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uske kisi bhi ayeb ka charcha nahin kiya - 8th October 2017, 10:34 AM

uske kisi bhi ayeb ka charcha nahin kiya
hum ne wafa ke waste jhagda nahin kiya

Koi bhi ghair qanuni dhanda nahin kiya
Daman ko main ne paap se ganda nahin kiya

aansu bana ke pii gaya uske mazaaq ko
ghusse men aake koi bhi lafda nain kiya

Uska hamesha saath nibhaya khusi khusi
Usse kisi madad ka taqaaza nahin kiya

us ne inaam dene ki khwahish batai thi
Hum ne magar lene ka iradha nahin kiya

Jo kaam us ne mujh ko dia shouq se kiya
Fursat nahin hai aisa bahana nahin kiya

Phir intezaar aap ne mera kiya huzoor
Kya baat hai ke aap ne ghussa nahin kiya

Dekha banake kaanch ke tukdon se aayina
Chehra magar chupana gawarah nahin kiya

Haq baat karne ko nahin Parwaaz darta tha
Jab bhi use mouqa mila zaya nahin kiya


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8th October 2017, 11:37 AM

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uske kisi bhi ayeb ka charcha nahin kiya
hum ne wafa ke waste jhagda nahin kiya

Koi bhi ghair qanuni dhanda nahin kiya
Daman ko main ne paap se ganda nahin kiya

aansu bana ke pii gaya uske mazaaq ko
ghusse men aake koi bhi lafda nain kiya

Uska hamesha saath nibhaya khusi khusi
Usse kisi madad ka taqazah nahin kiya

us ne inaam dene ki khwahish batai thi
Hum ne magar lene ka iradha nahin kiya

Jo kaam us ne mujh ko dia shouq se kiya
Fursat nahin hai aisa bahana nahin kiya

Phir intezaar aap ne mera kiya huzoor
Kya baat hai ke aap ne ghussa nahin kiya

Dekha banake kaanch ke tukdon se aayina
Chehra magar chupana gawarah nahin kiya

Haq baat karne ko nahin Parwaaz darta tha
Jab bhi use mouqa mila zaya nahin kiya


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Addab Madhu Saheba,

Bas mast hun malik ka karam hai.
Aap kaisi hain
kuch kaam men masroof tha is liye ...hazir nahin hua

Aap ki sarahana ka bohut bohut shukriya

Shabd taqaaza hai....taqazah nahin...spelling mistake.
   
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uske kisi bhi ayeb ka charcha nahin kiya
hum ne wafa ke waste jhagda nahin kiya

Koi bhi ghair qanuni dhanda nahin kiya
Daman ko main ne paap se ganda nahin kiya

aansu bana ke pii gaya uske mazaaq ko
ghusse men aake koi bhi lafda nain kiya

Uska hamesha saath nibhaya khusi khusi
Usse kisi madad ka taqazah nahin kiya

us ne inaam dene ki khwahish batai thi
Hum ne magar lene ka iradha nahin kiya

Jo kaam us ne mujh ko dia shouq se kiya
Fursat nahin hai aisa bahana nahin kiya

Phir intezaar aap ne mera kiya huzoor
Kya baat hai ke aap ne ghussa nahin kiya

Dekha banake kaanch ke tukdon se aayina
Chehra magar chupana gawarah nahin kiya

Haq baat karne ko nahin Parwaaz darta tha
Jab bhi use mouqa mila zaya nahin kiya


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Addab Madhu Saheba,

Bas mast hun malik ka karam hai.
Aap kaisi hain
kuch kaam men masroof tha is liye ...hazir nahin hua

Aap ki sarahana ka bohut bohut shukriya

Shabd taqaaza hai....taqazah nahin...spelling mistake.
Main bhi bahot badhiya jenaab....chaliye masroofiyat se thoda thoda vaqt nikaal Kar aate raha kariye...achcha lagta Hai...

Lafz edit kar Diya Hai.....🙂



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uske kisi bhi ayeb ka charcha nahin kiya
hum ne wafa ke waste jhagda nahin kiya

Koi bhi ghair qanuni dhanda nahin kiya
Daman ko main ne paap se ganda nahin kiya

aansu bana ke pii gaya uske mazaaq ko
ghusse men aake koi bhi lafda nain kiya

Uska hamesha saath nibhaya khusi khusi
Usse kisi madad ka taqaaza nahin kiya

us ne inaam dene ki khwahish batai thi
Hum ne magar lene ka iradha nahin kiya

Jo kaam us ne mujh ko dia shouq se kiya
Fursat nahin hai aisa bahana nahin kiya

Phir intezaar aap ne mera kiya huzoor
Kya baat hai ke aap ne ghussa nahin kiya

Dekha banake kaanch ke tukdon se aayina
Chehra magar chupana gawarah nahin kiya

Haq baat karne ko nahin Parwaaz darta tha
Jab bhi use mouqa mila zaya nahin kiya


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