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Smile A GOOD NEWS...."murda jee utha" - 24th May 2004, 01:18 AM

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kal ek news thi ki U.P mein ek murda chita pe jee utha,,socha is per hi kuch likha jaye...!!!!! waise ye aksar hota hai,,kabhi kabhi..!
kuch taqneeqi pehloo aur lafzon ke barey mein na sochker bus,,sirf... enjoy kijiye...

"murda jee utha" kal ek khabar ayi akhbaar mein
seham gaye sare sathi,jo aye akhiri sanskar mein

jor se chillaya wo uthker "nahi jalao abhi mujhe"
baki hai kuch kaam adhoorey jo lauta hoon sansaar mein

sawalon se bhari nigahey,batey kerti ek dooje se
"Sarkar Badalne"se usool bhi badley Khuda ke darbaar mein?

akhir poocha ek bandey nekaisa mehsoos hota yara?
hanske bola"jinda-murda" "jaise Mantri Ban Gaya Sarkar Mein"

hum bhi lagey sochney ki kaisi kismat isne payi?
ur gaya tha jo parinda bikega phir bazar mein

duniya ki gehri chalon se to azadi behtar thi
jahan na thi bandish koi aur na tha dhokha pyar mein

khane hongey aur tamachey abhi badkismat hathon se
isliye sona"jee utha murda"jo aya ghar-baar mein

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Re: A GOOD NEWS...."murda jee utha" - 24th May 2004, 10:37 AM

jor se chillaya wo uthker "nahi jalao abhi mujhe"
baki hai kuch kaam adhoorey jo lauta hoon sansaar mein

sawalon se bhari nigahey,batey kerti ek dooje se
"Sarkar Badalne"se usool bhi badley Khuda ke darbaar mein?

hum bhi lagey sochney ki kaisi kismat isne payi?
ur gaya tha jo parinda bikega phir bazar mein

duniya ki gehri chalon se to azadi behtar thi
jahan na thi bandish koi aur na tha dhokha pyar mein




swati ji
aapke hunar se to mein bakhubi wakif hoon,,,magar aajkal jo ek nai baat aapki shayri mein dekhne ko mil rahi hai wo kabhi pehle kisi ki bhi shayri mein mehsoos nahin ki,,,,kuch ghatnayon ko dekhne ka aapka najariya sabse mukhtalif hai,,,,chahe wo siyasat ho ,,shaadi ke ghar se uthti arthi ho,,ya phir yeh ghatna,,,,,jis khubsurati se aapne is ghatna ko jamane ki kadwi haqeeqat ka jama pehna kar shayri ki alfazon se sajaya hai wo bejode hai,,meine itni khubsurat aur alahida kisam ki shayari ab tak shayad nahin padhi hai.....sachai ka aaina dikhati hai aapki har rachna,,,,isiliye dil mein sada sada ke liye mehfoooz ho jati hai....aapke khayalon aur jazbaaton ko mein salaam karta hoon....yun to yeh sari gazal hi behtreen hai,,,parantu antim char sher to bas dil mein teer ki tarah utrre hai.....hamari daad kubool kijiye....sada yun hi likhte rahiye.......apna kahal rakhiye...sada khush rahiye..
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