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Post Kya Kya yeh barsaat bahaa kar nikli hai - 20th August 2017, 12:47 PM

sdc ki purkhuloos mehfil ko Sagar Aashna ka adaab !
Ek arse baad sdc pe aana hua hai.

KahiN par ek unwaan tha 'kya kya yeh barsaat bahaa kar nikli hai'. Uss par ek chhoti si koshish pesh kar raha huN, iss ummeed ke sath ke koi kami beshi hone ki surat meiN mehfil se rehnumaayi milegii.


Gar che dil se jaan judaa kar niklii hai
Tiri Khamoshii aas jagaa kar niklii hai

Kal tak jin ko poochh hawaayeiN chalti thiiN
Aandhii unki khaak uDaa kar niklii hai

Koyii toh iss baar rahii hai majboori
Warna woh kab aaNkh churaa kar niklii hai

Parwaane kii jaan toh niklii hai lekin
Mehfil bhar meiN aag lagaa kar niklii hai

ArmaaN thay kuchh, aur makaaN bhi thaa mera
Kya kya yeh barsaat bahaa kar niklii hai


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sdc ki purkhuloos mehfil ko Sagar Aashna ka adaab !
Ek arse baad sdc pe aana hua hai.

KahiN par ek unwaan tha 'kya kya yeh barsaat bahaa kar nikli hai'. Uss par ek chhoti si koshish pesh kar raha huN, iss ummeed ke sath ke koi kami beshi hone ki surat meiN mehfil se rehnumaayi milegii.


Gar che dil se jaan judaa kar niklii hai
Tiri Khamoshii aas jagaa kar niklii hai

Kal tak jin ko poochh hawaayeiN chalti thiiN
Aandhii unki khaak uDaa kar niklii hai

Koyii toh iss baar rahii hai majboori
Warna woh kab aaNkh churaa kar niklii hai

Parwaane kii jaan toh niklii hai lekin
Mehfil bhar meiN aag lagaa kar niklii hai

ArmaaN thay kuchh, aur makaaN bhi thaa mera
Kya kya yeh barsaat bahaa kar niklii hai
Sagar saheb ko madhu ka salaam pahunche...be intehaaa khushi huyi hai aapko mahfil me dekhkar sdc aapka dil se swagat karti hai...ek arse baad aapne bazm me kadam rakhe..par jenaab jo nayab ghazal lekar aaye hain..use padhkar sari shikaytein door ho gayi hain....

Poori ghazal qabil e daad hai ...maqta to bas kya hee kahne waaah!!!
Zor e kalam badhta rahe yahi dua hai..

Aate rahiyega..
Salamat rahein...

Madhu

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sdc ki purkhuloos mehfil ko Sagar Aashna ka adaab !
Ek arse baad sdc pe aana hua hai.

KahiN par ek unwaan tha 'kya kya yeh barsaat bahaa kar nikli hai'. Uss par ek chhoti si koshish pesh kar raha huN, iss ummeed ke sath ke koi kami beshi hone ki surat meiN mehfil se rehnumaayi milegii.


Gar che dil se jaan judaa kar niklii hai
Tiri Khamoshii aas jagaa kar niklii hai

Kal tak jin ko poochh hawaayeiN chalti thiiN
Aandhii unki khaak uDaa kar niklii hai

Koyii toh iss baar rahii hai majboori
Warna woh kab aaNkh churaa kar niklii hai

Parwaane kii jaan toh niklii hai lekin
Mehfil bhar meiN aag lagaa kar niklii hai

ArmaaN thay kuchh, aur makaaN bhi thaa mera
Kya kya yeh barsaat bahaa kar niklii hai
kyaa khoob kamaal ki ghazal huii hai saagar saahab ke padh ke mazaa aa gayaa

wah wahh wahhh ... kya kya ye barsaat baha kar nikli hai , warna wo kab aankh churaa kar niklii hai .... ye ghazal nahii kamaal huaa hai is baar aapki kalam se....
subhaan Allah is nazaaqat o andaaz ko shaad ka salaam...

Aate rahen bazm muntazir hai

Shaad


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29th August 2017, 02:51 PM

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Sagar saheb ko madhu ka salaam pahunche...be intehayi khushi huyi hai aapko mahfil me dekhkar sdc aapka dil se swagat karti hai...ek arse baad aapne bazm me kadam rakhe..par jenaab jo nayab ghazal lekar aaye hain..use padhkar sari shikaytein door ho gayi hain....

Poori ghazal qabil e daad hai ...maqta to bas kya hee kahne waaah!!!
Zor e kalam badhta rahe yahi dua hai..

Aate rahiyega..
Salamat rahein...

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kyaa khoob kamaal ki ghazal huii hai saagar saahab ke padh ke mazaa aa gayaa

wah wahh wahhh ... kya kya ye barsaat baha kar nikli hai , warna wo kab aankh churaa kar niklii hai .... ye ghazal nahii kamaal huaa hai is baar aapki kalam se....
subhaan Allah is nazaaqat o andaaz ko shaad ka salaam...

Aate rahen bazm muntazir hai

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3rd September 2017, 12:47 PM

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sdc ki purkhuloos mehfil ko Sagar Aashna ka adaab !
Ek arse baad sdc pe aana hua hai.

KahiN par ek unwaan tha 'kya kya yeh barsaat bahaa kar nikli hai'. Uss par ek chhoti si koshish pesh kar raha huN, iss ummeed ke sath ke koi kami beshi hone ki surat meiN mehfil se rehnumaayi milegii.


Gar che dil se jaan judaa kar niklii hai
Tiri Khamoshii aas jagaa kar niklii hai

Kal tak jin ko poochh hawaayeiN chalti thiiN
Aandhii unki khaak uDaa kar niklii hai

Koyii toh iss baar rahii hai majboori
Warna woh kab aaNkh churaa kar niklii hai

Parwaane kii jaan toh niklii hai lekin
Mehfil bhar meiN aag lagaa kar niklii hai

ArmaaN thay kuchh, aur makaaN bhi thaa mera
Kya kya yeh barsaat bahaa kar niklii hai
der se aane ki muaafi chaahta hoon par yeh sher tesri baar padhi aur phirse dil pe nashtar se chale...khudaa aapki kalam aur shayri mein yunhi izaafaa karta rahe...



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