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गिरना बुरा नहीं होता ग़र गिर के संभल सको - 2nd December 2017, 07:51 PM

गिरना बुरा नहीं होता ग़र गिर के संभल सको
रुकना भी लाज़मी है जो फिर से चल सको l
GIRNA BURA NAHIN HOTA GAR GIR KE SAMBHAL SKO
ROOKNA BHI LAZMI HAI JO FIR SE CHAL SKO

लेती है ज़िन्दगी भी यूँ करवटें कई बार
उधड़े हुए पलों को जो फिर से सिल सको l
LETI HAI ZINDAGI BHI YUN KARVATEN KAYI BAAR
UDHRE HUYE PALON KO JO FIR SE SIL SKO

गहरा कितना भी हो समंदर, लहरों को डर नहीं
साहिल भी कह रहा है चलो जो चल सको l
GEHRA KITNA BHI HO SAMANDAR, LAHRON KO DAR NAHIN
SAHIL BHI KEH RHA HAI CHALO JO CHAL SKO

चमन तुम्हें बहार के जाने का ग़म है क्यूँ
खिज़ा भी तो आती है जो तुम फिर से खिल सको l
CHAMAN TUMHE BHAAR KE JAANE KA GHAM HAI KYUN
KHIZAN BHI TO AATI HAI JO TUM FIR SE KHIL SKO

राहें जुदा होने से भी ‘यश’ फासले नहीं होते
मिल जाऊंगा फिर किसी मोड़ पर जो तुम भी मिल सको l
RAHEN ZUDA HONE SE BHI ‘YASH’ FAASLE NAHIN HOTE
MIL JAUNGA FIR KISI MOD PAR JO TUM BHI MIL SKO

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5th December 2017, 02:00 PM

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गिरना बुरा नहीं होता ग़र गिर के संभल सको
रुकना भी लाज़मी है जो फिर से चल सको l
GIRNA BURA NAHIN HOTA GAR GIR KE SAMBHAL SKO
ROOKNA BHI LAZMI HAI JO FIR SE CHAL SKO

लेती है ज़िन्दगी भी यूँ करवटें कई बार
उधड़े हुए पलों को जो फिर से सिल सको l
LETI HAI ZINDAGI BHI YUN KARVATEN KAYI BAAR
UDHRE HUYE PALON KO JO FIR SE SIL SKO

गहरा कितना भी हो समंदर, लहरों को डर नहीं
साहिल भी कह रहा है चलो जो चल सको l
GEHRA KITNA BHI HO SAMANDAR, LAHRON KO DAR NAHIN
SAHIL BHI KEH RHA HAI CHALO JO CHAL SKO

चमन तुम्हें बहार के जाने का ग़म है क्यूँ
खिज़ा भी तो आती है जो तुम फिर से खिल सको l
CHAMAN TUMHE BHAAR KE JAANE KA GHAM HAI KYUN
KHIZAN BHI TO AATI HAI JO TUM FIR SE KHIL SKO

राहें जुदा होने से भी ‘यश’ फासले नहीं होते
मिल जाऊंगा फिर किसी मोड़ पर जो तुम भी मिल सको l
RAHEN ZUDA HONE SE BHI ‘YASH’ FAASLE NAHIN HOTE
MIL JAUNGA FIR KISI MOD PAR JO TUM BHI MIL SKO

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Dear Kabir ji,
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