaar kiya,, sochte the ki kitni khoobsurat wo mulakaat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi,, na jaane kitne aadhe adhure ehsash honge,, pehli baar hum itne paas honge,, sochte hain kitni khoobsurat wo mulaakat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi...!
os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN,
husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN,
andhere me pighalna seher ka,
aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...!
*gum hoti,, putting off of lights...!
uff! jaare ka ye mausam,
aur unke kurbat* ki garmi,
meri baahon me unka hona,
aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!
*nikat.ta,, nearness...!
do badanoN ka lipatnaa,
ek choti si razaaai me...
aata hai ek alag hi mazaa,
pyar ki is angdaai me...
angdaai me,
ek choti si razaaai me...!
fir hui wahi praatah* bela,
kisi ka darwaaza khatkhatana,
uthana jaldi baazi me,
aur fir halka sharmana...!
*subah ka samay,, morning time...!
fir ek intezaar,
kaliyon ke sharmane ka...
machalna unhe dekh ke,
afsosh choo v na paane ka...!
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arey ghayal aap dard ke ilawa romantic poetry bhi likhtay hain herat hoi jaaan ker kher likhi achi hai keep writing wesay bhi insaan ko sirf dard hi nahi likhna chahiye zindagi ke aur bohat pehlu hotay hain aesay hi likhte rahiye
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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29th November 2006, 04:43 PM
are ise kahaan se utha diya aapne, maan gaye aapko, itne peeche se is kalaam ko dhoondh nikala aapne, khushi hui jaan kar ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya, bas guzarish yahi rahegi ki aap aage v hume yunhi padhti rahiyega aur apni nek rai se hume nawaazte rahiyega...!
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17th April 2009, 04:08 PM
Haaaayee kyaaaa baaaat hai....
Mujhe to . . . . . . .
Kuch kehte ni ban raha....
Aapki poem padh kar gussa b aa raha hai aur pyaar b. . .
Thanks 4 sharing Lucky ji . . . .
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18th May 2009, 08:56 PM
shukriya janaab jaan kar ahcha laga ki aapko humara likha pasand aaya, bas yunh padhne ki jehmiyaten uthaati raheN aap...!!
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19th May 2009, 05:42 PM
aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!
very beautiful yaaar
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19th May 2009, 08:06 PM
Ghayal jee aur Romantic shayari
pahli bar sach main hairaN ho gayi hu main
to janab aapki next ghazal hume Isha forum per milna chahiye
its a request
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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22nd May 2009, 12:06 PM
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aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!
very beautiful yaaar
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thanks for reading bhai...........!!
Aapka Ghayal
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24th May 2009, 07:46 PM
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Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar
humne tumse pyar kiya,, sangini bana tujhe sweekaar kiya,, tujhe yaad karne ke siwa,, aur kuch na maine, eh yaar kiya,, sochte the ki kitni khoobsurat wo mulakaat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi,, na jaane kitne aadhe adhure ehsash honge,, pehli baar hum itne paas honge,, sochte hain kitni khoobsurat wo mulaakat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi...!
os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN,
husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN,
andhere me pighalna seher ka,
aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...!
*gum hoti,, putting off of lights...!
uff! jaare ka ye mausam,
aur unke kurbat* ki garmi,
meri baahon me unka hona,
aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!
*nikat.ta,, nearness...!
do badanoN ka lipatnaa,
ek choti si razaaai me...
aata hai ek alag hi mazaa,
pyar ki is angdaai me...
angdaai me,
ek choti si razaaai me...!
fir hui wahi praatah* bela,
kisi ka darwaaza khatkhatana,
uthana jaldi baazi me,
aur fir halka sharmana...!
*subah ka samay,, morning time...!
fir ek intezaar,
kaliyon ke sharmane ka...
machalna unhe dekh ke,
afsosh choo v na paane ka...!
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Lucky ji
aapki suhaagraat rachna ko maine abhi abhi padha...issme aapne us pal ki tamaam gudgudahat ka jis khubsurti se tana bana buna hai....sachmuch mai Qabile taarif hai...
bahut khubsurat baangi hai aapki........
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pata nahi tujh pe meri
kis baat ka asar hone wala hai
koi raaz aaj teri zubaa se
phir khulne wala hai.....
---naresh mehra--
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toooo much romantic -
24th May 2009, 09:50 PM
hmmmmmmm.........................lucky bhai hamare paas lafz nahi haiN kya kaheN aapko
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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4th August 2009, 09:58 AM
bas bina ishq aakhir dard kaise ho diya ji...!! bas likh gaye, waise aapko pasand aayi ye jaan kar khushi hui mujhe...!! bas umeed karta huN ki aap aage v hume yuNhi padhti raheNgi...!!
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4th August 2009, 11:07 PM
hehehehehehe...menu te billi de khaab yaad dila ditte ne tussi...
vekhde rawo ji kaab ...vesy v kon rok sakda ey kissay nu...:P
ik gal zaroor ey...likhya tussi barday kamal da ey ji...
likhde rawo...cha hi jao ge ik na ik din...:P
khush rawo abaad rawo..
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13th October 2009, 05:16 PM
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shukriya janaab jaan kar ahcha laga ki aapko humara likha pasand aaya, bas yunh padhne ki jehmiyaten uthaati raheN aap...!!
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aapse yeh ummeed na thi / 'janaab' 'uthaati' dono words ek saath, ek he shaks k liye
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31st October 2009, 07:52 AM
suhaag raat padhi. acha bayan hai. thanks for sharing.
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9th November 2009, 02:57 AM
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humne tumse pyar kiya,, sangini bana tujhe sweekaar kiya,, tujhe yaad karne ke siwa,, aur kuch na maine, eh yaar kiya,, sochte the ki kitni khoobsurat wo mulakaat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi,, na jaane kitne aadhe adhure ehsash honge,, pehli baar hum itne paas honge,, sochte hain kitni khoobsurat wo mulaakat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi...!
os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN,
husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN,
andhere me pighalna seher ka,
aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...!
*gum hoti,, putting off of lights...!
uff! jaare ka ye mausam,
aur unke kurbat* ki garmi,
meri baahon me unka hona,
aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!
*nikat.ta,, nearness...!
do badanoN ka lipatnaa,
ek choti si razaaai me...
aata hai ek alag hi mazaa,
pyar ki is angdaai me...
angdaai me,
ek choti si razaaai me...!
fir hui wahi praatah* bela,
kisi ka darwaaza khatkhatana,
uthana jaldi baazi me,
aur fir halka sharmana...!
*subah ka samay,, morning time...!
fir ek intezaar,
kaliyon ke sharmane ka...
machalna unhe dekh ke,
afsosh choo v na paane ka...!
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pehli baar aapka likha shayad kuch padha ...samajh nahi aata ki kya kahu..socha na kahu..kehna sahi nahi hai pr bin keh reh nahii paai...bas itna kahungi ki bahut khoob surat khayal tha apka jab aapne ise likha hoga ...bahut khoob....ghayal ji ......ghayal sher jaaga gaya hai kya...hahha
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10th November 2009, 01:36 PM
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Lucky ji
aapki suhaagraat rachna ko maine abhi abhi padha...issme aapne us pal ki tamaam gudgudahat ka jis khubsurti se tana bana buna hai....sachmuch mai Qabile taarif hai...
bahut khubsurat baangi hai aapki........
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pata nahi tujh pe meri
kis baat ka asar hone wala hai
koi raaz aaj teri zubaa se
phir khulne wala hai.....
---naresh mehra--
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naresh bhai shukriyah, is adni si kavita ko itni haisiyat dene ke liye, umeed karta hun ki aage v aapse yunhi mukhatib hote rahunga...!!
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10th November 2009, 01:37 PM
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hmmmmmmm.........................lucky bhai hamare paas lafz nahi haiN kya kaheN aapko
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ab dd aapko to ***** de rahki hai kuch v kehne ki, uske baad aapko confusion kyun hai bhala...?? waise aapko pasand aayi bas hume is bat ki tassalli hai....!!
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10th November 2009, 01:39 PM
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suhaag raat padhi. acha bayan hai. thanks for sharing.
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ankita ji tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya, umeed karta hun ki aage v aapse mukhatib hone ka mauka milta rahega...!!
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10th November 2009, 01:41 PM
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pehli baar aapka likha shayad kuch padha ...samajh nahi aata ki kya kahu..socha na kahu..kehna sahi nahi hai pr bin keh reh nahii paai...bas itna kahungi ki bahut khoob surat khayal tha apka jab aapne ise likha hoga ...bahut khoob....ghayal ji ......ghayal sher jaaga gaya hai kya...hahha
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Tanu ji ko ghayal ka salaam,
ab agar kuch padhne ke baad dil me jo khayal aaye vo v na kahiyega to fir likhne vaale ka kya faayedda, aur aisa kuch v nahin hota jo aap keh na saken, bas andaaz-e-bayaan me thodi tafdeeli karni padti hai. umeed karta huN ye pehli baar aaakhiri baar nahin hoga aur hum aage v mukhatib hote raheNge...!!
Aapka GHAYAL...!!
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