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Terii Yaado.n Se Ulajh Kar Dil Kaii Baar Girta Hai... - 20th May 2017, 01:52 PM

Terii yaado.n se ulajh kar dil, kaii baar girta hai....
Girta hai, Sambhalta hai, Sambhal kar phir se chalta hai...

Ye dil ke rasm-o-riwaaz, bade pechiide hai.n janaab....
Jannat ka raasta aksar dozakh se guzarta hai...

Huii muddat ke shor-o-gul se raabta na raha apna...
Ki dil bhi ab seene mei.n khaamosh dhadakta hai...

Is qadar abtar hai aashiyaan ulfat ke khwaabo.n ka...
Sametu.n jab bhi pehlu mei.n, mera aa.nchal sisakta hai....

Laazim tha ke maange duaaein hijr-e-yaar ki har roz...
Waakif the, visaal-e-yaar ki dua koii aur padhta hai...

Masarrat baksh ke Ghafil ko, kiya ghaflat kaatib ne...
Chalo aziiyat kubool kii humne, ki parwaah kaun karta hai??

Terii yaado.n se ulajh kar dil, har baar girta hai....
Girta hai, Sambhalta hai, Sambhal kar phir se chalta hai...


Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
   
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Terii yaado.n se ulajh kar dil, kaii baar girta hai....
Girta hai, Sambhalta hai, Sambhal kar phir se chalta hai...

Ye dil ke rasm-o-riwaaz, bade pechiide hai.n janaab....
Jannat ka raasta aksar dozakh se guzarta hai...

Huii muddat ke shor-o-gul se raabta na raha apna...
Ki dil bhi ab seene mei.n khaamosh dhadakta hai...

Is qadar abtar hai aashiyaan ulfat ke khwaabo.n ka...
Sametu.n jab bhi pehlu mei.n, mera aa.nchal sisakta hai....

Laazim tha ke maange duaaein hijr-e-yaar ki har roz...
Waakif the, visaal-e-yaar ki dua koii aur padhta hai...

Masarrat baksh ke Ghafil ko, kiya ghaflat kaatib ne...
Chalo aziiyat kubool kii humne, ki parwaah kaun karta hai??

Terii yaado.n se ulajh kar dil, har baar girta hai....
Girta hai, Sambhalta hai, Sambhal kar phir se chalta hai...


Jannat ka raasta aksar dozakh se guzarta hai...


kyaa khoob andaaze bayaan hai, waaahhhhhhhhhhhh

yoon to poori ghazal kamaal hai magar ye quoted sher lajawaab laga...

aati rahiye, likhti rahiye

Shaad............


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Terii yaado.n se ulajh kar dil, kaii baar girta hai....
Girta hai, Sambhalta hai, Sambhal kar phir se chalta hai...

Ye dil ke rasm-o-riwaaz, bade pechiide hai.n janaab....
Jannat ka raasta aksar dozakh se guzarta hai...

Huii muddat ke shor-o-gul se raabta na raha apna...
Ki dil bhi ab seene mei.n khaamosh dhadakta hai...

Is qadar abtar hai aashiyaan ulfat ke khwaabo.n ka...
Sametu.n jab bhi pehlu mei.n, mera aa.nchal sisakta hai....

Laazim tha ke maange duaaein hijr-e-yaar ki har roz...
Waakif the, visaal-e-yaar ki dua koii aur padhta hai...

Masarrat baksh ke Ghafil ko, kiya ghaflat kaatib ne...
Chalo aziiyat kubool kii humne, ki parwaah kaun karta hai??

Terii yaado.n se ulajh kar dil, har baar girta hai....
Girta hai, Sambhalta hai, Sambhal kar phir se chalta hai...
Ye dil ke rasm-o-riwaaz, bade pechiide hai.n janaab....
Jannat ka raasta aksar dozakh se guzarta hai...


Bahut hi Umdaa sher aur behad nayaab tareeke se pesh kiye hue khayaal hai is pur asar ghazal mein nacheez ki daad qubool farmiye aur likhte rahiyegaa



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Waahh!!!!Nisha ji.....bahot pasand aayi aapki ghazal ashaar dil chhoo Gaye....

Aati rahiyega



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