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वो जो टूटा था इक तारा था मेरा दिल तो नहीं - 14th December 2017, 06:49 PM


वो जो टूटा था इक तारा था मेरा दिल तो नहीं
कितने सितम मुझपे किये, मेरा दिल था वो संगदिल तो नहीं

Wo Jo Toota Tha Ek Tara Tha Mera Dil To Nahin
Kitne Sitam Mujhpe Kiye, Mera Dil Tha Wo Sangdil To Nahin

ये मौत तो इक दिन आनी है और ज़िन्दगी रूक जानी है
फिर डर है क्यूं किस बात से, बेखौफ बन बुज़दिल तो नहीं

Yeh Mout To Ek Din Aani Hai Aur Zindagi Rook Jaani Hai
Fir Dar Hai Kyoon Kis Baat Se, Bekhouf Ban Buzdil To Nahin

गिरते भी गए उठते भी गए और यूँ ही हम चलते ही गए
जो मिला नज़र का धोखा था फरेब था मंजिल तो नहीं

Girte Bhi Gaye Uthte Bhi Gaye Aur Yun Hi Hum Chalte Hi Gaye
Jo Mila Nazar Ka Dhokha Tha Fareb Tha Manzil To Nahin

ये वफा भी ‘यश’ अज़ीब होती है हरदिल अज़ीज़ नहीं होती है
मेरे दिल तेरी रज़ा है क्या, इस वफा का तू कातिल तो नहीं

Yeh Wafa Bhi “Yash” Azeeb Hoti Hai Hardil Aziz Nahin Hoti Hai
Mere Dil Teri Rza Hai Kya, Iss Wafa Ka Tu Katil To Nahin


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Acchha likha hai aapne..keep it up..



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naayaab khoobsurat alfaazon se baandha hai aapne is khoobsurat si ghazal ko.........

daad peshe khidmat hain, qubool kijiye

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