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--Khudko akela paati hoon-- - 5th November 2015, 07:10 PM
Hoti hoon bheed se ghiri main har pal har din
Phir kyon khudko main akela paati hoon

Jo hote hain ghaanv hare dil ke mere kabhi
khudhi khudke zakhmo pe marham lagati hoon

Hoti hoon aksar beetin baton ko yaad kar udas mai
Toh sochke aane waale kal main phir muskarati hoon

Toot ta hai jab jab bharosa oonke pyar per se mera
Toh onke kahe wadon se main khudko samjhati hoon

Badh jaaye jab jab bojh zimmedariyon ka mujhpar
pyar ki taaqat ki intihaan khudko mai yaad dilate hoon

Jo naa kar paoo mehsus saath oonka bheed mai main
Phir logon ke beech bhi main khudko akela paati hoon....

-Jiya

Zindagi wahi jise khul ke Jiya jaaye, apne armaanon ko pankh lagaa udhne do...
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6th November 2015, 10:35 AM
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Hoti hoon bheed se ghiri main har pal har din
Phir kyon khudko main akela paati hoon

Jo hote hain ghaanv hare dil ke mere kabhi
khudhi khudke zakhmo pe marham lagati hoon

Hoti hoon aksar beetin baton ko yaad kar udas mai
Toh sochke aane waale kal main phir muskarati hoon

Toot ta hai jab jab bharosa oonke pyar per se mera
Toh onke kahe wadon se main khudko samjhati hoon

Badh jaaye jab jab bojh zimmedariyon ka mujhpar
pyar ki taaqat ki intihaan khudko mai yaad dilate hoon

Jo naa kar paoo mehsus saath oonka bheed mai main
Phir logon ke beech bhi main khudko akela paati hoon....

-Jiya

Dear Jiya...........accha likha hai...ehsaas sacche lge

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6th November 2015, 02:13 PM
bahut khoob likha hai jiya....

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6th November 2015, 02:26 PM
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6th November 2015, 08:39 PM
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Hoti hoon bheed se ghiri main har pal har din
Phir kyon khudko main akela paati hoon

Jo hote hain ghaanv hare dil ke mere kabhi
khudhi khudke zakhmo pe marham lagati hoon

Hoti hoon aksar beetin baton ko yaad kar udas mai
Toh sochke aane waale kal main phir muskarati hoon

Toot ta hai jab jab bharosa oonke pyar per se mera
Toh onke kahe wadon se main khudko samjhati hoon

Badh jaaye jab jab bojh zimmedariyon ka mujhpar
pyar ki taaqat ki intihaan khudko mai yaad dilate hoon

Jo naa kar paoo mehsus saath oonka bheed mai main
Phir logon ke beech bhi main khudko akela paati hoon....

-Jiya
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7th November 2015, 12:33 AM
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Namaste

Aaj tak tumhaari likhi shayri mein pyaar bhare ehsaason ko hi padhaa hai jitnaa bhee padhaa hai tumhe...tum aik bahot hi positive soch rakhti ho...ye bhee pataa hai ehsaas tab dil se baahar aa jaate hain jab khud ko wo cheez mehsoos bhee ho rahi ho...tumne un ehsaason ko achhe se pesh bhee kiyaa hai shayri ke zariye..main bas yahee chaahugaa khushiyaan bani rahen..aur happy happy waala likhti raho..jisse hame pani puri ki party milti rahen


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