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kya haseen woh mod tha - 18th February 2015, 11:38 PM

kya haseen woh mod tha
woh guzar gayi mein thehar gaya

deta hai dastak kaun is dil par
woh wasl-o-hijr* tha kidhar gaya

rok lo aaj na jaane do unko
woh saahilon se tha darr gaya

mukhtalif sa nazar aata hai sab kuch
main hujoom* mein tha mar gaya

muntazir aankhen tajassus* bhari hai
main jo poochta tha woh kidhar gaya

Wasl = union
hijr = separation
Hujoom = crowd
tajassus = curiosity


क्या हसीं वो मोड़ था
वो गुज़र गयी में ठहर गया

देता है दस्तक कौन इस दिल पर
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क्या हसीं वो मोड़ था
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Waahhh waah...mast jee bahut khoob..



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देता है दस्तक कौन इस दिल पर
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kya baat hai Anu bhai...... jitni tareef karun kam hai.. kyaa peshkash hai, kya andaaz hai aur kyaa lafzon ka taana baana hai.... bahot khoob mere bhai..... ek guzaarish hai ke is ghazal me ek matlaa add kijiye.... main is khoobsurat ghazal me rattii bhar bhii aeb nahi dekhnaa chahtaa.... ummeed hai aap mujhe mayoos nahi karenge.....

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kya haseen woh mod tha
woh guzar gayi mein thehar gaya

deta hai dastak kaun is dil par
woh wasl-o-hijr* tha kidhar gaya

rok lo aaj na jaane do unko
woh saahilon se tha darr gaya

mukhtalif sa nazar aata hai sab kuch
main hujoom* mein tha mar gaya

muntazir aankhen tajassus* bhari hai
main jo poochta tha woh kidhar gaya

Wasl = union
hijr = separation
Hujoom = crowd
tajassus = curiosity


क्या हसीं वो मोड़ था
वो गुज़र गयी में ठहर गया

देता है दस्तक कौन इस दिल पर
वो वस्ल-ओ-हिज्र था किधर गया

रोक लो आज ना जाने दो उनको
वो साहिलों से था डर गया

मुख्तलिफ सा नज़र आता है सब कुछ
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मुन्तज़िर आँखें तजस्सुस भरी है
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Kya baat hai bhai, bahut khoobsurati se ehsaas piroye hain... Mazaa aa gaya padhke...

Mujhe doosre sher ka saar samjhaiye "Woh wasl-o-hijr thha kidhar gaya"... Iska saar poori tarah se mere samajh nahin aaya... Aap samjhayenge to aur mazaa aayega...

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kya haseen woh mod tha
woh guzar gayi mein thehar gaya

deta hai dastak kaun is dil par
woh wasl-o-hijr* tha kidhar gaya

rok lo aaj na jaane do unko
woh saahilon se tha darr gaya

mukhtalif sa nazar aata hai sab kuch
main hujoom* mein tha mar gaya

muntazir aankhen tajassus* bhari hai
main jo poochta tha woh kidhar gaya

Wasl = union
hijr = separation
Hujoom = crowd
tajassus = curiosity


क्या हसीं वो मोड़ था
वो गुज़र गयी में ठहर गया

देता है दस्तक कौन इस दिल पर
वो वस्ल-ओ-हिज्र था किधर गया

रोक लो आज ना जाने दो उनको
वो साहिलों से था डर गया

मुख्तलिफ सा नज़र आता है सब कुछ
मैं हुजूम में था मर गया

मुन्तज़िर आँखें तजस्सुस भरी है
मैं जो पूछता था वो किधर गया

Mast saahab, waqai bohot haseen mod lagta hai.
Aapki yeh peshkash badi dilfareb lagi.
Daad qubool farmaayein.


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Waahhh waah...mast jee bahut khoob..
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देता है दस्तक कौन इस दिल पर
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kya baat hai Anu bhai...... jitni tareef karun kam hai.. kyaa peshkash hai, kya andaaz hai aur kyaa lafzon ka taana baana hai.... bahot khoob mere bhai..... ek guzaarish hai ke is ghazal me ek matlaa add kijiye.... main is khoobsurat ghazal me rattii bhar bhii aeb nahi dekhnaa chahtaa.... ummeed hai aap mujhe mayoos nahi karenge.....

Dil se duaa hai ke aap salaamat rahen, khush rahen, aur accha accha likhte rahen.....

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Janaab aapki baat sar aankhon par nacheez ne koshish ki hai batayeigaa ki munaasib hai ki nahiN, matlaa aur maqtaa dono jode hai, aapki salaah ka hameshaa talabgaar..

justjuu mere yaar ki khwaabida sa jo guzar gaya
adaa teri masoom thi be sabab tha main bikhar gaya

kya haseen woh mod tha
woh guzar gayi mein thehar gaya

deta hai dastak kaun is dil par
woh wasl-o-hijr* tha kidhar gaya

rok lo aaj na jaane do unko
woh saahilon se tha darr gaya

mukhtalif sa nazar aata hai sab kuch
main hujoom* mein tha mar gaya

muntazir aankhen tajassus* bhari hai
main jo poochta tha woh kidhar gaya

'mast' dil mein ab to sukoon hai
kisi ka naseeb to sanwar gaya



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Janaab aapki baat sar aankhon par nacheez ne koshish ki hai batayeigaa ki munaasib hai ki nahiN, matlaa aur maqtaa dono jode hai, aapki salaah ka hameshaa talabgaar..

justjuu mere yaar ki khwaabida sa jo guzar gaya
adaa teri masoom thi be sabab tha main bikhar gaya

kya haseen woh mod tha
woh guzar gayi mein thehar gaya

deta hai dastak kaun is dil par
woh wasl-o-hijr* tha kidhar gaya

rok lo aaj na jaane do unko
woh saahilon se tha darr gaya

mukhtalif sa nazar aata hai sab kuch
main hujoom* mein tha mar gaya

muntazir aankhen tajassus* bhari hai
main jo poochta tha woh kidhar gaya

'mast' dil mein ab to sukoon hai
kisi ka naseeb to sanwar gaya


bahot khoob mere bhai................... ise kahte hain Sone pe suhaaga.....
iss muqammal kalaam ke liye apako tahe dil se daad . maqta tokamaal ka hai......
likhte rahen.....


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23rd February 2015, 10:31 AM

muntazir aankhen tajassus* bhari hai
main jo poochta tha woh kidhar gaya

'mast' dil mein ab to sukoon hai
kisi ka naseeb to sanwar gaya


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah...
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Kya baat hai bhai, bahut khoobsurati se ehsaas piroye hain... Mazaa aa gaya padhke...

Mujhe doosre sher ka saar samjhaiye "Woh wasl-o-hijr thha kidhar gaya"... Iska saar poori tarah se mere samajh nahin aaya... Aap samjhayenge to aur mazaa aayega...

Likhte rahiye yun hi aur mehfil ki raunak badhate rahiye!!
Pulkit bhai aaj firse mehsoos hua ki kyun aapki Kami itni mehsoos hoti hai, arse baad kisi ne shayar ka mizaaz poocha hai ammuman log sirf daad dekar chale jaate hai.

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bahot khoob mere bhai................... ise kahte hain Sone pe suhaaga.....
iss muqammal kalaam ke liye apako tahe dil se daad . maqta tokamaal ka hai......
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'mast' dil mein ab to sukoon hai
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kia baat hy .. kia baat hy.. Mast bhai ..

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dil-fareeb o dil-nasheeN kalaam ke liye dherooN daad qabool kejiye!
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daad aur saath ka behad shukriYaa Janaab, aapki kami khal rahi hai site par jald hi apni koi ghazal pesh kariye, talabgaar



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kya baat hai Anu bhai ..Behad khusbsoorat kalam , her ek ashar apne aap meiN mukammal..Wah bhai Wah.

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