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12th March 2005, 11:31 PM
~~~Tanhaa~~~
hi frends, i m posting one of my nazms which is also a message to the society and the coming generations that love is much more higher than religion. i hope u all will like it, and do give me ur valuable suggestions........... here it is..... jantaa hoon main ki tumhe mujhse pyaar hai meri hi tarah tera dil bhi bekaraar hai darr hai tumhe is bedard zamaane ka ke kahin judaa na karde kahi tod na de in armaanon ko ye zamaana jo dharkanon ko nahi samajhtaa ye zamaana jiski nazron mein aansuon ki koi keemat nahi jo nahi jaanta ki pyaar kya hai muhobbat kya hai ishq kya hai khuda kya hai ibaadat kya hai jo sirf fareb aur dhoke ko maantaa hai jo sirf dharm aur mazhab ke naam par ladna jaanta hai pyaar karne waalon ko judaa karna jaanta hai lekin mujhe koi gham nahi aur tumse koi shikaayat bhi nahi kyuki main jaantaa hoon, ke hum mile to fir judaa na hua jaayega ek duje se bichharke fir raha na jaayega isse to achha hai ki hum apne armaanon ko seene mein hi dafn kar dein muhobbat ki shamma ko jalne se pehle hi bujhaa dein aur ek doosre ki khushiyon ki duaaein maangein aur upar waale se fariyaad karen ki is bedard zamaane ko bhi pyaar karna sikha taaki dil tootne ka ye silsila yahin khatam ho har taraf muhobbat hi muhobbat ho pyaar hi pyaar ho chaahat hi chaahat ho fir kisi pyaar karne waale ko dharm aur mazhab ke naam par apni muhobbat ka galaa na ghotna pade aur pyaar karne waalon ke beech koi dharm, koi rasm koi mazhab deewaar na bane..... ~~~Tanhaa~~~ . wo chubtey hai aur zakhm dete hai imaandaari se, phool to bewafa hotey hai...dhoka dete hai wafadaari se DARD KO BHI AB DARD HONE LAGA, DARD KHUD HI GAAV BARANE LAGA, DARD KE MAARE HUM NA ROYE KABHI, DARD HUM KO CHUKAR KHUD HI RONE LAGA.............. |
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13th March 2005, 12:06 AM
very very very very niceeee tanha jee really thanx for sharing us its really very nice
kyu kisi ke liye hum ansu bahate hai kyu humara dil tod ke koi khush hota hai kyu hume kisi ke jane se gum hota hai kyu ye pyarr hota hai shayad ye jawab tu khuda bhi na bata paye aakhir kyuuuuuuu unforgetable simran ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ pyarr karo,pyarr ki inteha dekho pyarr karo,pyarr ka intezaar karo. |
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thanx -
13th March 2005, 12:52 AM
~~~Tanhaa~~~
aapka reply padh kar achha laga.. ek sher aur hai jo is waqt zehen mein aa raha hai... humne maana ki tagaaful na karoge lekin, khaak ho jaayenge tumko khabar hone tak aapka dost ~~~Tanhaa~~~ . wo chubtey hai aur zakhm dete hai imaandaari se, phool to bewafa hotey hai...dhoka dete hai wafadaari se DARD KO BHI AB DARD HONE LAGA, DARD KHUD HI GAAV BARANE LAGA, DARD KE MAARE HUM NA ROYE KABHI, DARD HUM KO CHUKAR KHUD HI RONE LAGA.............. |
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13th March 2005, 05:46 PM
hi
wow!!! kya kahoon aapki tareef mein mere paas shabd nahi hain apne duniya ke dastoor ko badi khubi se bayan kiya hai bahut khoob sonal |
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