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~~* us bewafaa ne mujh ko *~~ - 24th December 2017, 04:58 PM


main shaaKh se TooTaa huaa pattaa bhi nahiN thaa,
us bewafaa ne mujh ko jo dekhaa bhi nahiN thaa.

yaadoN ka terii main nashaa kartaa tha raat din,
naa jaagtaa tha aur main sotaa bhi nahiN thaa.

wo log aur hain jo tujhe dekhte hain jaaN,
apne naseeb me tiraa saaya bhi nahiN thaa.

dekhaa bhare bazaar me to Thahre ek pal,
phir muD ke yoon baDhe ke main sochaa bhi nahiN thaa.

barbaad hue ishq me, kuch husn ke peeche,
pahli mohabbatoN me kuch aataa bhi nahiN thaa.

jaa kah de naamabar usey ham kooch kar gaye,
jab tak thi jaaN , aye jaan tuu aaya bhi nahi thaa.

Qaasid bataa raha tha ke wo barbaad ho gayaa,
aur main samajh raha tha ke wo royaa bhi nahiN tha....


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bahaut samay baad aapko parhney ka awsar mila. Aapne shabdon ko kitnee khoobsurti se baandha hai Yeh dekhkar bahaut accha laga.
aapko parhna sukhad raha.


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Namaskaar Shaad ji
bahaut samay baad aapko parhney ka awsar mila. Aapne shabdon ko kitnee khoobsurti se baandha hai Yeh dekhkar bahaut accha laga.
aapko parhna sukhad raha.
namashkaar Vipin ji.....

aaj arse ke baad aapko apni bazm e maujood dekh kar jo khushi mili hai bata nahi saktaa....

aapke muhabbat bhare lahze ne dil ko behad khushi di hai... aapko ye channd alfaaz pasand aa gaye meri khushnaseebi hai...

aate raiyega... sath dete rahiyega...

aapka dost

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26th December 2017, 05:18 PM

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main shaaKh se TooTaa huaa pattaa bhi nahiN thaa,
us bewafaa ne mujh ko jo dekhaa bhi nahiN thaa.

yaadoN ka terii main nashaa kartaa tha raat din,
naa jaagtaa tha aur main sotaa bhi nahiN thaa.

wo log aur hain jo tujhe dekhte hain jaaN,
apne naseeb me tiraa saaya bhi nahiN thaa.

dekhaa bhare bazaar me to Thahre ek pal,
phir muD ke yoon baDhe ke main sochaa bhi nahiN thaa.

barbaad hue ishq me, kuch husn ke peeche,
pahli mohabbatoN me kuch aataa bhi nahiN thaa.

jaa kah de naamabar usey ham kooch kar gaye,
jab tak thi jaaN , aye jaan tuu aaya bhi nahi thaa.

Qaasid bataa raha tha ke wo barbaad ho gayaa,
aur main samajh raha tha ke wo royaa bhi nahiN tha....


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Kya baat bahot khoob shaad sahab....tamaam ashaar behad Khoobsurati se pesh kiye hai AAPne. Par matla khud me lajwaab Raha kya kahne...ishq aur Dard AAP hamesha hee apni ghazal me bakhoobhi se pirote hain umda hamesha ki tarah.....daad qubool kijiyega...

Likhte rahein shaad rahein ......
Dher sari duayein..
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Kya baat bahot khoob shaad sahab....tamaam ashaar behad Khoobsurati se pesh kiye hai AAPne. Par matla khud me lajwaab Raha kya kahne...ishq aur Dard AAP hamesha hee apni ghazal me bakhoobhi se pirote hain umda hamesha ki tarah.....daad qubool kijiyega...

Likhte rahein shaad rahein ......
Dher sari duayein..
Madhu
Madhu saahiba tak Shaad ka aadaab pahuche........

aapne is adna se kalaam ko pasand farmaaya aur apni keemti ray se nawaaza meri khushnaseebi hai...

aapne in alfaazon ko padha samjha aur saraaha mujhe behad khushi hui... aati rahiyega

aapke kalaam ka bhi muntazir hoon...... jaldi hi kuch likhen aur share Karen ham sab ke saath.....

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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main shaaKh se TooTaa huaa pattaa bhi nahiN thaa,
us bewafaa ne mujh ko jo dekhaa bhi nahiN thaa.

yaadoN ka terii main nashaa kartaa tha raat din,
naa jaagtaa tha aur main sotaa bhi nahiN thaa.

wo log aur hain jo tujhe dekhte hain jaaN,
apne naseeb me tiraa saaya bhi nahiN thaa.

dekhaa bhare bazaar me to Thahre ek pal,
phir muD ke yoon baDhe ke main sochaa bhi nahiN thaa.

barbaad hue ishq me, kuch husn ke peeche,
pahli mohabbatoN me kuch aataa bhi nahiN thaa.

jaa kah de naamabar usey ham kooch kar gaye,
jab tak thi jaaN , aye jaan tuu aaya bhi nahi thaa.

Qaasid bataa raha tha ke wo barbaad ho gayaa,
aur main samajh raha tha ke wo royaa bhi nahiN tha....


Shaad...

Behad khoob ghazal aur mere dil behad khaas kyunki aapne makhta ke sher mein mujhe yaad farmaaya hai...

Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa



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Behad khoob ghazal aur mere dil behad khaas kyunki aapne makhta ke sher mein mujhe yaad farmaaya hai...

Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
masha allah jo bazm me mere bhai maujood hain... aapko yaad kaise na karte jo dil me rahte hain ghazal me unka zikr aa hi jaata hai....

tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon aapka.. aate rahiyegaa.

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meri khushnaseebi aur ghazal ki kaamyaabi hai jo aapne nacheez ke adna ehsaason me khud ko sukoon paate dekha hai...

aage bhi aapka intzaar rahega...

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