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Aru ji muhabbat ho ya Dushmani......ek sunder aagaaz ho to anjaam bhi achha hone ki umeed band jaai hai....aapka ye peskarda kalaam bahut hi khoobsoorati se apne anjaam tak pahooNchaya hai aapne....


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ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,.....................bahut hi oomda ..waah...merii jaanib se dhairoN daad qabool farmaaiyega....


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bahut badhiyaaa.. likha hia sahab..
thanks abhi jee....aapka saath yun he bana rahe.........bahut bahut shukriya..



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One of the best of urs aru ji. .
Ek to khoobsurat rachna au uspe aapki behtareen soch. ...
Aapki positivity isme aur bhi jaan daal rahi hai...
Itni Achhi kavita ke liye dheron badhaiyaan..ummeed hai jald hi aapki koi nayi
Peshkash padne ko milegi...
Madhu jee...bahut bahut shukriya aapka....aapne muje pada air samjha uske liye aapka aabhaar.....



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Thanx a lot mujib jee....aapka sneh yun hee bana rahe.....



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bahut khoob rahi Aru jee aapki yeh rachna
daad kubul farmaayen
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duaon ke saath

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Dear aru ji,

aapki ghazal bahut hi beshkimati hai... bahut achchha likha hai aapne.. ese dobara aap jarur padhiyega .. aap ese kanch se heera bana denge.. mujhe ummid hai..

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Aru bhai.....etni positive soch jis ensaan ke paas hai wo kabhi bhi kisi bhi jagah par maat nahi kha sakta, muje aapka yeh attitude behad pasand aaya...aur aapki aik aik baat dil ko chu gye...bahut hiiiiiiiumda likha hai aapne...aapki es postive soch ko hamara salaam.

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aapki ghazal bahut hi beshkimati hai... bahut achchha likha hai aapne.. ese dobara aap jarur padhiyega .. aap ese kanch se heera bana denge.. mujhe ummid hai..

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Thanx a lot akant jee।..........yun hee hausla badate rahiye....



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टूटे हुए ख्वाबों से ज़िन्दगी बना लेता हूँ
मैं कांच के टुकड़ों से आइना बना लेता हूँ


फेंकते हैं लोग जो पत्थर मुझपे
मैं सबको जोड़कर मूरत बना लेता हूँ

राह-ऐ-मंजिल में ही कितनी भी मुश्किलें
मैं जब ठानता हूँ रास्ता बना लेता हूं

रात के अँधेरे में भटकता नहीं मैं
हर सितारे को अपना चाँद बना लेता हूँ

न पूछो मुझसे मेरी सेहत का राज
मैं हर दर्द को दवा बना लेता हूँ

वो इतराते हैं अपनी हाथ की लकीरों पे
मैं मेहनत से अपनी तक़दीर बना लेता हूँ

मेरे रेत के महल देख के हंसने वालों
मैं इरादों को फौलाद बना लेता हूँ

आते नहीं जो बुरे वक़्त पे काम मेरे
मैं ऐसे दोस्तों को गुज़रा हुआ वक़्त बना लेता हूँ

आसमाँ में चाँद को तकता नहीं मैं
आगे हाथ बड़ा के अपना बना लेता हूँ

मिलता नहीं जब मंदिरो मस्जिद में वो
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मंज़िल पे पहुँच के रुकता नहीं मैं
एक नए सूरज को अपना मुकाम बना लेता हूँ

जीवन में हो मेरे कितना भी अँधेरा
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अपनों से करता नहीं कोई गिला शिकवा
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दौलत शौहरत के पीछे भागता नहीं
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उम्मीद का दामन कभी छोड़ता नहीं 'अरु'
एक दीपक से दीवाली बना लेता हूँ



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w!aaaaaaaaaaah bahut khub
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Arvind Bhai,,,,,



Itne saare comments aur likes ke baad, mujh adna se shayer ki DAAD koi Maayene nahi rakhti, phir bhi ye zaroor kahunga ki ... aapki ghazal me ek JOSH hai , aage badhne ka, isme honsla hai, ummeed hai,
lekin NIRASHAA nahi...
aur yeh kaafi acchi cheez hai,,,,,,

bas wo KHUDA waala sher thoda Na-Gawaar guzra mujhe.
sorry agar bura laga ho to...


baaki,, ghazal me har ek ash-aar par DAAD hai meri...

likhte rahiye.

God bless you...


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Arvind Bhai,,,,,



Itne saare comments aur likes ke baad, mujh adna se shayer ki DAAD koi Maayene nahi rakhti, phir bhi ye zaroor kahunga ki ... aapki ghazal me ek JOSH hai , aage badhne ka, isme honsla hai, ummeed hai,
lekin NIRASHAA nahi...
aur yeh kaafi acchi cheez hai,,,,,,

bas wo KHUDA waala sher thoda Na-Gawaar guzra mujhe.
sorry agar bura laga ho to...


baaki,, ghazal me har ek ash-aar par DAAD hai meri...

likhte rahiye.

God bless you...
Bahut bahut shukriya kabir bhai....aapki daad sar aankhon pe.....aur aapko kya pasand nahin aaya.....plz bataiyega.



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