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Lightbulb जल गया मैं अलाव ऐसा था...!! - 17th January 2018, 12:37 PM

Bahut waqt baad ik ghazal nazm ke nazara raha hun...



जल गया मैं अलाव ऐसा था,
कल हवा का बहाव ऐसा था

अब मुझे मौत जल्द आयेगी,
दोस्तों का सुझाव ऐसा था

खुद को ही भूलने लगा था मैं,
ईश्क में इक पड़ाव ऐसा था

चलते-चलते बिछड़ गये दोनों,
रास्ते का घुमाव ऐसा था

टूटती तू थी, मैं बिखर जाता,
तेरा मेरा जुड़ाव ऐसा था

वफ़ा का नाम तक चुभे मुझको,
ईश्क का दिल में घाव ऐसा था



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25th January 2018, 07:41 PM

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Bahut waqt baad ik ghazal nazm ke nazara raha hun...



जल गया मैं अलाव ऐसा था,
कल हवा का बहाव ऐसा था

अब मुझे मौत जल्द आयेगी,
दोस्तों का सुझाव ऐसा था

खुद को ही भूलने लगा था मैं,
ईश्क में इक पड़ाव ऐसा था

चलते-चलते बिछड़ गये दोनों,
रास्ते का घुमाव ऐसा था

टूटती तू थी, मैं बिखर जाता,
तेरा मेरा जुड़ाव ऐसा था

वफ़ा का नाम तक चुभे मुझको,
ईश्क का दिल में घाव ऐसा था

ek tees si uthtii hai dil me jab jab naam teraa suntaa hoon.....

janaab taish saahab umdah khayaalon se saja huaa kalaam pesh kiyaa hai aapne , wahi ghayal shaayar waala andaaz kaafi waqt ke baad padhne ko milaa...

aate raha karen... aur likhte raha karen.....

Shukran...

Shaad........


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Bohot khoob....kya ehsaas bayan kiye hai.....waaah. daad kubul kijiyega
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Beshumaar daad Taish Sahab... Bahot hee umda kalaam..

Aaate rahiyega



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Bahut waqt baad ik ghazal nazm ke nazara raha hun...



जल गया मैं अलाव ऐसा था,
कल हवा का बहाव ऐसा था

अब मुझे मौत जल्द आयेगी,
दोस्तों का सुझाव ऐसा था

खुद को ही भूलने लगा था मैं,
ईश्क में इक पड़ाव ऐसा था

चलते-चलते बिछड़ गये दोनों,
रास्ते का घुमाव ऐसा था

टूटती तू थी, मैं बिखर जाता,
तेरा मेरा जुड़ाव ऐसा था

वफ़ा का नाम तक चुभे मुझको,
ईश्क का दिल में घाव ऐसा था
Bahut hi umda aur behadddd gehre ehsaas wahhhhh, kai dino baad sdc par aaye hu, aapko pad kar behaddd accha lga. aik aik sher dil ko andar tak mehsoos hua....

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janaab taish saahab umdah khayaalon se saja huaa kalaam pesh kiyaa hai aapne , wahi ghayal shaayar waala andaaz kaafi waqt ke baad padhne ko milaa...


Shaad........
Shaad bhai, aapki baat se sehmat hu main bhi, aaj Ghayal Shayar wala andaaz aik baar phir nazar aaya hai...!


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Par ghayal shaayar chale kahan jaate hain Ghazal post karke......

na daad lete hain na duaaen.... apni waah ham kispe luTaaen


muntazir rahungaa

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Bahut waqt baad ik ghazal nazm ke nazara raha hun...



जल गया मैं अलाव ऐसा था,
कल हवा का बहाव ऐसा था

अब मुझे मौत जल्द आयेगी,
दोस्तों का सुझाव ऐसा था

खुद को ही भूलने लगा था मैं,
ईश्क में इक पड़ाव ऐसा था

चलते-चलते बिछड़ गये दोनों,
रास्ते का घुमाव ऐसा था

टूटती तू थी, मैं बिखर जाता,
तेरा मेरा जुड़ाव ऐसा था

वफ़ा का नाम तक चुभे मुझको,
ईश्क का दिल में घाव ऐसा था
Umdaa ek se ek badhkar sher bhai mazaa aa gaya.......



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