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Toota khwaab... - 26th April 2016, 11:02 AM

Bheega hua sama tha aur taza gulab tha.
Thi aarzoo kisi ki ya toota vo khwaab tha.

Halki si dhoop aur kahiin thodi si chaanv bhi
kudrat hee jane uska ye kaisa hisaab tha.

Us surkh haseen phool ki akhir khata thi kya.
toda gaya use hee kyun na kuch jawaab tha.

gam aur khushi me khushbuyei.n badle na gul kabhi
Insaa.n badal raha yahaa.n har pal nakaab tha.

Barish ki boond sa zamee.n pe jo baras gaya
Har shai me ghul raha tha vo kaisa azaab tha.

..madhu..



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26th April 2016, 12:09 PM

Bohat hi shaandaar ghazal hui hai madhu sahiba

Pur-sukoon kalaam

Daad qubool farmaye
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Bohat hi shaandaar ghazal hui hai madhu sahiba

Pur-sukoon kalaam

Daad qubool farmaye
Khush rahe aur aabaad rahiye
aapi daad ki shukraguzaar hun mujahid sahab..

aage bhi sath ki umeed karti hun

apna khayaal rakhein..

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7th May 2016, 04:26 PM

Mashallah Madhu JI.....

waise to har sher khoobsurat hai par ek sher ne mera dil chura liya hai..

Halki si dhoop aur kahiin thodi si chaanv bhi
kudrat hee jane uska ye kaisa hisaab tha.

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nice sharing madhu ji....................
behad shukriya saba ji...

salamat rahein......



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Bheega hua sama tha aur taza gulab tha.
Thi aarzoo kisi ki ya toota vo khwaab tha.

Halki si dhoop aur kahiin thodi si chaanv bhi
kudrat hee jane uska ye kaisa hisaab tha.

Us surkh haseen phool ki akhir khata thi kya.
toda gaya use hee kyun na kuch jawaab tha.

gam aur khushi me khushbuyei.n badle na gul kabhi
Insaa.n badal raha yahaa.n har pal nakaab tha.

Barish ki boond sa zamee.n pe jo baras gaya
Har shai me ghul raha tha vo kaisa azaab tha.

..madhu..
Umdaa flow, ehsaas se pur-sukoon is ghazal par khaaksaar ki daad qubool farmaiyeGaa



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Love 13th May 2016, 02:18 PM

Sach me bahut hi khubsurat...dil tak pahunche ehsaas aapke madhu ji


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15th May 2016, 09:54 PM

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Mashallah Madhu JI.....

waise to har sher khoobsurat hai par ek sher ne mera dil chura liya hai..

Halki si dhoop aur kahiin thodi si chaanv bhi
kudrat hee jane uska ye kaisa hisaab tha.

bahot khoob...
behad shukriya purvi ji.........

Aap yun hee sath deti rahiyega....

Salamat rahein..



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Umdaa flow, ehsaas se pur-sukoon is ghazal par khaaksaar ki daad qubool farmaiyeGaa
Aapki daad sar ankhon par.............

Shukriya ..........



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Sach me bahut hi khubsurat...dil tak pahunche ehsaas aapke madhu ji
Shukriya akshra ji......

Aati rahiyega......



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Madhu jii bahut hi khas lafzo ka tana Nina he
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Bahut hi khoob ....... Aate rahe


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Bahut hi khoob ....... Aate rahe


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khushi huyi apko pasand aaya..

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Bheega hua sama tha aur taza gulab tha.
Thi aarzoo kisi ki ya toota vo khwaab tha.

Halki si dhoop aur kahiin thodi si chaanv bhi
kudrat hee jane uska ye kaisa hisaab tha.

Us surkh haseen phool ki akhir khata thi kya.
toda gaya use hee kyun na kuch jawaab tha.

gam aur khushi me khushbuyei.n badle na gul kabhi
Insaa.n badal raha yahaa.n har pal nakaab tha.

Barish ki boond sa zamee.n pe jo baras gaya
Har shai me ghul raha tha vo kaisa azaab tha.

..madhu..


waahh madhu saahibaa......

behad khoobsurat panktiyon se sajeee huii ghazal hai ye aapki....... na jaane ab tak kaise aankhon se door rahi.... magar aaj padhaa to dil baag baag ho gayaa.....

aati rahen, likhtii rahen... khush rahen, salaamat rahen

Shaad...........


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waahh madhu saahibaa......

behad khoobsurat panktiyon se sajeee huii ghazal hai ye aapki....... na jaane ab tak kaise aankhon se door rahi.... magar aaj padhaa to dil baag baag ho gayaa.....

aati rahen, likhtii rahen... khush rahen, salaamat rahen

Shaad...........
Shukriya shaad sahab.....aapki di gayi tasweer par hee likhi gayi thi....khushi huyi apko pasand aayi....

Aate rahiyega

Duaon ka shukriya..

Khush rahein...



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wah...Bohut badhiya khayaal ...ek aur umdha Ghazal...mubarak ho Madhu Saheba.

eh sher bohut hi khoobsurti se aapne kaha hai...maza agaya.

Halki si dhoop aur kahiin thodi si chaanv bhi
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wah...Bohut badhiya khayaal ...ek aur umdha Ghazal...mubarak ho Madhu Saheba.

eh sher bohut hi khoobsurti se aapne kaha hai...maza agaya.

Halki si dhoop aur kahiin thodi si chaanv bhi
kudrat hee jane uska ye kaisa hisaab tha.

bilkul factual hai....qudrat hi monitor karti hai dhoop aur chaanv.

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Bahot bahot shukriya mujeeb ji ..doston ka sath aur hausla afzai aage bhi likhne ka hausla deta hai....aate rahiyega....

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